msmarvel1 wrote in gravi_badfic 😡irritated

Okay, fine. I'll post ... :-P

Found on 27th_precinct, directed to it by ambrosewulf

Title: Late Realizations
Author: mitmiya
Pairings: Shiro (Shuichi/Hiro)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Shuichi realizes something he should've found out earlier.
Disclaimer: Not mine, otherwise I wouldn't be writing them doing stuff... I'd be watching!! XD
Warnings: Vol. 4 Spoilers. Rape is mentioned.


Despite her stupid name for the Shuichi/Hiro pairing, it's actually a well-written fic. The author clearly has talent, even if she hasn't yet realized that referring to Hiro as "the taller man" is an ugly cliche. However, she inexplicably believes that during a gangbang is the perfect time to realize your OMG!OneTwooLuve!

That and there's this ...

Through the pain, all he could think of was Bad Luck's guitarist, his best friend and as hands tugged at him, he wished they were Hiro's.

The rapists' hands. That's disgusting. X-(