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Phrasing of first sentence
editTagging Anastrophe. I changed Thuggee was a network of organized crime... to Thuggee refers to a network of organized crime... Thank you for your other edits but on this I think you're mistaken in reverting my edit and preserving the original wording, which asserts that this network existed. The article makes clear that this is disputed by scholars and this phrasing is non-neutral.
This seems pretty cut and dry to me, if no consensus emerges then I'll take it to dispute resolution. Thanks. Joko2468 (talk) 12:03, 8 January 2026 (UTC)
- The problem is of weight. That a small number of modern historians believe that the thuggee are imaginary, ascribing it to colonial bigotry, is interesting, but relatively unsurprising, considering the modern tilt in academia to dismiss any negative perceptions of undeveloped nations as being due to colonial bigotry. The History section of the article recounts historical documentation far predating colonialism. That a minority are skeptical doesn't negate the earlier evidence; we go by the preponderance of sources. Six cited sources that express doubt isn't adequate to have the first sentence of the lede suggest doubt is significant. We clearly acknowledge the modern skepticism in the lede and in its own section. It's POV to have the opening sentence imply doubt has primacy. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 23:24, 8 January 2026 (UTC)
- After reading parts of Wagner (2007), I see where you're coming from. Missing from this article is a narration of how the thuggee were portrayed in the 1830s and the sensation the news created-- particularly regarding Sleeman's publications. In this highly controversial topic, I still think my phrasing is most neutral and I'm not terribly fond of these editorial judgements. I'll send it off for a third opinion.
- On a separate note:
- Wagner (2007: xiii): There is no agreement among historians as to the actual nature of the phenomenon of thuggee. Within the last five years no less than three monographs, and as many articles, have been published on the subject – each telling a different story. In the note this refers to van Woerkens (1995) which is cited, Rushby (2003), and Dash (2005) which is cited. All of these are sceptical of Sleeman's portrayal but dispute different aspects of it.
- I think this disagreement should be represented in the lede and I propose the following rewrite of the last paragraph:
- Contemporary historians disagree about the nature of the Thuggee phenomenon. Some scholars question its existence and describe it as an invention of the British colonial authorities.
- Joko2468 (talk) 15:30, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- Retaining the citations ofcourse. Joko2468 (talk) 15:37, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
- An RfC would be a good idea, just to get more eyes on the matter. I would argue that the existing verbiage in the final paragraph fulfills "represent[ation] in the lede" without changing the opening sentence, which implies that there is broad disagreement; however, I think the proposed change is clearer than the existing text. Dipping back to that first sentence though...I think I may be coming around to your presentation. That I write that it "implies" broad disagreement means that I'm inferring that from what's written. Implications and inferences are inherently subjective, and they can be heavy-handed and obvious, or subtle and 'coercive' for lack of a better term. 'refers to' isn't inaccurate - regardless of whether they existed or not. It's a fine line as a distinction - at this point, I'm ambivalent.
- This is what a strong first cup of coffee in the morning can achieve... cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 19:54, 9 January 2026 (UTC)
Response to third opinion request:Without conducting a review of the literature, it is extremely difficult to evaluate the status of a debate among historians. However, appraising that the debate exists is a simpler matter. The contestation is strong enough to give significant weight to that debate early in the lead and state that it is contested. Doing so also provides a balance to the rest of the article, which presents many claims about thuggee at face value (see also the two discussions at the top of the talk page). Note that article's section on the debate is the very last before popular culture. Of the two options presented here, both "was a" (too certain) and "refers to" (a weasel word, doesn't really add any clarity) are inadequate. I prefer "was a supposed" that I see in a revision from November, maybe "purported" would work, ("refers to a supposed" may be even better, grammatically). It is more accurate view of the lack of consensus. It is also a modest counter-balance to the massive weight of the colonial discourse that haunts the subject and much of the article, a necessary frame. If it is the critics of the most radical scholars who say that "the colonial representation of thuggee cannot be taken at face value," then it should not be presented at face value. Remember that many of the primary documents on which the history follows are products of colonial administrators, people with extreme biases. That the colonial version occupies more space in the literature (the most lagging of indicators and itself is a product of colonial history) than the post-colonial version is not a reason alone to give it more weight. Pushing the post-colonial critique to the side or down a few grafs not only contradicts the scholarship included in the article, it actually gives undue weight to the colonial account. I think a version like this "is the name given to the alleged practice of thugs, who supposedly were historical organized cults of professional robbers and murderers in India" from another earlier revision is also more clear given the slippage between thug and thuggee (throughout the article) but that is beyond the scope of the question. The third graf is ok at explaining the contestation (but it would benefit from improvement), though the second graf lacks clarity about who it is that purports/believes these things about thuggee, as it's not always self-evident in the body sections (there's a lot of weasel words throughout, like reportedly, well--by whom? what kind of reports? I digress) Very simply, if there is no consensus among contemporary scholars that they existed as such, it can not be presented as such. It should not be presented as definitive with an asterisk, it should be presented as definitively contested. Doing otherwise is to engage in the dispute, rather than describe the dispute. Anything else is poor historiography, as well as a clear npov violation. I agree with Joko2468, it is cut and dry. BrechtBro (talk) 03:01, 10 January 2026 (UTC) - Problem:
"Remember that many of the primary documents on which the history follows are products of colonial administrators, people with extreme biases."
