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A jam submission

Spin the NewsView game page

Help the very "Honest" Senator Longwood get re-elected
Submitted by RavioBoi, Cairo.the.Crow — 36 minutes, 3 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Seriousness#564.3244.324
Creativity & Theme#634.4124.412
Overall#1993.9593.959
Enjoyment#2743.8823.882
Visuals#5783.8533.853
Audio#7423.3243.324

Ranked from 34 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Game Engine

Godot

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Submitted

Very funny game, and my grammar is abysmal but news worthy :D

I have a little sound problems, its crackling. But that can be random, as I had it also on other games randomly.

Submitted

Grammar: Abysmal! Higher ups’ opinion: Absolutely incredible! I love the game. I did notice that if I don’t fulfill the goal, sometimes I still get really good ratings (e.g. the goal is to make Senator Longwood the hero, but my phrase was “Study insists puppies hate dogs” and still had a good score and no mention about Senator Longwood”, which make sme think it doesn’t matter that much).

I also don’t seem to see continuity from a mini-game to another, or any kind of highscore or total score. It would be cool if we had to make some amount of money at the end of the day to survive, and have some sort of connected narrative.

Lastly, I’d like to see some accessibility added to the game, like: better contrast and readability for the buttons, and an option to not have the newspaper rotating like that, because it makes my eyes feel dizzy. Or a safer animation that doesn’t make all that spinny spinny.

Lovely take on the “spin to win” theme. Are you thinking of developing more on this? It would be so great to see more!

Developer

Yeah, its hard to account for accessibility when you are under a time crunch and neither your developer or artist struggles with much color blindness or motion sickness. That would probably be the second thing I work on should I turn this into a full fledged game, the first of course getting the game's grammar and ratings systems from "Good enough for a game Jam" to "Good".

The game actually does keep track of a total high score and that is how it decides what ending you get. Unfortunately that is in the background hidden from the player, may change that later.

Submitted

Ah, I felt this was just an endless game. I might continue playing, then!

And if you continue working on this, I hope we can also have more characters and diversity in the news to fiddle with (at least in my first 3-4 prompts, this Senator was there in half of them or more). I love the concept and the implementation is fun, so keep it up. :)

Submitted

This was really cool!  Maybe the most creative use of the theme.  The animations were awesome.

Submitted

This game was awesome, very creative idea, though I struggled quite a bit to figure out the right sentences, the animations are lovely, and the news are pretty funny.

Submitted (1 edit)

Bruuuhh to find this meaning of "spin", congrtas!! Great game. Had a lot of fun trying to spin the news and make Senator Longwood a hero of his town! Very well done visuals and animations. I am so impressed by the system. How do you check for grammar and most important how do you check the meaning of the sentences?? Super duper game. Congrats again and I hope you will develop it and make a great succes with it! Hope you won't check grammar of this comment hahaha.

Developer(+1)

I can try my best to explain it. 

For the Grammar: So firstly each word is assigned a part of speech based on what part of speech it generally is.  Words such as to are assigned as a "preposition" despite the fact that to can technically be used as part of a verb to be. From there it is simply a matter of calculating whether each part of speech was in a valid position. Like a hinted at earlier this system wasn't perfect. I didn't account for if a word was singular or plural, which obviously changes what pronouns and state of being words should be allowed, and as I said some words like to can be different parts of speech based on context. That's why I made the grammar system very forgiving where it needs to flag three or more mistakes before they start to count against you.

For the Scoring: That was way trickier to code since context is so important. Ultimately I gave each noun or verb an either positive or negative value depending on whether it generally has positive or negative connotations: Kicked given a negative value since you normally kick things you don't like. For adjectives, pronouns, and prepositions I gave them a negative value if they negate the word they are associated with Not being the most obvious example. Once that is all decided I multiplied each noun by adjacent adjectives, each verb by adjacent adverbs,  and prepositional phrases were calculated separately. Then I added up all the nouns, verbs, and prepositional phrases. This system works about 60% of the time which isn't ideal but it was the best I could figure out.

That's about all there is to it. If I were to continue developing it I would probably redo these systems from the ground up, or find a way to implement a professional grammar checker, since those are not too hard to find on the market.

Submitted

This is impressive. I may be mistaken but it seems as you are a big fan of linguistics. To come up of system like that for a game haha. It's good that you could make such a "simplified" sytem for english language because of its rules. My first language would be a menace for trying to create a system for chechking correct grammar haha.

Submitted(+1)

That was a good spin on the news! All the visuals and audio fits well together. The starting animation was a nice addition as well. Good work to the team!

Submitted(+1)

First of all I love the handdrawn art and animations. Really cute looking. The game concept is cool, too. It made me feel very corrupt and evil spinning the stories. The execution of the game mechanic needs a bit more polishing I think but I can imagine how difficult it is to account for all sorts of sentence structures the player can come up with. I got quite bad scores for what I thought were good sentences. The gameplay is fun tho with the intro animation and the sentence being shown on the newspaper after each round it felt very polished overall.

Submitted

This is very creative! This has potential to be its own game. I saw that there are more ways to spin the story which is really cool and has replay potential. I am curious on a technical level since I am still new to this game dev thing like how that works is there a program that looks at the words in the background and if the sentence fits the objective it works or is there a list with potential answers that it cross reference it. Because it does give you scores and grades and if its abysmal or not so something is checking it. Again really cool and even cooler that something complex can be done in a week! 

Submitted

this is genuinely so clever!! really interesting idea here. only real feedback is that i found having one headline a little restricting. it could be fun to have 2 or 3 headlines that are all variations on the same news that you can combine and turn into new phrases. really, really clever and i can't imagine how complicated this was to execute

Submitted

left another comment on the actual twitch page but wow this is so creative and fun! definitely the best jam entry I've tried so far

Submitted

seen a few games about "spinning the truth" for this theme, but i think this one handled the gameplay the best! easily gave the most freedom to the player, and thus allowed for more opportunity for silliness: nice work :D

Submitted

Such a creative concept. Nice art. Super fun idea to twist the news around. Really have it out for Hyneman. It would be neat if you had a little box for conjunctions and adverbs to help build more sentences with good grammar as sometimes you get really limited, especially if you are trying to fit the prompt

Developer(+1)

That's actually a really good idea, if I ever do something like this again, I'll have to add those.

Submitted(+3)

What an amazing twist on the theme, to "spin" words to change the meaning of the news, just like newspapers do. Congratulations on the game; it is amazing!

Submitted

Very original. Liked the idea. Fun game.

But why Hornet's head is red?

Developer(+2)

That's actually the completely original character Rornet from Knollow Hight: Rilk Rong

Submitted(+1)

Art is great as well as sounds and the mechanic itself, creating so difficult things is incredible

Submitted(+3)

I love these kinds of games where the player can use their creativity in wacky ways. Very fun to make silly sentences. even though the scoring was a little wacky sometimes, but I saw you mentioned that it's very complex to make it work. Still very fun! 

Submitted(+1)

Delightful little game! Even for its own sake (no scoring) it is fun to rearrange the sentences! 

Submitted(+1)

That’s a really interesting and fun spin (pun intended) on the theme, I love it! The visuals are really charming as well, well done.

Submitted(+1)

interesting approach on the theme and the visuals are cool! as a non-native english speaker, it was a little hard, but not unplayable. congrats on your game!

Developer(+1)

Thanks, I mean my game does not have the best grammar check system anyway, so I would take it's judgments on your grammar with a grain of salt.

Submitted(+1)

I think it's a very elegant and well-executed idea. I must also say that the animation is very smooth. Great job!

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