It's a fictional story, what are you expecting a 9 year old to act like in that story? Not accurate
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okay so saying a story is fictional is not a good defense against bad writing fyi. also if the characters being badly written is taking away from the story, it kinda is actually a issue, and one multiple people have had
its fine if you like it, and its okay to critique things you like, in fact its better you do