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Greetings y'all

I am looking for some quick canon help. Specifically, the events that took place when the guys found out about Stuart's death. My recollections are a *little* fuzzy and most of my books are in storage. The story has mostly written itself, but I want to get the details right.  Help?!

Greetings folks,

I am looking for some canon assistance - specifically Germany, after the guys learned about Stuart.  I seem to remember that John said something at the first show after hearing the news.  I read this SO long ago, don't remember which source was best and whether or not it is in my storage unit.

So...anyone comfortable enough to give me some small background, or point me to the best print-source for this info, I'd be much abliged. Most of it is done in my head, so help if you can?

Pen name: Strawberry or llama.
Title of the story: Deep desire
Rating of the story: Pg-13, only has strong emotions and strong language.
Genre:Short or one-shot, sad.
Story length:around 1200 words
Time and space setting: Present time in Abbey road studio.
Main characters/paring: Paul with implied Mclennon and Paul/linda.
Warnings: I'm trying to make this very sad, due to the things that are dealt with in the story.
Beta type: Someone good with grammar, because i'm horrible. Someone that helps with the story as well, almost a co-writer.
Summary: Paul Wonders into a cellar like place in Abbey road studios and finds the Mirror of Erised collecting dust there.
note: The mirror of Erised is from the Harry potter universe.
Albus Dumbledore: "Let me explain. The happiest man on earth would be able to use the Mirror of Erised like a normal mirror, that is, he would look into it and see himself exactly as he is. Does that help?"
Harry Potter: "It shows us what we want… whatever we want…"
Albus Dumbledore: "Yes and no. It shows us nothing more or less than the deepest, most desperate desire of our hearts."
— Albus Dumbledore explaining to Harry Potter what the mirror does.[src]
The Mirror of Erised is a mirror, which, according to Albus Dumbledore, shows the "deepest and most desperate desire of one's heart." The name "Erised" is "desire" spelled backwards, as if reflected in a mirror. The happiest person in the world would look in the mirror and see a reflection of exactly the way he or she is. Inscribed across the top of the frame is the following text: Erised stra ehru oyt ube cafru oyt on wohsi. Reversing the inscription and rearranging the spaces produces: I show not your face but your heart's desire.

My email: Thayna0linhares@hotmail.com/ Love0thayna@gmail.com
My Tumblr: Thewritingberry.tumblr.com

Hi there, supposed crowd of eager betas.

Pen name: My name is Aanahitt. Or at least, that's what I'm called here. Let me tell you - though I suppose you're probably more used to it - but it is weird to be called by a pen name. Weird.
Title of the story: All of them. As in, I write one-shots, and I need someone to just... be available for me to message them with any story I want and go "It's not working!"
Rating of the story: Will go from PG to R. Possibly X, possibly not. I'm not sure yet if I feel comfortable posting that. Here's my rating guide. So you know what I'm talking about.
Genre: Once again, like the rating, I do one shots because of the variety available, so just... be ready I suppose.
Story length: umm..... it varies. And I'm kind of just hoping you'll be around... For a while...
Time and space setting: Varies.
Main characters/paring: John/Paul. It's slash.
Warnings: I would expect there to be drug use and swearing. I think everything else is covered by that rating thing.
Beta type: I need someone who will revise my stuff, alright? Not editing. In fact, let me tell you a little story about editing and revising. I used to write with someone (bunch of pros and cons there), but! when I messed something up, they would go in and fix it. Now, my sister edits my work (not these stories, that would be awkward) and when I mess something up, she tells me to fix it. And I sit there, and I stare at the words, trying to figure out what the hell I did, and why it's wrong.
Summary: Varies. Clearly.

Oh, and I've written like three stories so far, so you can check them out here!
Thank you, contact me!

I have a fic that needs betaing!
The fic is Mission Mclennon :

Rated: NC-17
Summary: A normal Tumblr fangirl finds her reality has randomly been transported to not only the 1950’s, but also to Liverpool. She ends up going to the same school as John and slowly growing closer to her idol. Over time she takes as her mission to make John and Paul realize their hidden love and make sure that they end up together. Well the only thing that she didn’t count on was how incredibly hard headed john was and just how much homophobia there was back in the 50’s and 60’s.
Type: Comedy, romance, drama, AU
Pairings: Roxie/john, Roxie/Paul, John/Paul, Roxie/Astrid, Astrid/Stu…

If you are interested just submit your email to me, I have it in my google docs so it can be edited in any computer, iphone and (i think) android, also there is a chat window there where you can ask me things.

