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So, I've designed three possible ad graphics. I ran one and I'm not thrilled with the results so far (although maybe I'm just impatient). I'm considering asking them to swap out my image for another. Here's the one I am running: (no link, so it's not just me running a free ad!)




And these are the alternate ones I'm considering

   

Thoughts?

The tax weasels one is the best, I think. Assuming it does actually have tax weasels.

I'm afraid the others have some communication issues. Which one of them is Bartleby? Which order should the speech bubbles be read in? Is lvl 20 high enough to be a problem or is the fodder delivering itself? 

Yes, a lot of this becomes obvious enough at a second glance and taking a moment to figure it out. However, most people do not glance twice at ads. 

Haust Wrote: Assuming it does actually have tax weasels.

Oh, it does. They can smell silver and steal shiny, shiny objects. They even keep a hoard like dragons do. Honestly, they are a small part of the story, but I think are representative of the general humor and tone of the story. The other two are more a "gestalt" kind of thing rather than a scene that actually happens. The bounty hunters actually come individually, not as a group, but they FEEL ganged up on because peril is at every corner. 

And the bad guys don't actually have forward-facing stats. That's just meant to convey "LitRPG" really.

I usually saw some stickman ads. I don't know how effective that kind of ads was, but it's usually more interesting to gave my attention to because I could catch more glimpses of what the story is about in that four-panel of stickman rather than other kinds of ads.

H Behevras Wrote: I could catch more glimpses of what the story is about in that four-panel of stickman rather than other kinds of ads.

I've seen those, but my brain isn't set up to think in 4-panel vignettes. And I can't draw stick figures very well. I always get disqualified playing Hangman.

The stickman didn't need to be pretty. Look at your blurb, I think it's enough to turn what happened in your blurb into four panel. Canva got some free shapes and such. Or you could make it the way you made those three of your ads.

I don't think it has a strong hook yet. Out of the three, I think the third one is the best because it's at least visually distinctive. That said, I'm still not getting a clear sense of what makes your story stand out. For example, my hook leans into the core contrast of the story: the MC can wield demonic powers, while his brother is a legendary demon hunter. I'd try to highlight the most unique or intriguing aspect of your story in the same way.

yeah, at the size we're required to use, getting in enough text for my hook makes it look blurry as a jpg. if we could use a png, it would be fine. have a look: