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Quillology With Haya

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A writing advice blog for authors, by authors ✍️ Find me on TikTok and Insta: @hayatheauthor WIP: The Traitor's Throne | YA fantasy 🪄
Published: Cremated Chains | Thriller

We need more ugly MCs.

Stop making this a trait reserved for that rat-like sidekick or terrible villain. The class clown isn't the only one who can be fat. The nerd isn't the only one who can get acne.

Give your main characters thin hair, bad teeth, acne, body acne, extra fingers, weird facial hair, bad haircuts, bad fashion, weirdly big feet or hands or foreheads.

Make them weirdly tall or short, make them too fat or too thin. Make their face shape something except 'circular but in a cute way' or diamond/square/heart. Make them have a double chin or sickly transparent skin or short sweaty hands.

Especially if they're adolescents! Especially if they're from a poor/polluted area because no one who grew up drinking toxic water around mines and trash and rubble comes out of it with clear skin and shiny hair their whole life!

Make‼️Your‼️Main‼️Characters‼️Ugly‼️

And make your readers love them anyway

Do you have any advice on writing about setting or environments. I’m writing a scene for my book but I have no idea how to start it. It starts with a man walking through a cityscape ( think like cyber punk and futuristic but also like cassette punk). That’s what I’m kinda aiming for. Used to be very good at this but I guess I’ve just gotten rusty 💀

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Hi! So what I usually do is think of why the environment is important to be mentioned in the scene. If your scene is a more 'active' scene then dont start by environmental description, rather you could start with inner dialogue/monologue that ties to it.

It's like 7 in the morning so excuse the poor writing but here's an example:

A had become a laughing stock. [sentences that emphasis how/why]. Even the city seemed to mock him for his stupidity; the screech of the electric train sounding too similar to fanatic cackling for his liking.

(Obviously yknow be more detailed than the above sentences). Then a sentence that connects it to your actual scene, continuing the above example it could be like:

Or maybe that was just B. She had been silently trailing after him ever since their narrow escape from the warehouse, but the slight curve of her lips spoke volumes. They stretched wider as he stumbled over a stray pebble; too lost in thought to notice it. [she says something].

But if your scene is more like he's walking through it with the intent of getting somewhere usually only mention what's either relevant to the plot (foreshadowing wise) or to a character. Or something like 'he's so late but this swarm of robot technicians talking loudly about xyz are walking really slowly in front of him'. Something that 1. makes his emotions/situation clear while 2. still being 'in the moment'.

You could also start with an active scene (like him talking to someone) then use that as an excuse for scene-building. An easy way to do it is use something he sees/hears/smells and connect it to a character or scene.

Like for example A is walking through [lane], gets to his destination, then maybe he notices B has a red flower in her hair just like the ones the street hawker was selling at [lane]. You could also use this for character development without info-dumping, something like 'of course someone like B would buy from the poor man who A spared but a glance to'.

I've rambled quite a bit, but I hope this helped! If you want I'd be happy to review an actual snippet and give feedback (honestly I've been meaning to get back into beta reading since a while).

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List of Interesting Latin Phrases

A list I made just to satisfy my vain cravings for resonating mottos for a secret society I'm working on. Enjoy!

  • abi in malam crucem: to the devil with you!
  • ad astra per ardua: to the star by steep paths
  • ad augusta per angusta: to honors through difficulties
  • aegis fortissima virtus: virue is the strongest shield
  • amor vincit amnia: love conquers all things
  • animo et fide: by courage and faith
  • arbitrium est judicium: an award is a judgement
  • aut mors aut victoria: either death or victory
  • aut vincere aut mori: either victory or death
  • bello ac pace paratus: prepared in war and peace
  • bibamus, moriendum est: let us drink, death is certain (Seneca and Elder)
  • bonis omnia bona: all things are good to the good
  • cede nullis: yield to no one
  • cito maturum, cito putridum: soon ripe, soon rotten
  • consensus facit legem: consent makes law
  • data fata secutus: following what is decreed by fate (Virgil)
  • durum telum necessitas: necessity is a hrad weapson
  • dux vitae ratio: reason is the guide of life
  • e fungis nati homines: men born of mushrooms
  • ego sum, ergo omnia sunt: I am, therefore all things are
  • pulvis et umbra sumus: we are but dust and shadow
  • quae amissa salva: things lost are safe
  • timor mortis morte pejor: the fear of death is worse than death
  • triumpho morte tam vita: I triumph in death as in life
  • tu vincula frange: break your chains
  • vel prece vel pretio: for either love or for money
  • verbera, sed audi: whip me, but hear me
  • veritas temporis filia: truth is the daughter of time
  • vero nihil verius: nothing is truer than the truth
  • vestigia nulla restrorsum: foosteps do not go backward
  • victus vincimus: conquered, we conquer (Plautus)
  • sica inimicis: a gger to his enemies
  • sic vita humana: thus is human life

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Reference: <Latin for the Illiterati: a modern guide to an ancient language> by Jon R. Stone, second edition, 2009

I miss being in love with words and beautiful prose. I miss typing out stories so enchanting they twist from ink to life, painting entire worlds with each stroke of the pen. I miss the thrill of the written word, the shiver of excitement that accompanied a newfound plot point.

But I fear that adoration has been eclipsed by a thirst for adulation—an ache for worldly acclaim that devours me whole, leaving behind the rotten carcass of a linguistic soul. A soul long buried and burned, laid to rest in the forgotten purgatory of withered pages and blotted ink.

For what good are words if they are never read? What good are stories if they are never told? What good is an author if they are never known?