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In honour of Daniel's 45th birthday.
Quick response to inspiration from this post and pictures by [personal profile] discodiva76.
Also an answer to the 'sweat' theme at AccDanCloset.

Title: Daniel's Birthday
Words: 243
Genre: slash, poetry, attempted humour
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Rated: adult

Daniel's Birthday

"It's my birthday," Daniel said.
"True?" Jack asked and scratched his head.
"I take it that you had forgotten,"
Daniel said. "My memory's rotten,"
Jack replied but then he smiled.
"I've got a gift to drive you wild.
Get naked NOW." Daniel giggled,
Stripped and then his butt he wriggled.
Jack stripped too then slapped that rump.
"Now you and me are gonna hump,"
He said with glee then thrust his dick,
Into Daniel hard and quick.
Daniel groaned and panted, "More."
Jack said, "You are such a whore."
"Just for you," Daniel cried.
Jack thrust harder deep inside
And humped and grinded, fucked and screwed.
(Sorry, that was rather rude!)
He thrust until his dick was sore
And Daniel's hole was rather raw;
Until they both were soaked with sweat
And only then did Daniel let
Jack up the pace and make them come.
Then they collapsed, both fucked dumb
And it was quite a while before
Either moved. (And Jack did snore!)
Then Daniel stirred and smiled at Jack
And snuggled up against Jack’s back.
He’d hated turning forty-five
But Jack had made him feel alive
And loved and wanted, needed too
Though later on he’d no doubt rue
What they had done, at least a bit,
Especially when he tried to sit!
But for the mo, he was quite happy,
Not ashamed of feeling sappy,
And when Jack woke, there would be,
Another gift, or two or three!

SWEAT

Date: 2010-07-08 11:58 pm (UTC)
pinkdiamonds: (Default)
From: [personal profile] pinkdiamonds
...Both fucked dumb? Love it! Love the imagery. Great job.

pinkdiamonds

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Date: 2010-07-09 12:36 am (UTC)
sid: (J/D naked sprawl)
From: [personal profile] sid
EEEEE!

And hee!

Ain't birthdays grand? :-)

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Date: 2010-07-09 05:00 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] antares_dw
Oh yes, a better gift than shirts or ties or something to clean the car. *lol*
Jack knows what Daniel *really* wants and needs. *g*

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Date: 2010-07-09 07:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] discodiva76
Wahey!!...you're never too old eh?.....love it!.....glad the pics inspired!...


Deeds xx

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Date: 2010-07-09 05:55 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ravenholdt
ROFL!!

Excellence, my dear! Thansk so much for the irrepressable grin!XD

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