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bou_sempai , if you're reading this, I'm very sorry for the late response. ＼(゜□゜)／
Just click the cut if you still want to read this one. The cut is all dedicated for you. I hope you'll manage to read it and give constructive comments on what I did. I know it's not that god, but please bear with it. (￣口￣)
As what the others said, the fic seems to be a little bit rushed, but it's really good! ♥ ( I hope you're not offended or something. *bows down* ) And I already did said something in my previous entry that you just made my night. I was so sad, but right there and then, when you sent me a private message, and read your fic that is dedicated to me, I became happy. *blushes*
THIS POST IS FOR PUBLIC. Well, for now at least. XD;;;
Hm, as for the additional parts of the fic, just click the cut. It's okay if you don't want to add this to your fic. It's your fic anyways, not mine. XD;
Tora automatically smirked because Saga called his diary,
Tora-kun.
Tora laughed because he remembered that he just slept beside Saga, and as Tora woke up, he saw a lovely figure in front of him. An angel with an evil mind.
Tora whispered to himself "
How could I ever forget the Birthday of the one I love the most?" then continued flipping the pages of his diary.
As Tora turned the pages of his diary, he happened to stumble on this beautiful, yet rather interesting update of Saga-chan in his diary.
Tora smiled wickedly as he saw what Saga-chan said about him then flipped another long pages of his diary.
Tora said to himself "
No one could ever own me, except you, Saga."
Dang. It has been years. He still hasn't changed his diary. This one probably means a lot to him, he thought.
As he saw the page of his diary...
Tora's hand shook as he sat down, with a heart beating rapidly as he thought of all the possibilities that he could have now that Saga felt the same way. No, he thought to himself, I can’t let Saga know I read his diary. He would be mad. I have to act like my normal self and slowly progress into the stage of having
rough sex with him.
AND AS FOR THE DENIAL PART....
AND FOR THE ENDING PART...
CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS ARE VERY WELCOME. It's actually my first time beta-ing someone's work, so please be very gentle with me! @-@;;
NO INSULT COMMENTS PLEASE.
And for the ideas, if you see something familiar with other's works, please don't blame me. I DIDN'T DO IT ON PURPOSE! I was actually writing the this whole thing while I'm in our CHEMISTRY class. REMEMBER. CHEMISTRY = EVIL SCARY MAD CHEMISTRY SENSEI, so expect that it's not really good, because I immediately wrote all of this on a piece of scratch paper because I don't want to lose all my random ideas, so... I know. It's not god. >.< *sniffles*
A LITTLE NOTE FOR bou_sempai . If you want me to edit some things, feel free to tell it to me, and I'll try my very best to fix it! A-and, I'm so sorry if my Engrish is not that good as the others. *bows down*
P.S// If you want to read bou_sempai 's work, it can be found HERE.
And I hope you guys at least enjoyed reading this... what do you call this? Sequel? Err. *shrugs* I don't know. -_- Sorry.
I seriously need to go now. -_-
*crawls to my rose covered bed*TO BE EDITED WHEN I'M BACK FROM THE DEAD.
I KNOW I'M SUCH A BIG PHAIL. I'M SO SORRY. DX*head desk*
accomplished