tex: (*TEAM*)
[personal profile] tex
Title: Done
Rating: PG
Pairing: McShep
Word Count: 22


My First McShep drabblette Jr. so please be kind. Enjoy.




Rodney sat up in time to watch the door slide shut.

"He didn't even say goodbye," he said to the empty room.

Date: 2008-01-26 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lallybroch.livejournal.com
DUDE. I LOVE YOU.

Date: 2008-01-26 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lallybroch.livejournal.com
ZOMG BRAIN TWIN

Date: 2008-01-26 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
It was my first so -- did it hold you interest okay?

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Date: 2008-01-26 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geeklite.livejournal.com
A++ WOULD READ AGAIN

Date: 2008-01-26 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
*whew* Thank you, sweetie! Glad you liked.

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Date: 2008-01-26 12:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dovil.livejournal.com
See, I would have gone for 'Suddenly, John and Rodney horribly DIED', but regardless in 22 words you broke my widdle heart.

You have taken on the drabblette Jnr and you have prevailed.

Date: 2008-01-26 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
I appreciate that. Its not as easy as it looks!

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Date: 2008-01-26 12:56 am (UTC)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (girlonbench by Corcos)
From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
*gasps* It's a masterpiece!

Date: 2008-01-26 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked. It's unbetaed so I was a little nervous. Thanks!

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Date: 2008-01-26 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clear-as-blood.livejournal.com
Pure genius. Are you sure you've never done this before?

Date: 2008-01-26 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
No. And I probably won't do it again. Too nerve-wracking.

Date: 2008-01-26 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chopchica.livejournal.com
Yours made mine feel so long and unwieldy! I'll never be as good of an artist as you! NEVER!

Maybe I should try doing this ten times a day! Surely that'll make me improve!

Date: 2008-01-26 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Aw, you make me blush. And practice does make perfect, right??

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Date: 2008-01-26 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cranberryink.livejournal.com
OMG SEQUEL PLZ.

Date: 2008-01-26 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Oh, no way. I'm emotionally exhausted!

Date: 2008-01-26 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emrinalexander.livejournal.com
OMG! This totally parallels the story-ette that I am currently writing!

"I seem to be talking to myself," John mused.

We must be like, twin souls, or something! Only I think mines too long and probably won't hold anybody's attention, darn it.

Date: 2008-01-26 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Bwahaha! If only I'd known, we could have posted at the same time!

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Date: 2008-01-26 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
*frowns*

A McShep drabblette Jr.

Date: 2008-01-26 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maxinemayer.livejournal.com
Would be good as a haiku, too, thusly:

Rodney watched the door slide shut. Empty room. "Didn't even say goodbye."

Love, max

Re: A McShep drabblette Jr.

Date: 2008-01-26 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
No, don't say that. I value all feedback, real or imagined! *hugs*

Date: 2008-01-26 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purna.livejournal.com
Someone's been very naughty. :)

Date: 2008-01-26 02:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
*sighs* I know. I really should have had this betaed.

Date: 2008-01-26 02:54 am (UTC)
callmeri: wwx and lwj smiling at the end of The Untamed (Shep Involved)
From: [personal profile] callmeri
*snerk*

You guys are AWESOME.

Date: 2008-01-26 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
You liked it, right? *chews fingernails*

Date: 2008-01-26 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aesc.livejournal.com
MARRY ME I WILL HAVE YOUR VERY SHORT BABIES.

Date: 2008-01-26 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Eeeee! Only if it's not a church wedding. I hate long ceremonies. &hearts

Date: 2008-01-26 03:11 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (John behind bars by Crysothemis)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
I can't - how can I ever hope to compete with this?

*eschews writing as a possible career path because of your brilliance*

Date: 2008-01-26 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
No, sweetie, don't do that. There's room for all of us. Well, some room.

Date: 2008-01-26 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilac-way.livejournal.com
The symbolism is very powerful, what with the closing door, and the goodbye and the empty room. Would you maybe let me do the DVD commentary for this?

Date: 2008-01-26 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
*beams* I'd be honored!

Date: 2008-01-26 03:16 am (UTC)
ext_1911: (J&R S3 promo (faith-girl222))
From: [identity profile] telesilla.livejournal.com
Powerfully evocative!

Date: 2008-01-26 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
*blushes* You do me too much honor. Or something.

Date: 2008-01-26 04:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimsonclad.livejournal.com
TRULY

GENIUS

Date: 2008-01-26 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Awww, stop it. It was just a little thing. *g*

Date: 2008-01-26 04:09 am (UTC)
reginagiraffe: Stick figure of me with long wavy hair and giraffe on shirt. (Default)
From: [personal profile] reginagiraffe
I loved it! So heart-breaking!

Date: 2008-01-26 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
I know. Poor Rodney!

Date: 2008-01-26 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] argosy.livejournal.com
Amazing. I read it twice before I felt able to comment.

Date: 2008-01-26 04:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
That is a high compliment indeed. *squeezes you*

Date: 2008-01-26 04:16 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (Hips!)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] luvhandlz wants you to know you were an inspiration. Have a look.

Date: 2008-01-26 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
[livejournal.com profile] luvhandlz gives me too much credit. Talent like that stands alone.

Date: 2008-01-27 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Hee! Maybe put it on your "To Read" list?

Date: 2008-01-27 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cobweb-diamond.livejournal.com
1. Heartrending. Seriously.
2. Apparently I have missed whatever is inspiring people to write 1-sentence parody fic. ???
3. I'm going to reread it again, now. There's so many interlocking layers of plot I feel I have to go over it several times to understand the true significance.

Date: 2008-01-27 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tex.livejournal.com
Aw, you're very sweet. I appreciate that. Thank you!

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