Title: Yearning
Words: approx 130
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Genre: free verse
Rating: adult for the picture prompt
Season: after Meridian
Notes: This was inspired by the picture Jack’s Bedroom by Rosie, prompt #55 at
jackdanielpromptfic. It is a beautiful piece of artwork but for some reason it made me feel...well, like this.
Thanks to Kayla for the beta but all mistakes are my own.
Yearning
I sleep and I dream...
That he’s here
Touching me
Filling my senses with his scent
Loving me
Making me feel complete
Like none before
And then I wake
And he’s gone
Like he was never here
But he was
Once
Before I let him go.
Now he’s out there
Somewhere
Making a difference
And I’m still here
Alone
Wishing I’d been enough
Knowing I wasn’t;
The wonders of the universe beyond compare
To him
My Daniel.
I gave him my blessing
My pain
Obscured by a smile
A lifetime ago
Just yesterday
And life goes on
That is the way of things
For everyone
Including me
No one knows that better
But all I want to do is lie here
In my bed
Waiting for sleep
And the chance to dream
Of him.
Words: approx 130
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Genre: free verse
Rating: adult for the picture prompt
Season: after Meridian
Notes: This was inspired by the picture Jack’s Bedroom by Rosie, prompt #55 at
Thanks to Kayla for the beta but all mistakes are my own.
Yearning
I sleep and I dream...
That he’s here
Touching me
Filling my senses with his scent
Loving me
Making me feel complete
Like none before
And then I wake
And he’s gone
Like he was never here
But he was
Once
Before I let him go.
Now he’s out there
Somewhere
Making a difference
And I’m still here
Alone
Wishing I’d been enough
Knowing I wasn’t;
The wonders of the universe beyond compare
To him
My Daniel.
I gave him my blessing
My pain
Obscured by a smile
A lifetime ago
Just yesterday
And life goes on
That is the way of things
For everyone
Including me
No one knows that better
But all I want to do is lie here
In my bed
Waiting for sleep
And the chance to dream
Of him.
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Date: 2012-01-05 02:48 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-01-14 09:30 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-01-05 05:32 am (UTC)Knowing I wasn’t,' yeeeeeooowwwch. I can just feel the quiet darkness of that room he's in, physically and metaphorically. Love it.
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Date: 2012-01-14 09:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-01-05 08:12 am (UTC)(I'm so glad I know how the "story" with Daniel ends *g*)
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Date: 2012-01-14 09:33 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-01-05 09:04 am (UTC)Thank you...
Deeds xx
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Date: 2012-01-14 09:34 pm (UTC)