On the last couple of scenes on Anniversary Cruise. The only thing I need now is someone to proofread the thing for me. Especially for continuity. I know I screwed up the two female leads and the two male leads several times.
Anyways, still have a major sex scene to write which always slows things up a bit. Otherwise, the rest of the story can go to proof at this point. Now, we just need another story fest so I can release it :) How about sex on boats as a theme? ;) LOL.
I want everyone who reads this to ask me 3 questions. Any 3, no matter how personal, dirty, private, or random. I have to answer them honestly. In turn, you have to post this message in your own journal and you have to answer the questions that are asked to you.
This morning, Reggie White, former NFL player, passed away. It's unclear if it was a massive heart attack or something to do with his sleep aponea (a condition from which I myself suffer and am being treated for). I know most, if not all, of the people who read my journal are not religious, and I know that I'm not either. Reggie White did a lot of contreversial things I did not agree with, including his adament opposition to gays. Still, he tried to do good in his life and football was his vehicle to get the press and money necessary to do his works of good. In an era of spoiled players in the NFL that do bad, including murder and rape, it's refreshing to see a player who's actions off the field were genuine and noble. While I don't agree with the religion, his works of good make him someone worth honoring.
I live in Wisconsin and while Reggie White played football, he spent a lot of his career in Green Bay. People here venerate Reggie White as a saint who brought the Green Bay Packers back to an age of glory. His decision to come to Green Bay brought a lot of other great players and coaches in along the years.
So here's to number 92, the Minister of Defense, may he rest in peace, and may he find the glory of the God he prayed to throughout his life.
Okay, I haven't been writing as much as I should be now that I'm unemployed, but I did manage to finish this chapter of the rewrite of Bellaire Belles and I got a good chunk of chapter three done as well. Also, I've been working on something else that I can provide a teaser for in the near future...
Many of you don't know this, but I tend to be something of a perfectionist. I wrote Bellaire Belles as one of my first stories and while it was well received, I was never really happy with it. A lot of the writing is for shit, and poorly edited. The story has some unrealistic twists and turns. Greg gets WAY too whiney during the course of the story. Worst of all, the ending is rushed and happens way too quickly. So last night, I sat down and worked on rewriting the first chapter of Belles. Here is a link to the story on StoriesOnline. What follows is my rewrite of chapter one of Bellaire Belles...
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