That is a gross generalization, and stereotyping. And it's similar to the arguments of contemporary academics - that it's a priori that colonial claims regarding Thuggee are purely fiction - lies. That's a biased starting position, and I haven't found anything that suggests there's any 'smoking gun' evidence that Thuggee is actually a fiction - only vague claims based apparently only on that prejudice. - The entry in the bibliography here () is a decent summary of pre-colonial evidence of Thuggee, with the principle issue not being whether thuggee existed - it did - but to what degree its existence was embellished in the colonial telling. That appears to be the legitimate debate.
- Overstating the significance of skeptical claims isn't an acceptable threshold to cross either. A great many people believe the world is flat. The article earth isn't required to acknowledge in the first sentence that skeptical point of view. No, I'm not drawing an equivalence to that case. However, we can't simply choose to 'side' with the modern 'skeptics' to the exclusion of what documentary evidence pre-exists it, simply because 'colonizers are inherently evil liars'. There is a thing called 'historical revisionism'. The very few sources supporting the skeptics can't outweigh the existing sources supporting their existence - embellishment doesn't invalidate mere existence.
- If I had access, I'd be very interested to learn what the citation statistics are for the skeptic articles, as it's a good metric for determining how reliable they are. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 04:00, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
- What I'm trying to say there is that it is inappropriate to give additional weight to the orthodox account simply because it is orthodox: the consensus among historians, like scientists, changes, and it is further important to recognize bias in order to give appropriate weight and balance. A debate among contemporary historians cannot be assessed on the basis of what historians wrote a century ago.
- The NPOV guidelines clearly state that debates should be described, not participated in. We can no more side with the revisionists (there's no need to put revisionism in scare quotes, it is the routine work of historians) than with the orthodox account. The citation you offer is very clearly and self-consciously participating in that debate, and it does not support your argument, it concludes, "the crime of thuggee did exist, and thugs did operate before the arrival of the British."
- This is very different than the claim of the lead, which is not that "thugs existed" or "thuggee was a crime" but that "thuggee was a network of organized crime in the medieval to post-modern centuries of gangs that traversed the Indian subcontinent murdering and robbing people" (which is poorly supported by the article body and most clearly articulated in the discussion of British colonial accounts). It does not even support your claim that Thuggee as such existed. What it does affirm is that there is a lack of consensus among historians about thuggee reflected in a significant scholarly debate with several schools of thought, and affirms that none of them are fringe, which means that WP:FALSEBALANCE does not apply.
- per NPOV, "refers to a supposed..." would accurately describe a contested claim as contested. It is neither an assertion of fact nor of fiction. BrechtBro (talk) 14:23, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
- The weight isn't "simply because it is orthodox", it's simply because it's the most detailed history we have, from first-person accounts. If one believes those first person accounts of english colonists are all lies a priori, then dismissing them is the problem. "it is further important to recognize bias in order to give appropriate weight and balance" - just so. Are contemporary historians biased? That seems to be dismissed at face value. "A debate among contemporary historians cannot be assessed on the basis of what historians wrote a century ago" - just so. Likewise what historians recorded a hundred years ago cannot be assessed only through the lens of contemporary historians and their particular biases. I want to see evidence, not interpretations, which the contemporary historians seem to be primarily engaging in.
- Quotes don't always imply 'scare', just as "thugs existed" doesn't imply scare. The term "Historical revisionism", whether rightly or wrongly, has taken on the perception of "changing the historical record to satisfy [ulterior motives/biases/political demands/erasure/etc etc etc]". History must be grounded on the extant record, not interpretation based on the assumption that all colonial administrators had "extreme biases". Is there evidence Sleeman - the primary source of what we know of thuggee from that time - was extremely biased? Doesn't seem so. He spoke fluent Hindi-Urdu, Arabic, and Persian - seems like what a person interested in engaging with the people would do, rather than in suppression; no record of him using slurs against Indians, and was instead highly regarded by the local Indians he interacted with due to his sincere interest in their cultures - rather than feared as a brutish bigot. Thus the problem with approaching these matters from prejudiced starting points founded on gross generalizations.
- I read some bits from his work Rambles and Recollections of an Indian Official (I don't have the attention span to read it all, it's huge) and it's clear he was absolutely not a man of "extreme biases", but instead a polymath who seemed intent on improving the living conditions of the Indians he lived among, in as many ways as possible (only one among them being saving innocent lives by rooting out murderers).
