A Memory

18 Dec. 15th, 2016 12:32 pm
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Take me out to the ball game

I was eleven, and had chosen the Reds as my baseball team
(as they were closest to my new hometown.)
My father got tickets through work—
green seats, behind home plate.

Take me out to the crowd

I don’t remember how full the stadium was,
just going to fast down the back roads to Cincinnati.
The only other person that mattered in the crowd was him anyway.

Buy me some peanuts and Cracker Jack

We ate coney dogs (mine without chili,
Since at the time I hated beans.)
I don’t remember what he drank.
I had an enormous Sprite.

I don’t care if I never get back

Twenty-four years later,
it's the only baseball game I’ve attended.
The stadium has changed,
the players I saw have retired,
and my dad is no longer here.

Let me root, root, root for the home team/If they don’t win it’s a shame

The Reds won 10-3.
I decided the catcher (Eddie Taubensee) was my favorite player.
They played the Phillies—
I still have the ticket.

For it’s one, two three strikes you’re out/at the old ball game.

I tell myself I’ll go again one day, but
I lost interest in following the sport my senior year in high school.
I still root for the team, but it’s not really important to me.
I wish I could have taken him to a game once—
Driving the speed limit down I-75,
Buying overpriced food and
not being able to see anything from the nosebleed seats.
I wish I could remember that day better:
Did I thank him?
Did I hug him?
Did we talk much at all?
He and I are (were) silent sort of people, so I doubt there was much conversation.

Maybe I’ll go this year.
Have a beer for him.
Find a new favorite player.
Speed--
just a little.

on 2016-12-16 07:14 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com
I loved the way you worked "Take Me Out to the Ball Game" into your poem, and used the prompt for this wonderful memory of a special time with your father. Very well done!

on 2016-12-18 01:02 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] magazhchi.livejournal.com

Loved this poem. Speaks volume about the relationship they share.

on 2016-12-18 03:38 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] encrefloue.livejournal.com
Such a poignant piece. Great job.

on 2016-12-19 12:22 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com
This reminded me of my outing with my dad in childhood :) They were mostly movies/plays though. Excellent take on the prompt. Kudos!

on 2016-12-19 06:32 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sinnamongirl.livejournal.com
Thank you for your entry!

on 2016-12-20 07:07 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] penpusher.livejournal.com
I was thinking about using that format of lines from a song to write an entry. I always loved that style. You handled this really well!

on 2016-12-20 07:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
Lovely, wistful remembrance here, which the song ties together surprisingly well. I hope you make it to another game at some point, in homage to your father. Going together clearly etched itself in your mind as an important and special event.

on 2016-12-20 09:31 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] murielle.livejournal.com
Oh, this is just lovely. I'm all achey and nostalgic. I only ever went to one real ballgame in my life. I was too young to remember much at all, but it was with my dad (and others) before he died.

We cling to the memories we have, when they are all we have.

Very good read!

on 2016-12-20 07:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] my-name-is-jenn.livejournal.com
I remember going to a Braves game in Atlanta with my dad in the early 90s. I wish I could remember that game better, too.

This was lovely.

on 2016-12-20 09:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bewize.livejournal.com
This was a beautifully nostalgic piece.

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