Something I love: I love the commentary and the idea that the narrator is out to secretly get me lol
Things that frustrated me: I think the score background bar is a tad too big, it was hard to see where I was trying to jump with it in the way
Bugs I found:
1. I get caught on walls when I jump and walk at the same time
2. I walked up to the button and before I could jump on it the audio for the next dialogue after started playing at the same time
Overall: I really liked it! I think you have a great idea right here! Keep up the great work!