New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.
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It's been a bumpy road, but I am happy it has brought me here. For the last few years, the escapism of writing has been a loyal shoulder to lean on in trying times. I won't bore you all with a most mundane backstory, but I will say that I've been many things, but none feel as rewarding as being a writer. It is an addictive experience to share the results of my hobby with friends, family, and strangers alike.
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A little blurb about my web novel, Adventures of an Exiled Demon:
Aug, despised by all those who reside west of the continental divide, is taken under the wing of an imprisoned adventurer from a long-past generation. After eight years, he is no longer a skinny, powerless pup, yet the dangers of the continent may be greater still.
Set loose on the unsuspecting western hemisphere and given no purpose by either mentor or passed mother, Aug embarks on an adventure full of discovery, new friends, danger, and oh-so-sweet treasure.
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P.S. I would love feedback in any form, as I am always trying to improve my writing!
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A little blurb about my web novel, Adventures of an Exiled Demon:
Aug, despised by all those who reside west of the continental divide, is taken under the wing of an imprisoned adventurer from a long-past generation. After eight years, he is no longer a skinny, powerless pup, yet the dangers of the continent may be greater still.
Set loose on the unsuspecting western hemisphere and given no purpose by either mentor or passed mother, Aug embarks on an adventure full of discovery, new friends, danger, and oh-so-sweet treasure.
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P.S. I would love feedback in any form, as I am always trying to improve my writing!
Re: New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.
#3
Addiction often leads to bumpy roads. Welcome Oasid. Good luck with your writing!
Re: New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.
#4
Welcome to Royal Road! I hope your story gets lots of readers!
Re: New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.
#5
Welcome to royal roads! And if you want feed back you can always ask an author here or a reader! The goal is that we can help you and everyone else become better when they ask!
Re: New web novelist looking for honest feedback. High fantasy story with modern sting.
#6
Welcome. I hope you enjoy RR and your fictions find an audience.
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