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Hi Korgen!!! 

I left a comment on your new game call Yuri is a Bright Spark... Whose Fuse Never Lit

( if you didn't notice it.. Please check it out!!! ) 

I hope you like it!!! 

Hey there friends!!!

Remember me? 

( I the one who send you game call ice tower :).. Funtime-party-crown-circus too ) 

( edit heere I might give you a long text.. And there might be some error.. where I might said something Dosen't make sense.. If that's happened.. I am sorry for that.. I try my best to make sense and be honest as much as I can.. And being positive too.. Also I hope these feedback I sent to you or something like that... Dosen't hurt your feelings.. I just want to see you improve.. Doing so.. I be honest.. But I also be positive too.. So take your time reading.. And I hope you like it!!! ) 

Is been a while 

Isn't it? 

I have 3 I think best one I made so far 

But before I share to you 

I want to give you feedback on your new games 

Know if I have to compared to your first to new games

Is improve a lot more 

I give your games first ( which call is Neve na distancia - Snow in the distance ( or Snow in the distance for English name version.. I think? )  a 10/3

Because there some pros and cons about Snow in the distance

pros at Snow in the distance

The game looks nice!!! 

( is like the game looks like a 16 bits.. In good way!!!.. And Colors fit pretty good at this games!!! ) 

Story is pretty interesting? 

( I don't fully get what the story of this games try to say.. But is pretty interesting.. To teleport around the place to tell story ) 

Cons 

( There not really game play.. Like Yeah.. There some story.. But After that.. There not much to do.. There no win or lose at this games.. ( I know there house you go to.. Where.. I think you beat the game?.. But I don't know if that win scene.. Since you just teleport back after you press z ).. Which big problem for someone who likes to come back to game for game play ) 

Also 

There either 

( English language to read at one of them En blown colors text? ) 

And others 

I think is different language ( Bn blown text ) 

( Like probably Brazil language ) 

Be better if player can pick  one of them language at main menu

( and Stay that way.. Unless player changes at main menu ) 

And also.. 80% probably Brazil language around the game ( even if you didn't pick that That.. And that problem.. Because I have no idea what the game say to me.. Even though might be something cool.. I might miss it.. Because I don't know anything about Brazil :) ) 

And sounds effect would be nice

I give it 10/3 

Because of looks this games looks pretty nice 

Plus 

The way the game tells story 

Is pretty interesting 

( Even although.. I wish I could understand it ) 

( Oh by the way.. The music in this game is pretty good :D ) 

 Plus.. This is your first game jam 

So.. I don't expect to be best games ever 

But overall 

Pretty okay start game jam 

Not the best 

But can work with some improvement 

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Know let's talk about your new game call is Yuri is a Bright Spark... Whose Fuse Never Lit ( Or for short name.. Lets call it Yuri for know )

Know this game 

Improved some things than your first game 

Let's start pros first 

Pros:

I like how you're ears is main focus 

And there 3 minigames

One them is pretty interesting 

( I think you have to hear if the sound loud.. Or not.. If not.. Then you can press space ) 

I do kinda like it.. But dose have problems 

But I say it when we come to there 

There 2 minigames 

Where you have to listen which star sounds coming from.. And whatever you hear star sounds coming from.. You need to press opposition keyboard 

( like for example.. If star sounds play on left.. You need to press right keyboard.. But.. If star sounds play on right.. You need to press left keyboard ) 

( So basically.. Every time you hear sounds.. Star coming from right.. Or left.. You need to press keyboard the opposite where star come from ) 

Is pretty interesting idea 

And the game looks pretty nice 

( Even though.. You can see only few things.. ( Like for example.. At main menu.. And purple glow things.. It shows when you start game.. Is either be headphone.. Or star.. Or more ) 

Although I can't remove points just for not showing much

Since this game jam is about hearing main focus than seeing 

So I wouldn't judge for it 

( Also by the way..my favorite part is the cat jump that person.. And that person said.. Get off me!!!.. Or something like that.. I find That part kinda funny!!! ) 

( Plus The game over scene is pretty interesting too.. Not going to lie :) ) 

Here some things you improve your new game from your first game 

You pick language at the main menu ( Instead inside the game.. Which is way better doing this way.. And less messing.. In my opinion :) ) 

Game play is improved too ( Like there actually game play.. Where you can lose or win despite how you play.. There story too.. But main focus is game play.. And to me.. Is more improved than a first game.. Because game play is more important than story.. At least to me :) ) 

And much more clear.. And less mess than your first game ( Like is clear what Is your goal.. In this game.. Like.. At first game.. You just follow story.. But it is kinda confusing.. Especially when there others language.. And.. Is kinda unknown if player doing rights or not.. But in this game.. Is much clear what is your goal.. Know what I understand this game.. I think your goal is to cut off bomb.. Or something like that.. By completing the game at 400 second.. While also You need to make sure to avoid getting any wrong choices.. Or else.. You lose 10 seconds.. It is very.. Important.. To save time.. Especially to the end of game.. And the idea is pretty interesting.. And game play can be fun ) 

However despite that. 