- Your proposed opening is not sufficient. "Supposed" drips with the implication that the record is fiction.
- The contemporary critics seem of weak reliability. Sorry, I've read too many sources in WP articles by "academics" (intended scare quotes) who engage in the worst kind of advocacy cloaked as research, and which are essentially published one-offs that hold no weight within the field they claim to be expounding upon (never once cited in other research). The characterization that it's a "significant scholarly debate" seems overstated to me. A handful of academics have expressed disbelief in the existence of Thuggee, and believe it a fiction grounded wholey on bigotry. Evidence? Not that I can see, only interpretation - significant amounts apparently focusing on overtly fictional interpretations (The number of times the contemporary, objectively fictional presentation in the Indiana Jones movies are mentioned in these academic sources is frankly embarrassing in terms of scholarly debate).
- The problems with the wording of the lede are reflective of the overall generally execrable quality of the article in whole. It's filled asses-to-teacups with horrendous grammar, construction, syntax. Fair swaths appear to border on plagiarism, lifted (clumsily) from both strong and weak sources. It suffers the common WP problem of one-off edits of sections that have been read in a vacuum, and wind up repeating already covered matters as non sequiturs. It's a bloody mess, and needs a rewrite. I do not volunteer.
- A different construction of the early lede might be: "Thuggee refers to a network of organized crime in the Indian subcontinent, described in the 12th to 19th centuries. The precise nature of Thuggee is disputed; the degree of organisation and the influence of religion or superstitions is not clearly established, and some contemporary historians reject the existence of Thuggee entirely, as a fiction of colonial authors during the British Raj."
- I'm not presenting that as "my alternative" or explicitly a construct to be used - it's not, it's a one-off. If we're going to neutrally describe the matter, then lets neutrally describe the matter, rather than implying ("refers to a supposed") that it's a fiction from the first words of the article.
- Sorry for the wall of text. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 23:36, 11 January 2026 (UTC)
- These detailed first-person accounts and Sleeman's, are as you say, primary sources, and need appropriate interpretation from reliable secondary sources. Primary sources must be used with care.
- The reliable sources guideline is useful here: "Especially in scientific and academic fields, older sources may be inaccurate because new information has been brought to light, new theories proposed, or vocabulary changed." (WP:AGE MATTERS) That you believe the academics are biased does not mean they are unreliable nor independent sources. The appropriate way to balance bias would be by other contemporary opinions that differ, describing the debate. There are
tennine scholars cited in the skepticism section, including major scholars like Kim A. Wagner who is cited elsewhere in the article, while the pdf by Reid we discussed above is undergraduate work. - If they are biased, there are likely other significant contemporary accounts that can balance them which could be added to the article. The other significant contemporary citation is currently Mike Dash, cited about two dozen times, and his singular perspective is overweighted, especially as he is a popular historian rather than an academic and so is not subject to peer review, meaning the work is less reliable (not unreliable, but an important factor in weighting).
- Recognizing that you're not proposing that draft as an alternative, I believe it would still violate the NPOV guidelines because it asserts that Thuggee existed as a network of organized crime, when the current sourcing shows a lack of consensus regarding that claim.
- I will be staying neutral and not editing the article, but I hope that hewing closely to the NPOV guidelines will not only improve the article, but be able to satisfy the different perspectives here, of which I hope mine has been useful. BrechtBro (talk) 22:07, 15 January 2026 (UTC)
- Datapoint regarding using primary sources carefully: Sleeman's writing are used as a direct (non-interpreted) source precisely once in the entire article, for the single sentence "Because they used boats and disposed of their victims in rivers [...]". There are only two other primary sources used that derive from the 19th century; cite 67, used to source an image used in the article, and cite 85, in which that source quotes Sleeman describing Charles Trevelyan's views on Thuggee. It seems primary sources have been used quite carefully, so that can be scratched off the list of issues at play within the current incarnation of the article.
- There are seven scholars cited in the 'skepticism' section not ten. Wagner is cited three times in the section (one in collaboration with another academic). Bhattacharya is a PhD student, so probably shouldn't even be used if we're sticking to academic/scholarly sources. cheers. anastrophe, an editor he is. 23:50, 15 January 2026 (UTC)
- I can only add to this that Wagner (2007: p.6) describes the scepticism of the thuggees' existence thus:
- Today it should be obvious that the colonial representation of thuggee is indeed full of inconsistencies and exaggerations and that the thuggee campaign of the 1830s, rather than just being an attempt to put a stop to violent crime, was also prompted by a whole range of other factors.
