Hi I'm new to the site and have been hard at work refurbishing a short story I've been working on and was hoping to see if anyone would like to review either Part 1 Verses 1-13 or 14-21.

It's an anti-fantasy story in which the "great big bad" has been defeated by the "heroic" empire but its being told from the POV of a little girl whose entire race actually loved and were dependent on the "great big bad". So its kind of like a common "Demon King" trope usually found in fantasy now days, but its not told from the "hero's" POV and so it explores how that change in POV can alter the perspective of the story and who you're cheering for.

I can slam down a review on up to 10,000-12,000 words pretty timely, with the option for doing 27,000 words over a longer period of time if you find the time to review the entirety of part 1.

Either way thanks for stopping by to read this thread, hope life is going great on your end!

Hey! I'm down to do a review swap, but it may take me a few days as I like to read carefully. 

My book is https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/176080/worldfall--the-masters-daughter

Please do not create multiple copy-paste threads in different sections of the forum; review swaps must stay in the review swap subsection.

I will move the duplicate of this post to the review swap forum and will lock this thread.