@theincredibleibex asked:
Angry Black Woman?
I’m writing a story that is sort of a paranormal mystery as seen through the eyes of several high school aged characters. The main character, Javion, is a young black kid with an interest in science and the paranormal that his mother very very subtly discourages. His father was a paranormal investigator who worked for the government on cases involving a wide range of things and he was very successful, with his books on debunking the usual pseudosciences people used for such things meeting wide acclaim. During an investigation in a remote part of Washington state, however, he vanished, the government refusing to give answers as to the exact circumstances to his family.
As a result Javion is both determined to bring him back and devoted to being the kind of scientific mind his father was, the kind who helped people and exposed frauds. His mother desperately does not want him going into a field of study wherein eldritch abominations are a very real threat. Along the way in his investigation he runs into several people who either assume his father is around but a deadbeat or not around at all, something that tests his patience.This is where I’ve hit some snags. I don’t want to write his mother as an angry black woman. She’s just scared for her only child’s safety after losing her husband to the same field of study.
Absent Black Father?
I don’t want to play into the absent black father trope because it’s not like he’s absent willingly at all and there is the possibility, albeit slim, that he could be saved and brought back.
‘Stereotypical’ Black Name?
And I really don’t want to have accidentally given Javion a stereotypical name - I picked his first name after a black professor I had with the same given name. Basically I just want to know if the plot is inherently racist and what to avoid to keep it from being so.
Is Javion a “Stereotypical” Black name?
This name doesn’t come off as “stereotypical” to me. I’ve never heard of the name, but I like the sound of Javion and I don’t see a problem with it either. Read Black Characters: On Stereotypical Names for what we have to say on stereotypical Black names.
Basically, there’s more of a problem that what are seen as Black-associated names are demonized by society more so than people having the names themselves.
Is it problematic that my Black boy’s father vanishes?
The father’s disappearance is clearly linked to his work, and is not a case of “deadbeat Black Father.” I really like the possibility of him coming back, though.
“Along the way in his investigation he runs into several people who either assume his father is around but a deadbeat or not around at all, something that tests his patience.”
Now, people’s assumptions about J’s father are prejudice micro-aggressions. I wouldn’t slather them on heavily if racism is not the focus of your work, but it’s realistic for Javion to face these sort of assumptions and the frustration that goes with it, so nice touch.
Is my concerned Black mother an Angry Black Woman?
From your description Javion’s mom comes across as a loving and concerned mother who doesn’t want to lose her son in the same way she lost her husband. Even if we are to see her frustration in her son for going deeper on a path that is clearly dangerous, i’m still not seeing where we are getting ABW from that. She’d have every right to be upset about this. Black women should be allowed to present emotion without being summed up to the typical Angry Black Woman so do not be afraid to show the range of emotions that this mother feels in this situation.
Another thing; with the father missing, she has been made a single Black mother which is another BW stereotype. Is she still shown as desirable? Is she dating, engaging or potentially to engage in a new relationship? Does she have close companionship besides her son with peers? Hell, does that “helpful” lovestruck neighbor try to put the moves on her ever since Javion’s father disappeared? Any number of these additions would help deter the stereotype and any potential desexualization.
~Mod Colette