- The more critical approach to the subject of thuggee found in these recent works makes concessions to the problems associated with the use of colonial representations and is thus expressive of the lasting influence of the work of scholars such as Edward Said.20 In its most radical form the literary critical approach has also given rise to several recent studies, occupied only with the deconstruction of the colonial representation of thuggee, as opposed to the historicity of the subject. Denying the sources any historical value, other than being evidence of inherent Orientalist bias, scholars such as Parama Roy, Amal Chatterjee and Maíre ní Fhlathúin have argued that thuggee as described in Western accounts was little more than a figment of the colonial imagination. He then goes on to say that these studies concern themselves with exploring how Western colonials perceive the "other".
- Is this reputable scholarship that should be represented in the first sentence or ought it be mentioned in the margins? Would an RfC be more conclusive? As I said earlier, I'm not fond of these judgements.
- Wagner also says that the best account on Thuggee was written by Radhika Singha on the legal context around the British campaign, which isn't cited in the article. It's a casserole of a subject but I might look into doing a sweeping rewrite/ cleanup of the main body. Joko2468 (talk) 01:30, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- By the way, the article has serious problems with how the early evidence of thuggee is presented. Pretty much all the information presented with any certainty is cited to subpar sources, the modern books written about thuggee are far more cautious (in the case of the Chinese monk, Wagner even explicitly opposes this interpretation).
- I've posted what I've written so far to my sandbox as I make a start on tackling the colonial era, feel free to comment on it here or in the sandbox talk page. I write in the edit preview, so the sandbox has to be manually updated. Thanks. Joko2468 (talk) 07:30, 16 January 2026 (UTC)
- Problem:
Notes on partial rewrite
editFor the rewrite I used Wagner (2007), van Woerkens (2002), Singha (1993), and Dash (2005), which are the best available sources. Since it's a controversial topic, I've often doubled up citations and provided more where necessary. My rewrite does fundamentally alter the conclusiveness/ certainty with which thugs and thuggee are portrayed but it's entirely faithful to the letter and spirit of the sources. The article prior fell well short of this and was often based on subpar sources. If something is disputed between them, then all POV's are represented.
I intend to tie the Thug beliefs and Methods of robbery and murder sections into one Culture and beliefs section that distinguishes between the colonial-era portrayal and ones backed by contemporary historians.
Wagner (2007) on these sources
edit- [p.5]: In 2002 Martine van Woerkens published the first scholarly monograph on thuggee and although she operates with a criticism inspired by literary theory, her book in many respects constitutes a resurrection of the colonial representation of thuggee. Thus Van Woerkens deconstructs Sleeman’s account of the thugs even as she uses it to recast them as 'Tantric heroes' and the successors to an Islamic mystic tradition. --> as I understand, this is merely a POV matter between historians and ought to be balanced out/ kept neutral.
- [p.6] describes Singha as writing the most comprehensive work on thuggee to date.
- [p.5]: The most recent publication on the subject is a piece of popular history by Mike Dash, namely Thug – The True Story of India’s Murderous Religion. While it is well researched and generally resists the most obvious Orientalist stereotypes, the author’s unabashed praise of Sleeman and the late thuggee campaign means that ultimately the book follows in the time-honoured tradition of Sleeman hagiographies. --> valuable as long as this bias is monitored. Dash clarified in a 2017 reddit comment that the subtitle of his book was intended ironically.
General notes
edit- "Thuggee" in these sources is taken to refer to the crime itself and the phenomenon. It's a common mistake elsewhere, popularised by the Indiana Jones film, that thuggee also refers to the gangs themselves (i.e. "the Thuggee"). I've tended to capitalise "Thugs" when talking about the legal classification but I'm not sure this is completely consistent throughout the History section. The talk page banner asserts that the article should be in British English so I changed that where I saw it.
- I've only used images of historical value in the History section but intend to fit the other images elsewhere.
- According to Kim A. Wagner, the 7th century account from the Chinese pilgrim Hsuan Tsang concerns an encounter with bandits who wanted to sacrifice him to their goddess. Wagner explicitly disputes claims that these were thugs, saying (2007: p.26): However, by that rationale all accounts of banditry and human sacrifice in ancient India would have to be taken as referring to the thugs of the nineteenth century. Dwivedi (2018) is a very brief two-page spread contrasted with a book on the subject and shouldn't supercede this. Van Woerkens covers the account as it's written in the article but doesn't explicitly judge it. Dash (2005: p.20) just mentions it in passing as an early example of banditry in the region.
- The sources make clear that the way 'thag' was used in precolonial India is a little murky-- this nuance was missing previously and incorrectly implied that it had always had its colonial-era meaning. There's a ton of nuance missing from the article that is abundantly present in the sources and which I've attempted to reintroduce. The article feels as though it's been written in an argumentative style and badly misrepresents the sources or cites fundamental facts to those that are subpar.
