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Title: Silver & Gold
Author: Zinke
Rating: G
Characters/Pairing: Kate Beckett, Richard Castle.
Spoilers: Tiny one for ‘He’s Dead, She’s Dead – but only if you devour dialogue with the same voracity as I do.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just Borrowing. No infringement intended.

Author’s Notes: This story was written for [livejournal.com profile] k8_rab as part of [livejournal.com profile] castle100’s 2011 holiday drabble exchange. The prompt she gave me was: present. I tried to keep it at drabble-length; really I did. But rather predictably, Castle decided to go a little overboard.

Thanks to both [livejournal.com profile] gabolange and [livejournal.com profile] girlunravelled for their suggestions and advice.


* * * *

And think of all the fun and joy
That would be lost on Christmas morning
If all the young folks didn't get to see
That sparkling happy tree.
- ‘Silver & Gold’, Burl Ives




It’s Christmas morning, and Kate Beckett can’t believe her eyes.

There’s a fire she doesn’t remember lighting crackling away in her apartment’s wood burning stove. A small, brightly decorated Christmas tree that she knows for a fact wasn’t there when she went to bed last night stands beside the fire, its ornaments sparkling in the early morning sunlight. And beneath the tree’s evergreen boughs sits a single small package wrapped in silvery paper and topped with a gauzy red bow.

Kate is still trying to figure out whether to pinch herself or call the police when her cell phone rings – to the unexpected tune of ‘Santa Claus is Coming to Town’. All of it makes sense, however, the instant she looks at the screen and finds Castle’s familiar visage grinning back at her from beneath an ill-fitting snowy white beard and Santa hat.

He’s already ho-ho-ho-ing by the time she’s put the phone to her ear. “Santa calling.”

“Castle, how did you—”

“Nooo. Santa.” She can practically hear him grinning on the other end of the line as he continues, “I couldn’t help noticing that you finally have a chimney. And seeing as you’ve been such a good little girl this year, I thought I’d drop by.”

Kate should be angry with him; but the sheer magic of the moment Castle has created won’t let her. Instead she breathes in the scent of wood smoke and pine and settles herself at the foot of the tree. “Thank you, Castle. This is all very sweet of you. But,” she adds, her lips curling into a mischievous grin, “if you ever call me a little girl again, I’ll make you sound like one.”

“Noted. Now open your present.”



*fin.



Date: 2011-12-21 02:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deedle-7.livejournal.com
Heehee......love it. One of my favorite songs!

Now....another one? Please?

Date: 2011-12-21 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamingo55.livejournal.com
OMG your Gail icon! Love!

Date: 2011-12-21 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrspollifax.livejournal.com
Awwww! I love it! Literally laughed out loud at the changed ring tone - so perfect. Along with Kate's reaction at the end. A very Castle-y Christmas. :)

Date: 2011-12-21 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callsign-buzz.livejournal.com
Loved the oh-so-very-Beckett shift from "But..." to "if you ever call me a litle girl again, I'll make you sound like one."

So perfectly Castle and Beckett! Now, what's in that present!?

Date: 2011-12-21 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flamingo55.livejournal.com
Oh, I love it. So very Castle of him to do that.

Thanks for making me smile this morning!

Date: 2011-12-21 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiss-me-cassie.livejournal.com
heee! nice cut to the schmoop - and very Beckett. :)

Date: 2011-12-21 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluewillowtree.livejournal.com
Oh, this is fantastic! The Christmas extravaganza is so very Castle, and Beckett's reaction is perfectly her!

Quite possibly my favorite thing about this is that Castle managed to change his photo and ringtone on her phone :)

Date: 2011-12-21 10:43 pm (UTC)
ext_2542: (beckett happy - Castle)
From: [identity profile] gabolange.livejournal.com
Aww, yay! And I love the little changes since I last saw it! :)

Date: 2011-12-21 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] literary-critic.livejournal.com
You win at dialogue. Always do, but those last two lines? Perfect. Laughed out loud.

Happy holidays. This was lovely.

Date: 2011-12-22 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparkles-mouse.livejournal.com
But,” she adds, her lips curling into a mischievous grin, “if you ever call me a little girl again, I’ll make you sound like one.”
HA. I loved that!!

So very very adorable!

Date: 2011-12-22 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elinox.livejournal.com
Cute fic, thanks for sharing it!

Date: 2011-12-22 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] k8-rab.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much!!! I love it!

I love that Castle has given Beckett what is presumably her first properly magical Christmas morning since she was a chimney-less three year old. ;) Her reaction was perfect and I absolutely adore that Santa!Castle even took the time to change his name, photo and ringtone on her phone.

Thank you again for this. I can't tell you how much I love it. It was everything I wanted and more :D

Date: 2011-12-26 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] k8-rab.livejournal.com
I love my icon too, it's by the fabulous [livejournal.com profile] watching_ghosts. As a serious fan of The Hair I couldn't resist. I'll be quite sad when the Christmas period is over and I can't use it till next year ;)

Thank you again and happy holidays to you too :D

Date: 2011-12-22 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jesouhaite47.livejournal.com
It will come as no surprise that I loved it. You conveyed so much in so few words, and the ending was just perfect.

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