Story Writing for Those Who Care

beat_fan
December 11th, 2004, 05:49 pm

THE "ALL SHE TOLD ME" HYPERACTIVE, POST-MODERN PROSE BLUES

Just wrote this for web-prompt at http://www.litkicks.com/
Don't worry: it's tiny.

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xangelslavex
December 9th, 2004, 10:28 pm

(no subject)

i wrote this in october. its unedited and barely proofread. and the ending is going to change, its also part of a larger story thats unwritten as of yet. but yeah, ye may read.

beat_fan
December 9th, 2004, 10:34 pm

Voice in the Head

This is a piece I worte several months ago. I was attempting to do something mind-numbingly original, which is a very dangerous thing to do.

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jaded_flower
27 Dec 2004, 17:25
THE "ALL SHE TOLD ME" HYPERACTIVE, POST-MODERN PROSE BLUES
I think it's brilliant. With the possible exception of the "Hmmbadoombadaa"...

Can I post that in my journal and link it back to you?
xangelslavex
14 Dec 2004, 08:17
THE "ALL SHE TOLD ME" HYPERACTIVE, POST-MODERN PROSE BLUES
been there myself. although sometimes i am worried its such an overused excuse that people dont believe it. lol, but whatever iz all good.
beat_fan
14 Dec 2004, 02:53
THE "ALL SHE TOLD ME" HYPERACTIVE, POST-MODERN PROSE BLUES
As in, "Freud's copy of Oedipus?"
That might work. This was extremely spur of the moment; I spent like fuve minutes writing it, I think.
xangelslavex
13 Dec 2004, 08:12
THE "ALL SHE TOLD ME" HYPERACTIVE, POST-MODERN PROSE BLUES
was interesting. you might think about the opening line, "Freudian thespian's copy of "Oedipus,"" felt awkward. maybe just the man Freud himself? might read better.
xangelslavex
11 Dec 2004, 06:22
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haha yeah. disoriented is a good way to put it.

it definatley needs a harsh edit with a hack saw, some elements are just hokey and played out, but i was satisfied at its overall structure and…