The game is not perfect 

There was some cons too 

Like for example 

Cons:

1 I still don't fully understand 

( Like..voice person acting.. Wasn't 100% clear What try to say.. even when i try to read text.. I still feel like Little bit lost.. I think most of time.. I was either guessing how the game work.. Or I try to understand the game by myself by just simply.. Playing the game.. Know lucky.. The game was kinda simple enough to understand how work most of the time.. However.. Dosen't mean we should just avoid that problem.. To avoid text being little bit confused ( Or voice person ) try make English more clear and understand it ( Especially at important part.. Also.. Dosen't have to person read English better.. Since I imagined that be very hard.. And that fine!!!.. Dosen't have to be person.. Really.. As long I can read text.. And understand it.. I don't see a problem ) I think best is do is.. Make it more more clear.. Try make text short as much you can.. And try make it English main focus( if player press English language ) .. Since I still see some other languages ) 

Know as for minigames 

Well.. They have some cons too 

Let's talk about them 

2 minigames is not 100% clear 

( like the first one.. Was kinda clear.. I think you need to do is.. Listen deep sounds.. When you hear deep sounds.. You need to press space.. That at least I think how it works.. But.. When come at the end.. Is kinda confusing.. Like some sounds is not 100% deeply.. Yet.. Is still count?.. Or something like that.. Like I don't know.. Maybe make it more clearly.. Instead of this.. 

It is pretty okay minigames.. But could be better ) 

( second minigames.. Could work.. And I think is one my favorite about this games.. This 2 minigames Is basically about you have to listen where star side comeing from.. You have to press keyboard to different where star coming from.. Is pretty interesting.. I was confused at first.. But once I figure out.. By try to understand the text.. And play the game to figure out myself too.. Is start to be fun.. However.. Sometimes when I hear.. Star made sound to the left.. I press right..or.. Star made sound to the right.. I press left.. The game say wrong.. Even although I suppose to do that.. By press opposite where star coming from.. It can be pretty confused if player didn't figure out they need to do that in order to win..Is either bug.. Or sound star make is not clear.. You might fix if any these problems in the game.. Because this mingame is pretty fun once you understand.. Despite being some problem there ) 

( third minigames.. Is.. My last favorite part about this game.. And reason is that.. Because.. It feel like completely luck.. Know I could be wrong.. And could be because I didn't understand how it works.. But Dosen't means i won't share my problems with the games.. Know phone guy ( the one try tell you how to play to every minigames ) tell you you need to keep press keyboard ( left, up, right, and probably down ) and keep do That until I win before time run out.. Know that sounds pretty simple.. But the problem is.. The time you have.. Move fast!!!..like very fast.. Meaning if you little time at the end.. Is pretty much game over.. Know If that was only problem.. I won't have problems.. But there more sadly.. Remember I said the 3 mingame make you just key press keyboard where you just hope you getting somewhere.. Well.. That is problem.. Because time moves so fast.. And you literally just keep press up or down or left or right keyboard.. Hoping to succeed beat this game by luck.. Because there no way to tell if you close to exit or not.. Because.. Literally almost everything is black .. Time moves way too fast than necessary.. Dosen't make it better either.. Which I am not big fan of it.. Because There pretty much nothing you can dk.. Other than keep press keyboard.. Hoping you can win by luck. And before you ask.. Yes.. I know if you continue keep press keyboard.. You might get somethings where time.. However.. It pause for like few seconds.. While also time moves extra fast.. So I don't think that's will help Either way.. I think if you maybe add 3 mingame like.. If you hear something very close to you.. You have to press left mouse immediately.. Something that focus on skill.. Rather than luck.. Which is reason why I not big fan of it. Because this part of this games.. Focus on luck more than skill.. And maybe make pause time more.. And slowly down fast time.. Because believe in me when I I say try to beat this game.. But no matter time.. I always lose at the end.. Because of some cons.. Where I lose some time in this game.. Because is either clear if I did it.. Right or wrong.. Or not.. Which can be feel unfair when you playing this game... And not 100% if you doing something wrong or the games.. And more problems I said before.. And maybe add more than 400 seconds.. Because I do feel like is little time for me to check if is right one or not.. Especially when is the time very important at the end )

But over all 

Is pretty good game :) 

Despite what I Said minutes ago 

It is pretty fun game 

Where you need to be careful and smart be about it. 

