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This YA novel loosely retells the rise to power of Wu Zetian in a sci-fi setting that draws from mecha anime. Giant transforming robots are powered by male and female qi, with the male pilot typically taking control and draining all the female pilot's qi until she dies. Wu Zetian is a teen girl whose sister died that way, and now she's out for revenge. But when she infiltrates the pilots' world as a new recruit, she learns that her own qi is so powerful that she can turn the tables on the men she's paired with.

This book was not for me. Probably the biggest reason is that it is relentlessly loud and bombastic—it's wall-to-wall epic mecha battles, interpersonal violence, dangerous situations, and dramatic reveals, with few to no quiet moments. It's like the volume of the book is perpetually dialed up to eleven. Between this and the fact that the characters frequently spell out in dialogue exactly what everything means and what we're supposed to take away from it, I felt like I was being given no room to think. A thing just happened! It means this! Boom, bang, alarm bells, another battle is starting!! It exhausted me.

I was also bothered by a late plot turn in which
spoilers (cn: torture)the protagonists use torture to extract information from another character and it works. This is how they find out important, accurate details that are necessary for the story to resolve, and there is no indication that there's any problem with it, either morally or pragmatically. In other aspects the protagonists are portrayed as pretty messed up but basically on the side of good, so I do not think this was the way to go.


I did appreciate that the book is very queer, and that there is canon poly instead of a jealousy-laden love triangle. But I would have liked those things much better in a different book.

Date: 21 Aug 2024 12:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] wearing_tearing
I had pretty much the same thoughts about this one :(

Date: 21 Aug 2024 12:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ambyr
I haven't read this (and probably won't, because it doesn't sound like exactly my thing), but I would react similarly to the spoiler bit. My kingdom for more torture trope subversion: if authors must write torture, I'd like to see it not working. Give me more characters who act on information obtained under torture and end up utterly fucked, because hey, it turns out that information isn't reliable at all.

Date: 21 Aug 2024 02:56 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] genarti
Yeah, agreed. And I like epic mecha battles! I actually really enjoyed a lot of the mecha stuff! The mecha battles and mecha aesthetics and the over-the-top mecha fashion wedding thing were a large part of why I came out of it with mixed feelings rather than purely declaring that it didn't work for me. But everything is happening so much all of the time, yeah. And totally agreed about the torture plot point.

I also was bothered by how there are no sympathetic female characters other than our protagonist (who iirc was in fact strongly implied to be at least somewhat genderqueer/nonbinary, but in a society without words for that, so interpretations may vary). When we get someone who seems like they are, lol whoops never mind! Actually she's a bitch too!! And narratively confirmed, not just from our protagonist's biased standpoint. Admittedly the sympathetic male characters are also relatively few, but in a book that's all about fighting back against the patriarchy, I found it glaring.

Date: 22 Aug 2024 05:19 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] genarti
Right, the sister is sympathetic, but she's also fridged before the book starts and doesn't get a whole lot of personality. And there's one other pilot who briefly seems like she might be sympathetic, but then never mind, no she isn't! It just stuck in my craw, and yeah, muddles the themes -- who are we even fighting for? Nameless, personality-less doomed victim damsels, or what?

And then the very end definitely didn't work for me. I'm glad I read it to have an opinion, but whenever the sequel comes out, assuming it does, I don't know that I'll read it.

Date: 21 Aug 2024 07:35 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sophia_sol
godddd I hate when torture is portrayed as working in fiction. It gets my back up like nothing else!

Date: 21 Aug 2024 10:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] rachelmanija
I didn't like the torture either. It was in-character so I didn't mind it happening, but I'd have liked for it to not have been the correct/useful thing to do.

Date: 23 Aug 2024 07:22 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] frausorge
Reading a bit about RL Wu Zetian's history makes me wonder why anyone thought it needed mecha battles added - her life sounds plenty dramatic and violent as it was! But in any case, what you say here about the novel sounds deeply unappealing, so thanks for the heads up. (Does give me an opportunity to trot out this icon, though.)

Date: 23 Aug 2024 09:18 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] wrote_and_writ
This book was definitely a lot. I appreciated how not-nice the characters were as a change from some of the other things I'd been reading, but it wasn't a relaxing read for sure. I'm gonna read the sequel though.

Date: 24 Aug 2024 09:04 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] wrote_and_writ
That blurb is right! It's one of those books that I liked and am glad to have read and will read the sequel, but I would hesitate to recommend it to people, even with a whole lot of warnings.

Date: 15 Sep 2024 02:40 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lokifan
the protagonists use torture to extract information from another character and it works. This is how they find out important, accurate details that are necessary for the story to resolve, and there is no indication that there's any problem with it, either morally or pragmatically

Noooooo! No I hate it. I hate it when Avengers do it (Nick Fury, I'm looking at you in particular) and I've never forgotten the articles about how 24 was cited by people joining the CIA to show torture works.

Have debated reading this book based on the mixed, interesting reviews; thanks!

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