D.N. Newyn
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Re: Why write in first person?
If you have a strong voice, you can definitely write a better book in first person. The biggest advantage is that every sentence can reveal who your protagonist is. That only works if you genuinely understand (...)
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Re: Free Reviews
I think you'd really enjoy what I have to offer. Here it is: https://www.royalroadcdn.com/public/covers-large/177597-basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent.jpg?time=1783625905 He can’t (...)
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Re: Wanna fill up shoutout swap slots in early chapters of my story
I’m already on Main so I can give you that last push. DM me your shoutout code!
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Re: Lets exchange feedback. Comment your work and I will read the first chapter.
Yeah, I'm down for a feedback swap, though I don't really want it on the first chapter. Can you do my 2nd chapter instead? You don't need to read the first chapter to follow this one. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/177597/basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent/chapter/3611594/chapter-2-scientists-borrowed-reagents-all-the
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Re: If you read my story, I'll read yours (No NSFW)
Sounds good. Let’s do it. I’ll comment on at least 10 of yours as well as I read along. Here’s mine: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/177597/basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent
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Re: Free feedback
I would love some feedback on the novel I just began posting: Kill the Heroes: A Minion's Rise to Power. Thank you! https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/178076/kill-the-heroes-a-minions-rise-to-power (...)
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My new very high-effort cover
Here's my new cover for my book Basic Thaumaturgy for the Emotionally Incompetent. Took me years of mastering MS Paint to reach this level of artistic excellence. I'm kind of afraid it's too tryhard, don't (...)
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Re: Looking for Advice on Converting Readers into Followers
Beg lmao. Get on your knees and kowtow to the mighty readers. Seriously ask about it in your author notes. The more creative the beg the better.
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Re: Any cozy stories looking for comments/feedback?
Yes please! My story is mostly about a guy trying to pass his exams and look at rock specimens and avoid responsibilities! Would love to get some comments and feedback! Here it is: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/177597/basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent
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Magical academy where spells are broken into equations and emotions are used as spell fuel
... is the elevator pitch for my story, Basic Thaumaturgy for the Emotionally Incompetent. If it interests you, please check out this blurb and see if you're sold! He can’t conjure grief, can barely (...)
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Re: recommend me academy genre novels
I'd love if you give my book a try! Magical academy setting where spellcasting is broken into equations and emotions are used as spell fuel: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/177597/basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent
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Re: User retention query
60% is average, so you're doing slightly above average.
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Re: Free feedback
I'd love some feedback as a new author here. I write queer slice-of-life and fantasy. I also have a story about Gods in Group Therapy. Thanks! https://www.royalroad.com/profile/985794/fictions (...)
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Re: Free feedback
Fantasy+Adventure+Romance? I got it. I don't even necessarily need your feedback. One or two comments about how you feel would be enough. Here It's about a man who encounters the woman of his life in (...)
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Re: Free feedback
Hello! I'd love for you to Celine and The Swordsman for you to look through. Though it is quite far from lighthearted, I hope you can give it a shot. On a tangent, I've read through a few chapters (...)
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Re: Free feedback
I won't turn down free feedback if you're offering. my current ongoing work is denpa skies denpa skies A surreal sort of litrpg/psychological thing I took a look at your pages and they both looked (...)
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Re: I want to Beta-Read your book!
Thank you for the offer! I’ve just rewritten my lovechild and I’d love to hear if this new version works. I’d love feedback on the first 3~6 chapters but if you like it you’re welcome to read more! (...)
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Re: Let's trade chapters. I read one of your you read one of mine. At the end Review swap
Yeah that's fine with me. I need an extra pair of eyes for this: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/177597/basic-thaumaturgy-for-the-emotionally-incompetent Would like to take it slow actually, one chapter (...)
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Re: Slow burn recs!
My LitRPG is super slow-burn and focused on character growth and worldbuilding if you want to have a look!
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Re: Free feedback
Hi Sweetstuff. It would be great if you could take a look at my story. Thanks in advance. The Scientist and the Fairy Hey Chau. I had a look at your first chapter. I think you have things going for (...)
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