- I changed the infobox, Dash is explicit that thuggee couldn't be called "organised crime" and modern historians do not consider it to be an organisation. As I said above, thuggee refers to the crime and therefore the event infobox is more appropriate for the phenomenon-- this also allows us to convey convictions, motives, victims etc. Per MOS:LEADIMAGE, the image of "Thugs" from the late 19th century isn't the most natural or obvious image and neither is it in all likelihood the most accurate to represent the article content (the Thugs pictured very likely have nothing to do with the thugs of the 1830s and they might not have even committed the same type of crime, thus misleading the reader). A period depiction of thuggee being carried out is the most natural image in this case and the one I've selected well-encapsulates the deception they were known for and from which the word is derived.
- The denialism view was previously represented by a PhD student and does not claim that thuggee didn't exist. These sources generally deny the historical value of the colonial archive but don't appear to assert that nothing like it existed. These sources appear to have been misinterpreted by previous editors, overcompensating for the uncritical tone the article was previously written in. I've struggled to find anything citable from a specific and relevant author on this. Macfie (2008: p.396) says: "... Wagner's reinterpretation of the facts of thuggee, a reinterpretation which, according to Wagner himself, is now widely accepted".
Joko2468 (talk) 23:01, 19 January 2026 (UTC)
- Culture and beliefs
- Added an enlarged version of the 1827 map with points of interest. I can't find Mahidpur on it, it should be in line with Ahmedabad and just north-west of Indoor (southwestern border of the green polity, which appears to be the Scindia dynasty).
- It seems that a good amount of the thuggee images aren't going to be appropriate for the main body, I think I'll create a Gallery section later. There's a lot of excellent historical depictions online that I'll add to that.
- Personally I think van Woerkens's theory of thuggee and religion is a load of codswallop and I'm yet to see it supported by another contemporary scholar. However, I don't think it qualifies for WP:FRINGE since it is one of two or three rigorous scholarly monographs that I'm aware of. She does though say that thuggee in its 19th century form was motivated by loot, so we can marginalise the religious motives view in the infobox.
- I do think the distinction between the instrumentalised legal 'Thug' and the authentic 'thug' is a necessary and valuable one, but it's very nuanced and I'd expect that to not to sit right with, or go over the heads of, some editors. The legal Thug was one ascribed the name by the British authorities while I've generally used the authentic thug to refer directly to practitioners and the gangs at Sindouse.
- Though it's mentioned in passing by Wagner (2007), Kevin Rushby's 2003 book does not appear to be scholarly-- he's a journalist and travel writer. Wagner passes no judgement on it and the opening to the book is anecdotal.
- For the thugs' religious beliefs and rituals, I've only included information corroborated by both Wagner and van Woerkens-- scholarly monographs by authors who hold very different theories on the ultimate significance of religion to thuggee. I think this is the best way to account for the authors' POV's and there's thankfully a lot of overlap between them on this. I've also added in a citation to Dash or Singha where the material is further corroborated.
- Singha concludes that the degree of specialisation among thugs was probably exaggerated, so I haven't singled out specific roles within the gangs. Whether the thugs' tools were ritualised is disputed among the sources and neither have I included this detail.
- The reenactment photo I found from the 1850s feels a bit inappropriate for the Methods subsection, I think I'll move it to the 'Reclamation' subsection when I get round to making it.
- I've reserved the bibliography for monographs and haven't included single-use journal articles, it seems a little silly when they're only cited for their concluding sentence. I don't know why Reid's 2017 article exists, it repeats what's in the monographs but with a poorer understanding of the nuance involved.
- Joko2468 (talk) 04:28, 23 January 2026 (UTC)
- Groups
- This section is well written but could do with being reorganised and expanded. In the bulleted list, I've only included groups covered by two or more of Wagner, van Woerkens, and Dash. It's more of a 'notable mentions' since by the nature of the extant material it could be never pretend to be an authoritative or exhaustive overview.
- The first Literature popular culture entry was original research, as demonstrated in the Etymology section the meaning of "thug" in precolonial India isn't straightforward.
- Joko2468 (talk) 04:41, 26 January 2026 (UTC)
- In popular culture
- The Black Company series evidently contains a cult inspired by thuggee but I haven't been able to find an RS supporting this. Requires further research. Theeran Adhigaaram Ondru and Thugs of Ramaghada have similar problems but they appear to be more removed from thuggee.
- Joko2468 (talk) 14:59, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
On WP:NPOV
edit- It's near impossible to achieve neutrality between the POV that rejects the colonial sources and the one that merely seeks to deconstruct and reinterpret them while avoiding WP:FALSEBALANCE. Still to work out how to represent this in the opening sentence, taking into account WP:UNDUE.