Please help me out here.

PS: also looking for ilustrations.

Hi, my name is Mary, and I love write. Sadly the Brazilian fandom of McLennon is really small, and I would like to translate my fanfic to English. But I'm just in the level 3 of my English course and I need help... Does anyone could correct my fanfic or something like that?

Here is some information about the fanfic:

Title: Free As A Bird
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: John Lennon/Paul McCartney

Synopsis: "Whatever happened to the life that we once knew, can we really live without each other?"
Warning: The history will have sex, drugs and rock and roll. If you do not like any of these things it is


“So I closed my eyes and I felt in another world. I could be awake or dreaming, I didn’t care. I was feeling the best sensation of all my life, the cold wint on my face… No time to feel anything, just that holy emotion to be a 100 feet tall with the guy that I love (who was extremely sexy).”

My name is Paul McCartney, I have 17 years old and I study at the Skyscraper Internal School. I am in my last year and I can’t wait for my graduate. I am from Liverpool, but when I made 14 years old, my dad sent me to Oslo so that I could graduate from high school. Then, I and my friend George Harrison, shared a room in the Skyscraper’s Campus. He is from Liverpool too and we met since I was a kid.

Actually I don’t know what expect from this year, even George and I feed our dream to be musicians, I know that is really hard to get this. My dad is really worry about me, he wants me to have a real job, but, something tell me that I will not be happy if I don’t follow my dream.

I just feel some kind of realef, you know? That is my last academic year, I will be free to, technically, do whatever I want! Some mix of fear and “i-can’t-wait”, I think is that. That’s gonna be a great year.


So, please, someone help me!!!

fingersfalling
Title: Holding Onto the Things that Slip Through your Fingers.
Rating: Pg-13 or R (undecided currently)
Genre: Humor, Drama, Romance
Length: Long. Around 50,000 at least . . . Though most of it is still unwritten, I have 4/5ths planned out well.
Time: 1965-1969 and 1980 AU
Pairing: McLennon
Warnings: Drug-use, sexual thoughts, possible sex, slash.

Beta type: I'm trying to be extremely accurate historically, so anyone who can catch me on things would be great. Also help with comma overuse and letting me know when my writing or dialogue is not working or is not funny. I would like someone who can tell me if I'm messing up the mood.

Summary:  Aging change anyone’s point of view, and makes them realize their selfishness as a youth. Paul is given a chance to rewrite his story, and he promises things will be better for all of them. Along the way, he discovers things that perhaps he hadn’t known before . . . 

The prologue has already been posted, you can look it up on my page, but here's the link either way.
(Click here~)

I'd love to get help looking over the first chapter.

Pen name: Nat_lennon
Title of the story: No Greater Love (this might change)
Rating or the story: NC-17 due to sex, drugs, adult themes
Genre: Angsty Romance
Story length: unknown, so far it's 4 chapters long, about 100 pages total
Time and space setting: It begins in 1960, God knows when it ends :3
Main characters/paring: Paul/OC - John/OC - Het
Warnings: -
Beta type: spelling, grammar, historical knowledge, word usage. Not many characterization issues, but someone who could also comment on plot holes or could help with character development would also be nice
Summary: It begins in Hamburg, in 1960. I wouldn't really know how to summarise the story, really. It's about two girls from two very different backgrounds and the hardships they face as they become older.
Deadline: No deadline whatsoever.

just like the header said.

One is a 'no-parring' the other is a 'all four'.

I need someone who will be honest but kind (i'm a bit shy and soft skinned *g*)
please send me your mail, if you are interested, and I'll send you the fic's.
Cheers!

Greetings fellow J-P folks,

I am in need of a beta.. I've never worked with one before, so if you've been a beta, please inbox me. The plot is pretty solid, the grammar is solid, the canon is solid, but somehow, I'm at a point where I need about a paragraph to move things from one level to the next and having someone to bounce an idea or two off of might be the ticket to getting the story done


Genre: Angsty Romance
Story length: Unknown
Time and space setting: Somewhere in Los Angeles 1974
Warnings: NC17 rating due to sex, drugs and self-harm
Beta type: Looking for someone to bounce ideas off of, and get some help with the hotness : )
Summary: Paul is hallucinating. John isn't really there, is he?.