Hi, I just had a quick run through of it. Some thoughts here
1) The menu/character creation could be a bit more streamlined. Maybe instead of having multiple screens, you could just have a single one?
2) The prologue/intro cutscene takes a bit too long I think
3) The text color and font for the game is really difficult to read. It feels like I have to lean closer to the screen to read the tutorial text.
4) I got soft-locked. After heading to the furniture shop, talking to bill and pressing buy, I thought the tutorial told me to talk to him. So I tried to talk to him, then when I went to press buy again; he was out of stock.
I'm guessing the game assumes the player will only open the buy menu once at this point; so if they end up not doing that, then they can't progress.