- Chakraborty (2021) (who is prolific on thuggee and its literary representation) says the following:
Contemporary historians and postcolonial literary analysts often differ in their interpretations of Thuggee.1 But scholars from these two different fields usually agree on one thing: that to some extent Thuggee was constructed, or at least redefined, by British colonizers in India. They have also generally contested colonial insistence on the cultic nature of Thuggee. On the other hand, scholars from the field of Terrorism Studies usually accept the traditional colonial stereotyping of Thuggee as a homicidal crime rooted in (Hindu) religious fanaticism.
He appears to imply here that the denialist view is mainly propagated by literary analysts, rather than historians. From my reading, Tom Lloyd appears to be the only historian promoting this view (Parama Roy, though included, is a professor of English-- I intend to better represent Lloyd). The Terrorism Studies scholars don't appear to be engaged with the historicity of the subject and Chakraborty describes them as ignoring other fields. - Perris (2025) says:
Kim A. Wagner has provided substantial evidence that some kind of organized banditry did indeed exist in parts of the Indian subcontinent but that this was considerably less than the widespread, caste-based, religiously motivated, sacrificial cult that British colonial officers alleged it to be, yet something more than the fantastic origins suggested in the postcolonial revisionism.
- Macfie (2008) ultimately sides with the reinterpreting view (Wagner). Further to that:
Of the three works I have mentioned as belonging to the third group of books and articles, which take a view, directly or indirectly, on the orientalist nature of the thug archive, van Woerkens's The Strangled Traveler is from my point of view the most perplexing, Wagner's 'The Deconstructed Stranglers' the most sceptical – though paradoxically probably the most convincing, and Dash's Thug the most surprising. All three identify thuggee as some sort of historical reality, yet all three acknowledge an element of orientalism (exaggeration, bias, prejudice, distortion) in its original construction.
He also saysI survey the work of a number of historians of thuggee, both western and eastern (Gupta, Gordon, Chatterjee, Roy, van Woerkens, Wagner, Dash), to see what they, explicitly or implicitly, conclude...
, which supports my struggles to find clear statements attributed to some of these. Rawat & Mukherjee (2025) align their narrative with Wagner's account. - Though I'd read Lloyd, his paper is very indirect which makes it difficult to use in view of WP:V. I haven't been able to find anything on his background online, though his 2006 paper is referred to as a dissertation. He's not presented as having a PhD or any position but he's referenced in Wagner (2007) and Dash on reddit, as well as other literature reviews so I'm going to give him more weight. (pending discussion below)
- Chakraborty (2021) (who is prolific on thuggee and its literary representation) says the following:
- (I'll continue to add to this as I read more around the reception of these POVs) Joko2468 (talk) 20:09, 5 February 2026 (UTC)
- It's near impossible to achieve neutrality between the POV that rejects the colonial sources and the one that merely seeks to deconstruct and reinterpret them while avoiding WP:FALSEBALANCE. Still to work out how to represent this in the opening sentence, taking into account WP:UNDUE.
Lead
editI tried to restore long term stable lead however, this edit has been reverted. Given how many bold edits have been recently made without discussion across the article,can we maintain WP:STATUSQUO at least for lead? ArvindPalaskar (talk) 15:27, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- I left notice of my plans on the talk page at 07:30 on 16 January and have received two 'thanks' for them from other editors. You haven't offered any rationale other than that you're uncomfortable with the scale of edits that have taken place. If you'd like to revert back to the original while we discuss then that's okay but I don't consider it constructive.
I submitted the article for GA review, so I may opt for an RfC to gain consensus on these edits if this discussion takes too long (I don't want to waste the reviewer's time).Other editors are free to weigh in ofcourse. Joko2468 (talk) 15:39, 7 February 2026 (UTC)- The users that 'thanked' were BrechtBro (who responded to my third opinion request above) and Simple non combat (who had previously edited the article). Joko2468 (talk) 16:18, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Please go into specifics of what problems you have with the content I wrote-- ideally we wouldn't completely revert and would work on improving that content. Joko2468 (talk) 15:43, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Just because you wish to make it a GA, it doesnt mean you are allowed to make unilateral edits. The current lead tries to desperately treat it as some ancient phenomenon when it was not one. Zalaraz (talk) 16:26, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Can you explain please? "Purported to have ancient origins" is a summary of what James Law's assistant said,
Sleeman actually thought it was medieval in origin-- this was literally the next edit I was going to make. [Actually the sources do explicitly support the colonial portrayal of thuggee as being ancient, I was confusing Sleeman's claims with those of his grandson, who claimed they were medieval in origin.] The lede does not lend credence to the claim and the infobox (cited to three sources) says 17th-18th centuries. Joko2468 (talk) 16:32, 7 February 2026 (UTC)- I'm also confused by this remark, as the new lead reads to me as significantly more neutral, clearly dating (and attributing) the colonial accounts to the 19th century, and is on the whole more clear while also hewing more closely to the scholarship. It's far from perfect, the language especially could be more plain and it would benefit from a copy edit specifically addressing that (I think "crime phenomenon" is unclear on its own, though clarified in subsequent grafs).
