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I posted here a while ago about a work in progress, Staves. It is still a work in progress, of course, but I've completed the introduction and tried to clarify a few things. I've also written a little more and included a soundtrack. (Yes, a soundtrack. I kept listening to music and thinking, "Oh! This captures _______ about/in Staves!" So I compiled them and am offering them up for download should anyone be curious (but only for seven days, since it's yousendit.))

Sample:

To find the beginning of this story, one would have to go to the very beginning of a life, which would lead to the beginning of a relationship, which would lead to the beginning of the world, which would in turn lead to another beginning (the world had to come from somewhere, after all), so on and so forth, until before long the relevant story is lost beneath a recapping of history.

With this in mind, an effort shall be undertaken to shorten the length of this work and choose a specific beginning. I briefly mention a war that has been going on since before man noticed the stars, a war greater than any other war conceived. And in this world dropped a small girl, smaller in importance than a hobbit in Middle Earth (pre-Ring); her significance, in the long run, was the same as almost anyone’s– Insubstantial. She was, to be frank, less important than a drop in the ocean.

Her name, as it is customary to give the names of characters, was Madison Hadley. Children delighted in calling her Mad Hadder. They thought themselves witty.

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pen

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Working on the beginning of a story and want to get opinions on whether or not it has potential.

Working Title: Staves
Genre: Fantasy
Premise: A ritual must be done to renew the world and keep it from dying. Two bands of people are in a battle over whether or not to complete the ritual or let the world die. Into the cracks falls a mortal girl who happened to be in the right place at the right time.

Link.

Input is very much appreciated.
Believe

Good Morning!

Oooh-

I was immediately attracted to this community. Mostly because of the name. *grins* I wanted to introduce me-self since it seems that you could use a post of some type.

Hi - My name is Rachel and I'm a writer.

In other news I'm also a roleplayer and a haunter of hack-n-slash MMORPGS where I attempt to roleplay anyways.

But yes, anyways, it's time to pimp my writing journal : morningglorious. I write sci-fi and fantasy and dark fiction in any genre. I've also just finish a play that's way-the-heck too long to post anywhere on the intarweb.

I am really looking forwards to being a part of this community. ^_^
pen

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I'm not sure if this is allowed; if not, please feel free to delete it, or inform me, and I'll delete it.

I figure everyone here is interested in writing, and some people, presumably, are interested in writers. Well, there are RPs on livejournal, and one of them is negability, where people pretend to be authors born before 1900, reincarnated and attending present-day high school. One of the best parts is seeing how the authors might have developed, like if Wilde hadn't been persecuted for his homosexuality, or if T.E. Lawrence and William Blake stole H.G. Wells' time machine. If anyone is interested, please check it out.

Active members are on the main page; pretty much everyone else is up for grabs.
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first off i desire to address that i am not an avid writer, secondly i am not fond of adhering  to the typically mechanics of written english... mostly because i think that they are annoying to comply with... mostly the grammar, and i am not fond of capital letters, nor contractions.  but then i have this thing where i cannot really write well (i do not mean type, i mean with a pen and paper)... it is similar to being dyslexic but it i refer to it as being disgraphic... which has long contributed to my misspellings, since elementary school. i plan to mostly watch this group until i understand it. then perhaps post...

oh and before i forget i stumbled onto this group from a friends ruffian_wind in one of her post she titled, w3.livejournal.com/update?=true so i decided to see ware that took me, and well i am here... this is a nice group...

and if i become to annoying just delete me, or tell em to shut up
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Writing at work

Heh, this place isn't seeing much activity..
I want to apologise for my lack of reviewing concerning other people's work... I don't have much time to myself these days. I had a random idea at work the other day for an opening to a story, so I stopped working to type for 15 minutes. It's the only writing I've done all year I think, please take a look at it (though I might not even deserve to ask for it) and tell me what you think (grammatically or concept)

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So is anybody else having difficulty writing anything? I can't access the main story on my computer because I don't have the word program it needs.

But in the meantime, who RPs and how (through IM, so on)?
calvin thoughtful

More Poems- Oh Noes!

Hello all! I redid "Wasted." I think it's better now, but I'd like to know what you guys think. And maybe if you could tell me one of the lines you like the most (if there are any)? That would be great... And then I wrote another last night that I'm not quite so sure about. I plan on submitting these tomorrow, so any help would... er... help. Thank you!

Sorry for putting them up here again, Alan, but I'm not quite sure I understand what I remember of what you told me. (*woke up early*)

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