Forever and a day

I dont know how to use LJ cuts so if you want to teach me i'll do that but, i'm writing a story thats based on experience. alot of its exaggerated and i want someone to review it i guess.  if you know a site that would be suitable please tell me!

Summary
She only ever loves once, and she let him go, when she pushed him away she changed, she didnt care anymore, she chose to fake her life away pretending to be happy until her fiance broke up with her.  Now shes back to dancing.  a 19year old exotic dancer, enslaved by a sleazy boss that uses her and blackmails her.  She doesnt care.  Nothing can change her life, the money, she needs the money to pay for her life and her daughters life.  Sex, torment, abuse and heartache....

 

yeah...its in my journal so if you want to read it, i'd appreciate it.

 

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Hey... I dont know if I'm allowed to do this... but... I'm writing a story. It's a work in progress. Lol... you all should visit it and read what I have of it done... :) It's about a cutter who is abused and such... you can find a better discription on the info page... lol... It's here:
http://www.livejournal.com/users/_…

check it out guys... and make sure you leave some constructive criticsm... :)

<3 Chelsea

P.S. I'm also looking for a name for it... so if anyone has any suggestions... that would be lovely! :)

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This is a little story i am writing at the moment. I don't think its very good but i am looking for other peopel to read it and say what they think. I also need some one to edit them when i post themin my journal i'm horrible at grammer and stuff these have already been editied by some one else i jsut need to get some one who won't mind editing other parts to it ^_^ enjoy


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here goes

hope you all like it...

Taken
It came to me as a shock
even though I could've
I held back my tears
and I feel like it's all my fault
for not taking the next step
I have no words to say
because I am afraid
that if I breath I'll burst
and all that was just mine
the others got to first.

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I don't know where to go
my life seems endless
I'm the wheel out
the fifth wheel to go
everyone has someone
but the wheel just keeps on rolling
I just keep rolling
It can't be like this forevor
I need a blur to catch me
or I'll just keep on rolling
the road is now behind me
and I'm stationed still alone
because I'm wheeled out of rolling
stored up in a box
I've got no where to go

You
Troubled minds outside my own
you make my problems seem so little
i look up to you but you don't get it
I want to crawl inside your head
and see what I've missed out on
because I think that I should know your secrets
and I think I should know your thoughts
you're everything I want you to be
but I don't know who you are


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