Fic: The Perfect Moment
Feb. 9th, 2010 10:20 pmTitle: The Perfect Moment
Fandom: Lord of the Rings
Pairing: Elrond/Glorfindel
Genres: fluff
Rating: PG
Summary: "You can't always get the perfect moment. Sometimes, you just have to do the best you can under the circumstances."- Sarah Dessen
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Fandom: Lord of the Rings
Pairing: Elrond/Glorfindel
Genres: fluff
Rating: PG
Summary: "You can't always get the perfect moment. Sometimes, you just have to do the best you can under the circumstances."- Sarah Dessen
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Disclaimer: Still do not own.
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Date: 2010-02-13 05:44 am (UTC)I'm sorry but this line
He was in love with Glorfindel had been friends with the dark haired elf for many, many years, but only recently had he realized how deep those feelings reached.
confuse me as I thought I was reading in Glorfindel's pov but somehow he loves himself? 8D
He winced to himself at ever slash that made its way through the other’s armor, though he knew none of them were life threatening.
I think there's a typo?
“I love you,” he said softly, lifting the other’s chin. “I do not wish to burden you with this if you do not wish it, but I would know your reply.”
There's something wrong with that sentence D:
looking his fair haired companion in the eye.
Missing at maybe?
And lol take your time with the others xD
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Date: 2010-02-17 12:25 am (UTC)It is edited. Sorry for the mistakes... this is why I shouldn't be allowed to edit my own writing late at night XD Thank you for pointing them out ^.^