Otherwise is game over if you just try finish the game as fast as possible 

( Especially if you have little time ) 

Yes 

Is not perfect game 

It dose have some problem 

But improved way more than you're first game 

To game play 

And more where you improve. 

That why I give your Yuri game 10/5.5 

The game dose have some moments game where the game is pretty fun 

Is just need to improve some things.. And fix some bug 

( Like when I press enter immediately at the start of the game.. The phone call didn't go away immediately.. You might need to fix that ) 

And maybe add something new or try improve more than first one 

( Especially at last minigames ) 

And game be good to go!!! 

Know I done giving you a feedback and more 

I want to show you 3 protect where I truly proud of!!!! 

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First I proud of call kill or be killed Mario exe game!!! 

I not 100% sure if you did play the game or not 

If not

Please check out!!! 

Is game where I truly proud of 

( Not just because of the game is scared.. But also because game play.. And so much more ) 

So if you haven't play the game yet

Try out right now!!!! 

You play it on ichio ( by downloading ) 

https://itch.io/jam/scream-jam-2025/rate/3891747 

Or play it on gd.games ( Where you can just play It immediately without downloading :) ) 

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/kill-or-be-killed-mario-exe

( Also I might make Sequel of this games.. Maybe :) ) 

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 seconds I proud of call mystery box jumper demo 

I proud of game ( Because of endless fun mode.. Where enemies and more ) 

Although 

Is not exactly finish demo 

I was planning to make more to this games 

But didn't because of time for this games jam 

But I still like you to try to out!!!! 

You can play in ichio ( not exactly ) 

https://itch.io/jam/gdevelop-big-game-jam-9/rate/4605331

Or just play it in gd. Games

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/feefs-

( Since is kinda only way to play.. I guess ) 

( Plus is not public at gd. Game .. yet.. Because I don't think Is finish enough.. Or something like that make me release it to public.. But I don't mind a you trying out!!! ) 

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The third I proud of is call invader Jimmy

Know this game.. I really proud of

And I think is most special one ( And maybe my best work I ever did )

I won't say much of this games

Since I want you try out first before anything

But all I have to is.. The reason I made this game is both for fun.. I the show and movies call Invader Zim!!! 

I pull a lot time and effort on it!!! 

I hope you like these games I share to you!!! 

I hope the feedback helps you!!! 

( and I really appreciate for feedback.. And rank 3 my game for 10/10.. Or something like that too!!!.. if you can!!! ) 

Honesty is welcome too!!! 

Since is best way to improve my game!!! 

You can play the game also in itch.io ( By downloading ) 

https://itch.io/jam/theveryseriousjuniperdevgamejam/rate/4719678

Or play it also in gd. Games ( without downloading it ) 

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/invader-jimmy

Thanks for reading!!!!

You're welcome!!! 

And check out my YouTube channel call gameplayfun or @gameplayfun2741 

If you can!!! 

Thanks!!!! 

Thanks!!!!

Thanks so much for not only for playing and rate my game call invader Jimmy ( Plus comment too ) 

But  also live  stream YouTube at my game call invader Jimmy too!!! 

You have no idea how much that means to me!!! 

Like

You made me very happy!!! 

So to show my appreciation for you being there 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!! 

( I hope you like the art ) 

( Also I left your comment at your game.. And follow you too!!! ) 

( Thank for follow me too!!! ) 

Thanks for feedback!!! 

Hard games 

But can be fun if you can handle it 

Good job for making this game jam!!! 

Thanks for playing!!!! 

And Thanks for both comments and feedback to my game call invader Jimmy!!!! 

( I might update the game to improve and make it more clear.. And more... But not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless )

I glad you like the game!!! 

And to show my appreciation to you 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!! 

( I hope you like the art too!! ) 

( I left comment on your game too.. You're welcome!!! :D ) 

( Also by the way.. My only problem with your game is.. The glab could be better.. But besides that.. Really good game with a lot more stuff than I thought!!! ) 

I have no words for this 

This games is... 

Amazing!!!! ( And it is better than mine!!! ) 

Good job for making this game jam for one week!!! :D

Thanks!!! I glad you can see how much I pull a lot time and effort on it ( Especially when I did it alone :)  ) It was honestly worth it do all that ( Even if it was kinda painful.. But also fun!!! )

 And to show my appreciation you being there 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!!

 ( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  ) 

And congratulations for make made this far game jam results!!!!

 I hope I see you soon again!!!

 ( I hope you like the art too!! )

Thanks!!! 

Is nice meeting  people who pull a lot time and effort on they games like me (  and you too!!! ) 

I hope I see you soon too!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

And thanks for both comments and feedback to my game call invader Jimmy too!!! 

And yeah

I do kinda agree artstyle could look better 

My main focus was game play more than anything 

So even if the game wasn't perfect because of some problem  ( like artstyle problem for example )

I glad you like the game play!!! 

And to show my appreciation for you being there 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!! 

( I hope you like the art too!!! ) 

Thanks for playing!!! 

And yeah

 the game is not perfect

There some things that I sadly had to do it fast before time runs out 

( Could be better if I had more time.. And I might update game to improve the game and more.. But Not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless )

I glad you like the game!!! 

And to show my appreciation for you being there 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!!

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!! 

( I hope you like the art too!!! ) 

Thanks!!!

Thanks!!! 

I glad you like it!!! 

And if to be completely honest with you 

Yeah.. The theme can be handled better 

I was just focused on the game play more than anything ( Because to me.. Is more important than anything.. But regardless ) I glad you like it!!! 

And to show my appreciation for you being there 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!! 

( and I hope you like the art too!!! ) 

Play it here if you can't download it

https://gd.games/fnaf-fan/invader-jimmy

Thanks for playing!!!

Thanks for playing!!!

 I really appreciate it you share your opinion on this comment ( and feedbacks too ) 

I do kinda agree where visuals could be better  

And handle the theme could be better too.. I agree that too 

( I wasn't really focus on the theme.. Or visuals.. My main focus was game play.. Since in my opinion is more important than anything.. Because to me without game play.. It won't be video games anymore..  But There still might be some thing i can improve ... I might update the game to improve some things and more ( not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless ) I glad you like the games!!! I think this is 3 best game I ever made so far!!!

And I really proud of it ( I might not win.. But at least I improved and proud of how the game turn out :) .. and Compared to my first game call starcude.. Invader Jimmy Is way better game!!!... if i have to be Completely Honest with you!!! )

 And you being there.. play and rate.. And even commented & feedback to my game means a lot to me 

So to show my appreciation to you 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!!

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  )

I hope I see you soon again!!!

 ( I hope you like the art too!!! )

I glad you like it!!! 

Invader zim music just.. Feel better to use at this games.. Than mine!!! 

So I keep it!!! 

Boss fight was kinda hard to make 

But I am proud of how turn out 

( Also when you say static-overlay?.. You mean the looks of this games?.. Just make sure if I am correct or not ) 

Thanks!!!

 I glad you like the gameplay!!! 

 Art wasn't my main focus ...My main focus was game play at the Time (Since in my opinion.. Game play more important than art.. Plus I did give too much time on game play..( Like tutorial and boss fight.. And more ).. But I did have some time to make pretty good art.. Not perfect or great.. But I think is best one visuals compared to my other game.. I still might try to improve some things.. But not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless ) 

 Thanks for playing!!!

 And to show my appreciation for you being there 

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!!

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

 I hope I see you soon again!!!

 ( I hope you like the art too!!!)

You're welcome!!! :D

I respect your opinion :)

and to To show appreciation for you being there

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

I hope I see you soon again!!!

Thanks!!!

 I glad you like it!!! 

 Because honestly.. This is was most hard but also fun to make this game jam 

( Especially since I made the game alone by myself :) )

 No matter how painful it was... I won't lie.. This is worth it!!!... Like is few of games I made where I feel like I truly proud of ( and Also I might update the game.. But not right now though .. Since I take some break :).. But regardless ) 

Thanks for playing!!!

 To show appreciation for you being there 

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!!

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  )

 I hope I see you soon again!!! 

 ( I hope you like the art too!!! )

Thanks!!!! 

I glad you like it!!!

 Because honestly.. The Tutorial and boss fight takes mostly of my time to make it good 

 But I glad it was worth it!!!! 

 And to show my appreciation you being there 

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!!

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

 I hope I see you soon again!!!

( And I hope you like the art too!!! )

Thanks!!! 

 I pull a lot time and effort on it!!!! 

 ( Especially since I did it almost all the work by myself ) 

 And since you play and Rate And even commented at my games 

 I want show you my appreciation 

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

Thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  )

 I hope I see you soon again!!!

Thanks!!!!

I glad you like it!!!... Since I pull a lot time and effort on it!!!!

 And to show how much I appreciate it you being there 

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  )

 I hope I see you soon again!!!

Thanks for playing my game!!! And even rate.. And give me a comment and give me feedback too!!!! ( I try learn my mistakes to improve my game more.. And I might update game.. Not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless ) 

Thanks for playing my game!!!

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :) )

i hope I see you soon again!!!

Thanks for playing!!!

Thanks!!!! 

I glad you liked it!!! 

Because I did try make my own music once ( but music just.. Wasn't good.. Is kinda hard make good Music.. at least to me.. Especially since I don't make music often ) So I decided to borrow from series I really like call invader zim :).. And if I have to be honest with you It fit the game the more than my own music!!!.. So I keep it!!! 

As for tutorials and art I glad you like that too!!! Because I try my best to make it good can be at time game jam.. Is not perfect.. Since there still might be few things I can improve.. But I proud how it is.. And I might update the game to improve some things and more ( not right now.. Since I take some break :).. But regardless.. I glad you like it!!! ) 

Thanks for playing my game!!! 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment :)  )

I hope I see you soon again!!!

I think your feedback might help me improve to my game a lot more.. Althought.. I don't understand these part 

( I was playing on big screen, so I could see where opponents spawn. I got cheating advantage :).. When player is playing, his eyes look more into right part of the screen. So player character would look more like blurry circle. Because character shoots a bit lower than it's center it's a bit inconvenient to shoot. It would be better if he shoot from it's center. When player is playing, his eyes look more into right part of the screen. So player character would look more like blurry circle. Because character shoots a bit lower than it's center it's a bit inconvenient to shoot. It would be better if he shoot from it's center

My suggestions/improvements

Add HP bar for boss

In your game ammo is unlimited, so I think there is no point of pressing shooting button. You should make shooting automatic. Because, right now player just spams shooting button )

Can you please explain it to me?.. Thanks!!! 

Cool  :D

Also

Thanks for playing my game!!! 

and Jimmy wants to say thanks for playing too!!!

I hope I see you soon again!!!

Thanks!!! 

Hmmm.. That Odd how that happened.. I See what I can do about it ( but not right now though... Because I am take some break :) ) But Regardless... thank you so much for playing my game!!! And to show my appreciation for playing and rate my game ( And even comment plus feedbacks ) 

Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing!!! 

I hope I see you soon again!!!!

Thanks!!! 

Dude!!!.. Thank you so much for playing my game and rate!!!! ( I was feeling like my hard work was wasted because of not a lot people rate my game.. But you guys came in to not only play.. But also rate.. And also give me a comment.. Either to give me a feedback or something like that.. Regardless.. It Means a lot to me more than you think.. Especially since you a second person who not only plays and also rate my game.. But also give me a comment ) ( is nice to find someone who like invader zim too :) )

 So to show that means a lot to me

 I give you art where Jimmy say thanks for playing

 And once again.. Thank you  :) 

( sorry I was late.. I was focus on rate first.. Then after I responded back to you guys comment  :) )

 And I might update the game ( After I take some break of course ) Regardless what happened.. I hope i you see you soon again!!!

This games is full of chaos.. And I love it ( I wish I can rate the game too.. But said this.. And I don't understand what means or try to say exactly ) 

But regardless.. Good job for making this fun game jam!!!! ( Especially at 1 week!!! )

Did you play it on the laptop or computer? 

Because I did play it on computer

And still show me a dummy ( even with full screen on  at web version ) 

Not try to be annoying.. Just here ask and figure out the problem!!!

Thanks for playing my game!!!.. I glad you like the game.. Because I honestly feel like is one these few games I made where I feel like truly proud of.. And also I might update the games.. And improve few things.. And add new stuff to the game.. And more!!!.. But for now.. I just take some break.. And once again.. Thank you for try out my game call invader Jimmy!!!!

 Here Jimmy saying thanks for playing

i hope i see you soon again!!! :)

  ( share this games mean a lot to me too!!!.. Thanks!!! )

Ignore the mistake text.. I had to do some stuff faster.. So Some stuff had to be the way they are.. So I can focus on more to game play instead.. As for nothing happening.. I not 100% sure what you mean by that.. But if I have to guess.. Is probably the part where if you press z first time doesn't do anything at part where it said "in older to protect yourself" .. If so.. Just keep press z.. Until give you next one text.. That weird bug.. I know.. But I still happy how the game turn out.. Even if isn't perfect.. Thanks for playing!!!