My first poem...^_^

Hey!! Here's my first poem I was talking about in my comment back to someone...(sorry, I don't remember your username)...it's very emotional, but it's what I feel...let me know what you think by commenting...that way I can improve the next time I write a poem...lataz...;)

P.S. Sorry, but the poem is really long, but I hope you guys like it...^_^...oh, and so you know, it's about one of my best friends and of her friend...don't forget to comment...lataz...;)

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Hey...I'm new to this community and I think I'm the first one to update in this community...but anyways...I dance ballet, tap, and jazz...but, I was hoping that I could start canoe paddling, however, I know that practice for paddling is everyday and I have dance three times a week...so, if I do join a club or get onto the team (next year), I would fall behind in my dancing...and dancing is something that, you know, keeps me in shape...so, yeah...but I mean, I'm willing to try something new...I'm just not sure if paddling is the best thing for me to do...cuz I have never played a team sport before and I am not that coordinated let alone in shape...

So, yeah...I enjoy going to the beach, swimming, and boogie boarding...the only bummer is that because of the weather being kinda chilly, I haven't really been able to go to the beach, not even the pool...I was supposed to go to the beach for a picnic on Saturday with my friends, only I can't go cuz me and my family are cleaning the house and if we go to the picnic, then we would be there for a really long time and we would hardly get any cleaning done...and believe me, we need a whole day to start cleaning just one bedroom...so, yeah, I miss the beach, the water, the sun, the hot guys and their bodies...*smirks*, I even miss wearing my bikini...*sigh*...hopefully I'll get to go to the beach soon...

Well, I hope more people join this community...lataz...;)
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