Re: I want reviews for my book . I WANT HONEST REVIEWS

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Clown128 Wrote: https://www.royalroad.com/author-dashboard/dashboard/140952



SPECIALLY FOR MY THIRD CHAPTER
Heya! Looks like you linked your dashboard to us, which we cannot see.  peodistress

Try this link to place it in your signature: just generate and save the code that pops up. 

https://www.royalroad.com/account/signature

Or link to OP‘s fiction for those looking for it: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/140952/journey-of-a-baby-to-god-hood

Re: I want reviews for my book . I WANT HONEST REVIEWS

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I will swap an honest review if you want. 

But if you're interested, I would also like you to help me solve something. My fiction is a collection of loosely connected short stories and for some reason, the most popular chapter is the 2nd part of the 3rd story (titled "Setha Kabi"). Not the entire 3rd story, just this part specifically. FOR THE LIFE OF ME I CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHY! I like it, don't get me wrong, but it's mostly a flashback. It doesn't contain any grand reveal, it just establishes a character. I don't see how it could be more special than any other chapter. If you could leave a comment under the chapter with an explanation, I'd be grateful (if you also want me to pay specific attention and comment on something, I'd be happy to).

Re: I want reviews for my book . I WANT HONEST REVIEWS

#6
Ever wonder why bodies are buried six feet under? Secretly, it is so that zombies can't dig their way out.
I learned this the hard way. I was walking around the graveyard, and suddenly a rotting hand grabbed my ankle. Then, because of that, I was recruited to Z.E.S.T., or more like forced into it. Once you learn the secret of zombies, you need to join Z.E.S.T. or go to a psycho ward.
Now you may ask, what is Z.E.S.T.?  Z.E.S.T. Is the Zombie Exterminator Secret Team. So whenever a zombie shows up, it is our job to handle them.

https://www.royalroadcdn.com/public/cove...1765257196
             Z.E.S.T.