tenlittlebullets: (weeping angel)
Ten Little Chances to be Free ([personal profile] tenlittlebullets) wrote2012-02-23 02:49 am

Double drabble: Never-were

Title: Never-were
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eight, Ten
Rating: PG-13 by implication? I don't know.
Notes: This will make very little sense if you haven’t read a particular Gaiman short story; if you have... I’m sorry. I’m so sorry. (There's now a link to the story in the comments.)

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Whatever the Doctor had expected to find in the temporal eddy of his first Time War mission, it wasn't this:

Inside the TARDIS doors was an organic, subterranean-looking hell where his console room had been. The being inside had the face of a young man, but his eyes were the all-devouring eyes of a demon, timeless and cruel. He slammed the doors shut with a snap of his fingers the instant the Doctor stepped over the threshold; they locked behind him, and somewhere in the greenish-black depths of the TARDIS the cloister bell began to toll.

The other tied the Doctor to a coral strut with strips torn from a battered orange spacesuit, strips that left streaks of rusty Martian grime on his wrists and ankles and across his mouth. His movements were eerily calm, his mouth a grim line, but his eyes were the worst part: they stared into the Doctor with perfect understanding and not the slightest trace of compassion. The first icy suspicion of the truth began to creep up the Doctor's spine; perhaps that was why he didn't resist.

The demon nodded and smiled a dead smile. "Time," it said, "is fluid here."
aria: ([doctor who] brilliant)

[personal profile] aria 2012-02-23 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
DID YOU JUST WRITE A FUSION OF WATERS OF MARS AND OTHER PEOPLE

LIKE SOME HORRIBLE COLLISION OF ALL MY FAVORITE THINGS

LET ME LOVE YOUR WRITING FOREVER AND EVERRRRR
aria: ([doctor who] van gogh tardis)

[personal profile] aria 2012-02-23 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
aklsdksfd write the longer vision

DO IT

i have lost the ability to do proper capitalization in sentences because i want this so muuuuuch
aria: ([doctor who] look at us now)

[personal profile] aria 2012-02-23 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
On the one hand, not terribly surprising given the subject matter, but on the other hand wow. Should I ask for details or just wait for the fic?
aria: ([doctor who] dangerous undercurrents)

[personal profile] aria 2012-02-24 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
AHHHH. On the one hand I am really awful and also easy for horrifying shit in the Time War so my first reaction is HELL YES, but, y'know, also take care of yourself?
aria: ([doctor who] van gogh tardis)

[personal profile] aria 2012-02-24 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Apparently I am also easy for Ten prattling away like normal when he is batshit terrifying half a millimeter below the surface.

Um. Every time you say something new about this fic, I need it more. Whatever, stay up too late, indulge the nightmare fuel, I WOULD LIKE THIS FIC PLEASE.
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[identity profile] redjaywrites.livejournal.com 2012-02-23 09:44 am (UTC)(link)
Oh god. I've read that short story, but I can't remember... is it Smoke and Mirrors or Fragile Things? EITHER WAY this worked and *shivers to the bone*

[identity profile] 10littlebullets.livejournal.com 2012-02-23 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
It's called "Other People" and I believe it's from Fragile Things.

Glad to be able to share the "OH GOD NO" that crept over me when this plotbunny first bit. *evil grin*
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[identity profile] redjaywrites.livejournal.com 2012-02-23 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
That's it. The one he based on Satre, I believe. I saw the reference as soon as I started reading though at first, the title reminded me of Neverwhere.

[identity profile] 10littlebullets.livejournal.com 2012-02-23 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Yep, that's the one--hell is other people, and it's orders of magnitude more horrifying if the other person is yourself. Especially if "yourself" is Ten at an absolute nadir of crazypants self-loathing.

Properly speaking the title is one of the eldritch horrors spawned by the the Time War that Ten mentioned in EoT, but since Gaiman wrote Neverwhere, and the Neverland arc in Eight's BFA audios is also full of temporal abominations and dark!Doctor doubles, I figured it was appropriate all 'round.

[identity profile] lyricwrites.livejournal.com 2012-03-12 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Actually, the story is quite creepy and horrific even if you haven't read the Gaiman story (which I hadn't, before I looked at the comments). I mean, you don't really know what's going to happen, but between the Cloister Bell and the Time Lord Victorious, it really, really can't be good.

[identity profile] 10littlebullets.livejournal.com 2012-03-13 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, thanks! Glad to hear that it has a certain amount of suggestive creepiness even on its own. In most cases I'd say, yeah, toss Time War!Eight at Ten on a low-functioning day and the results are probably worse if left to the imagination, but Gaiman managed to come up with something even more unsettling than the horrors that crawl out of most people's brains if you don't show them the monster. It is reassuring to hear that even in concept-drabble form, the story doesn't rest entirely on that gimmick.