Not seeing is believing

CONCRIT // HOW'S MY DRIVING? // WHATEVER ELSE THIS CAN BE CALLED

Self-explanatory. Any comments, queries, concerns about how I play him? Anything about him that's off that you think I can fix? This isn't limited solely to his personality, either--if you think I'm doing something wrong with how he copes with his powers, or anything, let me know! Suggestions are allowed too--my ideas are lame half the time, so. Yeah.

Please specify which character you are critting when you post here, as this journal is used for two separate characters!
- Danny Fenton/Phantom (canon)
- Danny Masters (AU at witchesreign)

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Danny Masters 》 HOUSING: HOUSE NAME, FLOOR 》 JOB: JOB TITLE HERE 》 AGE: 16 》 PAST ENTRIES PERMISSIONS OOC: Backtagging: Yes, please! Threadjacking: Yes! Fourthwalling: No. Not like it'll come up with this show... XD Anything else?: if your character is dead, semi-dead, or somehow otherwise fits a possible definition of "ghost" or "dead," please contact me! IC: Kissing/hugging/etc: Yes. Injuries: Yes. Killing: HELL YEAH. Mindreading/memory wiping/etc.: Run it past me first, but I generally have no issue with this. Anything else?: not that I can think of right now.

So! Due to a certain mysterious element surrounding Danny here, he can tell who is dead/a ghost/a spirit! (Spoilers: it's because he's half-ghost.)

Therefore, if your character is even partially any of the above, then please comment here so that Danny can sense that about your characters!

If you're not sure if your character applies, or if you have any questions about what I've written here, feel free to comment as well with questions/clarifications!

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