Tags: fiction

weenchester christmas

...a little bit of bitchiness...

What am I supposed to do with a story that had a pretty decent plot for a high school au and nice and hot sex scenes but at the same time had shitty dialogs, didn't give reasons why characters (major and minor) acted the way they did, ended at the moment nothing is clear (so yeah, a sequel would be a good idea) oh! and changed abso-fucking-lutely everything about Jared and Jensen. They're not OOC. They're OC! Different families (or lack of family members), different age (Jensen younger than Jared) and of course different characters! I hate and like this story at the same time. But there are more cons than pros... Ugh, I don't know... D: