Minor Retcon!
PART 0 original opening:
The sound echoed through the room and nearby halls. Not that anyone was present to hear the sound, but he could care less if they were. His only concern now, we the two, new, innocent lives he had created. Both bundled in cleaned and sterilized towels, cuddled together side by side in the very uncomfortable looking bassinet he'd set up prior to removing them from the test tubes.
He hadn't been considering comfort when he had set it up, as by now, they were meant to be back in the solution that had been helping sustain them all this while. But their comfort was all he could think of now, and the entire machine had already been powered down.
Somehow, in spite of his frame wracking sobs and the uncontrollable rattling of his bones, the two infant skeletons made no sound. Fast asleep already, small, dim glows visible from the brink of their closed eye sockets. Gaster didn't ponder this all too long, as his thoughts were still plagued with the madness he had been conducting up to this point.
PART 0 retconned opening:
The sound echoed through the room and nearby halls. Not that anyone was present to hear the sound, but he could care less if they were. His only concern now, was the new, innocent life he had created. Bundled in a cleaned and sterilized towel, laid down in the very uncomfortable looking bassinet he'd set up prior to removing him from the test tube.
The skeleton hadn't been considering comfort when he had set it up, as by now, he was meant to be back in the solution that had been helping sustain him all this while. But the little one's comfort was all he could think of now, and the entire machine had already been powered down.
Somehow, in spite of his frame wracking sobs and the uncontrollable rattling of his bones, the infant skeleton made no sound. Fast asleep already, small, dim glow visible from the brink of his closed eye sockets. Gaster didn't ponder this all too long, as his thoughts were still plagued with the madness he had been conducting up to this point.
What Changed?
Originally, Sans and Papyrus were going to be twins. But, I feel it's too similar to other Undertale AU's I've read, considering the context of how they were 'born'. So, in PART 0, we only have a baby Sans. Papyrus comes into the picture before PART 1.
Changes were made throughout PART 0, but I only shared the opening for the sake of keeping it short :>