I really enjoyed the game! It feels really polished and the overall theme, story works out really well. The concept of cookies/biscuits and stealing data from a company's server along with the stealth aspects all flow together seamlessly for an immersive experience. Some thoughts:
- the stealth aspect of it felt really well done and feels fair/just the right range
- the noise bar seems a bit negligible as it seems more about crouch/distance more so than noise but maybe just needs some more tweaking or adjustments
- there were some minor bugs where i was caught but the guard was facing away
- the music after obtaining the cookie is great but it seems a bit disjoint because it sounds like the alarms are going off and im being chased but the guards are still going through their normal motions. Maybe you can pick up the pace of the song a bit to increase anxiety but not sound like people are coming after you even though they're not
- there doesn't seem to be any risk/benefits getting more cookies than just the one but maybe can build that into the story more. It is interesting though how getting more cookies actually impedes my field of view maybe can play into that a bit.
Overall very enjoyable and well polished. Great job on the submission!