New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.

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It's been a bumpy road, but I am happy it has brought me here. For the last few years, the escapism of writing has been a loyal shoulder to lean on in trying times. I won't bore you all with a most mundane backstory, but I will say that I've been many things, but none feel as rewarding as being a writer. It is an addictive experience to share the results of my hobby with friends, family, and strangers alike.
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A little blurb about my web novel, Adventures of an Exiled Demon:
Aug, despised by all those who reside west of the continental divide, is taken under the wing of an imprisoned adventurer from a long-past generation. After eight years, he is no longer a skinny, powerless pup, yet the dangers of the continent may be greater still.
Set loose on the unsuspecting western hemisphere and given no purpose by either mentor or passed mother, Aug embarks on an adventure full of discovery, new friends, danger, and oh-so-sweet treasure.
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P.S. I would love feedback in any form, as I am always trying to improve my writing!