- I think the criticism of "bold edits made without discussion" is unfair, given both the discussion above and the extensive notes that @Joko2468 has provided both here and in the log. We are all encouraged to be WP:BOLD. These edits seem to be careful and of high quality and have saved the article a trip to the NPOV-land.
- It would be helpful if @Zalaraz and @ArvindPalaskar could be specific about what the issues are with the new lead, besides it being new, so that they can be addressed? The previous lead - which was not long-term stable - had significant NPOV problems. —BrechtBro (talk) 17:50, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- It's explicitly presented as the view of British colonialists. I don't understand where you got "unilaterally" from, I've been as transparent and inclusive as possible (16 Jan.:
I've posted what I've written so far to my sandbox as I make a start on tackling the colonial era, feel free to comment on it here or in the sandbox talk page.
) and just now I mentioned invoking an RfC. I appreciate that it was wrong of me to put pressure on ArvindPalaskar, I just wanted to save a reviewer the trouble(I've just had my time wasted with one of my reviews). Joko2468 (talk) 16:33, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Can you explain please? "Purported to have ancient origins" is a summary of what James Law's assistant said,
- Just because you wish to make it a GA, it doesnt mean you are allowed to make unilateral edits. The current lead tries to desperately treat it as some ancient phenomenon when it was not one. Zalaraz (talk) 16:26, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Apologies if I came off a little aggressive, I should have tempered my frustration. Let's work through the lede, it's the part of the article that I've given the least attention to (per WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY) and could maybe do with improving. Joko2468 (talk) 17:42, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
- Copy-pasting my rationale for the infobox:
I changed the infobox, Dash is explicit that thuggee couldn't be called "organised crime" and modern historians do not consider it to be an organisation. As I said above, thuggee refers to the crime and therefore the event infobox is more appropriate for the phenomenon-- this also allows us to convey convictions, motives, victims etc. Per MOS:LEADIMAGE, the image of "Thugs" from the late 19th century isn't the most natural or obvious image and neither is it in all likelihood the most accurate to represent the article content (the Thugs pictured very likely have nothing to do with the thugs of the 1830s and they might not have even committed the same type of crime, thus misleading the reader). A period depiction of thuggee being carried out is the most natural image in this case and the one I've selected well-encapsulates the deception they were known for and from which the word is derived.
- The relevant context is that (per the article) the legal term "Thug" was instrumentalised in the late 1830s as an umbrella term for crimes unrelated to the original 'thuggee' that scholars and pop culture recognise. As an aside, my to-do list prior to this was (1) better cover the debate on sources (2)
better cover Sleeman's claims about the originsdone (3) cleanup the lede and amend POV wording as necessary Joko2468 (talk) 17:46, 7 February 2026 (UTC) In my sandbox is a proposal to reorganise and expand the Historical evaluations section so that it's clearer and better introduces the modern revisionism.Joko2468 (talk) 16:51, 8 February 2026 (UTC)
- Copy-pasting my rationale for the infobox:
Neutrality issue on presentation of denialist scholarly POV
editAt present the article states in the lede Some scholars reject the historicity of the colonial sources and therein hold the thuggee phenomenon to be entirely imagined by or an invention of the colonial regime.
and in the main body Some historians hold thuggee to be a myth invented by the colonial regime to extend its control over the itinerant population or to expand its legal jurisdiction (Van Woerkens 2002: p.7; Lloyd, 2006: p.38). In apportioning no historical value to the so-called 'thuggee archive', some scholars hold thuggee as described in Western accounts to be largely imaginary (Wagner 2007: p.6).
I authored this content, however the nature of the implicit conclusions of these historians/ literary scholars is contested by historian Tom Lloyd, who shares their views on the quality of the sources. I'll present the relevant passages below, any input on how to present this would be greatly appreciated. I also made a mistake in citing Lloyd to the first sentence of the body, his assertion (p.38) is specifically contesting the colonial authorities' motivations for initiating trials in 1829-1830 and this fails WP:V.
- Lloyd (2006: p.8):
Wagner and Dash argue that Chatterjee’s account (and others that they characterise as similar, such as those by P. Roy (1998) and Flathuín (2001, 2004)) denies the existence of ‘thuggee’ while lacking the basis to make such a denial... Of course, Wagner and Dash here try to bind the likes of Chatterjee into their own historical and historiographical projects, which rest on the prospect of reaching The Truth behind things – in this case, the existence of ‘thuggee’ behind the various misrepresentations of it. Yet all Wagner and Dash succeed in doing is highlighting their own discomfort in coming to terms with the accounts of ‘thuggee’ by writers investigating its discursive representation. Wagner assumes that the scholars he criticises intend to prove that the colonial representation is a misrepresentation, rather than—simply—a particular representation specific to supporters of colonialism.31... Chatterjee does not need to disprove the existence of ‘thuggee’ as separate from the colonial mind, for his account is not aiming to prove its non-existence. Rather, as with P. Roy’s account, it engages with ‘thuggee’ on a discursive plane, making a literary critique in which the texts analysed are treated as “representations…neither evaluated on their supposed accuracy, nor assessed on the extent of knowledge of India which they display”.
In short, Lloyd rejects the assertions by Wagner and Dash that these scholars implicitly deny the existence of something behind the colonial representation. - Van Woerkens (2002: p.7):
According to some historians, Thuggism (the name given to the phenomenon) is a myth invented by the British in order to extend their control over a mobile population, or to seize criminal jurisdiction in areas that had until then been in the hands of the Moghul rulers, and so forth.
She doesn't elaborate on who these historians are, but it's safe to assume that she's referring to Chatterjee, Roy, and Flathuín. - Wagner (2007: p.6):
The more critical approach to the subject of thuggee found in these recent works makes concessions to the problems associated with the use of colonial representations and is thus expressive of the lasting influence of the work of scholars such as Edward Said.20 In its most radical form the literary critical approach has also given rise to several recent studies, occupied only with the deconstruction of the colonial representation of thuggee, as opposed to the historicity of the subject. Denying the sources any historical value, other than being evidence of inherent Orientalist bias, scholars such as Parama Roy, Amal Chatterjee and Maíre ní Fhlathúin have argued that thuggee as described in Western accounts was little more than a figment of the colonial imagination.
"so-called 'thuggee archive'" is actually from p.8, this should have been added to the citation. - Macfie (2008: p.384):
I survey the work of a number of historians of thuggee, both western and eastern (Gupta, Gordon, Chatterjee, Roy, van Woerkens, Wagner, Dash), to see what they, explicitly or implicitly, conclude...
Joko2468 (talk) 15:42, 10 February 2026 (UTC)
- I'm considering submitting this to the Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard to get more advice. It's quite a controversial and tricky matter so I wouldn't be completely comfortable making the judgement alone. Joko2468 (talk) 15:48, 10 February 2026 (UTC)
- Noticeboard discussion: Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard#Request for support on neutrality judgement at Thuggee. Feel free to engage here or there, ideally whichever is most active. Joko2468 (talk) 19:03, 13 February 2026 (UTC)
- No discussion on this has been forthcoming after seven days, so I made the decision to cite these sources directly rather than presenting the disputed implicit conclusions of these scholars. As stated in the edit summary, please see this sentence from the article and the cited quotations for the most concise overview of the issue:
Literary scholar Amal Chatterjee describes the colonial representation of thuggee as "a fiction that served all the interests of British power in India", wherein it provided conclusive proof of the moral superiority of the 'advanced' European over the 'primitive' Indian and was presented as a triumph of Christian faith over Indian tradition.[1]
- Joko2468 (talk) 11:20, 20 February 2026 (UTC)
- No discussion on this has been forthcoming after seven days, so I made the decision to cite these sources directly rather than presenting the disputed implicit conclusions of these scholars. As stated in the edit summary, please see this sentence from the article and the cited quotations for the most concise overview of the issue:
- Noticeboard discussion: Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard#Request for support on neutrality judgement at Thuggee. Feel free to engage here or there, ideally whichever is most active. Joko2468 (talk) 19:03, 13 February 2026 (UTC)
Popular culture sourcing
editI've had to remove this from the In popular culture section due to there not being a reliable source to support it. The text reads as follows:
- Thuggee gangs play a prominent part in the 2018 Bengali horror fiction novel Ebong Inquisition by Avik Sarkar.
Joko2468 (talk) 11:43, 11 May 2026 (UTC)
- This didn't fit in the section I originally had it, leaving it here for now:
- The thuggee campaign also saw the British authorities assert their right to 'paramount authority' in India in territories belonging to independent rulers, who were seen as failing in their duty to protect the local population.[2][3][4]
- Joko2468 (talk) 20:42, 13 May 2026 (UTC)
- ↑ Chatterjee 1998, pp. 4, 128, 141: "like Teltscher, I treat them 'primarily as representations. That is to say they are neither evaluated on their supposed accuracy, nor assessed on the extent of knowledge of India which they display.'"
- Lloyd 2006, p. 8: "Wagner and Dash argue that Chatterjee's account (and others that they characterise as similar, such as those by P. Roy (1998) and Flathuín (2001, 2004)) denies the existence of 'thuggee'... Of course, Wagner and Dash here try to bind the likes of Chatterjee into their own historical and historiographical projects, which rest on the prospect of reaching The Truth behind things"
- ↑ Wagner 2007, p. 203.
- ↑ Singha 1993, p. 88.
- ↑ Lloyd 2006, p. 41.


