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Title: Blink!
Author: nightlight4833
Genre: AU, Romance, Humour
Audience: [Most People]
Pairing: H/D, H/Hr, H/G (in alternate worlds)
Warnings: Slash, femslash, het
Length/Complete?: approx 8300 words. Complete. (Part 1 and 2 are in this post).
Summary: Harry accidentally inhales the fumes of a premature potion that causes him to be transported into numerous alternate worlds at the blink of his eyes. Brought to light are the issues of his "bigger picture".

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Hello all!

I shouldn't think anyone remembers me, since I've been on a rather looong hiatus. Nonetheless, I finally finished the next chapter in this one, so I thought I'd post it anyway.

Title: Slouching Towards Bethlehem
Author: Kroki Refur
Pairing: None
Genre: Action/Drama
Audience: the Mature
Length/Complete?: 7 chapters so far, about 6000 words per chapter. Plenty more to come.
Summary: Sixth year, and Harry's back at Hogwarts, but how can it be like it was? NEWTs and even Quidditch pale into insignificance, with Sirius gone and the horizon dark with war. Familiar faces turn up in unexpected places, and then there's the small matter of Malfoy... Drama a-plenty, and maybe an apocalypse or two to come.
Warnings: Language; violence.

Chapter 1 here.
Chapter 2 here.
Chapter 3 here.
Chapter 4 here.
Chapter 5 here
Chapter 6, part 1 here
Chapter 6, Part 2 here.

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Hi all,

I wrote this little ficlet a while back, and I'm rather fond of the premise, but I freely admit that it is quite quirky. I know what I wanted to do with it, but I don't think that I really got there, if you see what I mean. Anyway, some concrit would be really appreciated.

Many thanks!

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Title: Glimpses
Author: kangeiko
Genre: Drama
Audience: [the Mature]
Pairing: Neville/f
Warnings: schoolgirl fetish
Length/Complete?: complete
Summary: Girls' school uniforms are terrible things.

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Title: Forget Dinner
Author: PapayaCrazy
Genre: Fluff (Romance)
Audience: [Almost Anyone]
Pairing: Hermione/Percy
Warnings: Plotless Fluff
Length/Complete?: 595 Words - Complete
Summary: In which Hermione convinces Percy to forget dinner... and work.

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Title:"Dragon Dreams"
Once upon a time, this fic was a confusing mess here.
Author: lilian_cho
Beta: spiderstars, somigliana
Britpicker: underlucius
Genre: Humor, drama, romance
Audience: [Almost Anyone]
Pairing: H/D
Warnings: AU!Book Two through Seven
Length/Complete?: 8778 words, one-shot
Summary: A Harry Potter fairy tale based on "Sleeping Beauty," "Sun, Moon and Talia," "The Young Slave," "Beauty and the Beast" and Greek mythology.

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Title: The Cheese Stands Alone
Author: PapayaCrazy
Genre: Romance
Audience: [Almost Anyone]
Pairing: Cedric/Hermione
Warnings: None
Length/Complete?: 1,090 Words/COMPLETE
Summary: Frozen and white. Frost and Crystals. Is there a difference? Hermione thinks about her life after the war. Funny how life can be a nursery rhyme.

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Title: Choices
Author: Gwendolyn James
Genre: Angst/Romance
Audience: Most People
Pairings: Narcissa/Severus, Narcissa/Lucius
Warnings: Character Death
Length/Complete: 3291, yes
Summary: I sacrificed everything to be what they wanted me to be, just so I could have a small piece of their empty admiration.

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Hello, I wonder if you'd all mind having a look at this? I am very keen to develop my writing skills, and would welcome any advice you could give me. I haven't written a lot, but out of what I have written I rather like this - and would be grateful for any suggestions as to how I can make it better (plus, pimping your work to a wider audience is never a bad thing, right?!)

Title: A Charming Christmas
Author: calzamante
Pairing: A hint of Lupin/Snape
Era: MWPP Sixth Year
Genre: Fluff
Summary: Severus discovers that maybe Christmas isn’t so bad after all
Disclaimer: I don't own 'em, I just let 'em have the fun that JK won't!
A/N: This is my response to the Immeritus Christmas Crossover Challenge. Based on tapedeck’s picture, Hello Girls.
I couldn’t help noticing that it’s not mistletoe he’s holding…

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I'm new around these parts (evidently) and thought that I would benefit from having some of my work critiqued. I've posted this one on IATQO, so it might be familiar if you frequent that LJ or Yahoo!Group.

Any reviews would be much appreciated, I love picking this to pieces.

Cheers,
Signet

Title: I'll Dance
Author: Signet
Genre: humourous Drabble
Audience: [Anyone]
Pairing: Hermione/Blaise
Warnings: None.
Length/Complete?: 100wd/complete
Summary: Blaise wants to dance

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Hi all, I'm new around here and though I might as well start with posting one of my fics here. I'd rather post another one but it's not finished yet. I'm hoping your comments will make me want to write again.

Anyway, my name is Joyce, I'm 26 from the Netherlands, I see there's some familiar faces around here, which is good. I'm sorry if you've already read this fic. Feel free to ignore it.

Title: A Very Moony Christmas
Author: gilraen79
Genre: Smutty romance?
Audience: [the Mature]
Pairing: Remus/Hermione
Warnings: Explicit sexual situations
Length/Complete?: 6.600 words, completed
Summary: Hermione visits the Burrow for Christmas. She finds an unexpected guest.

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