I Created A Textbook
See the title? Everytime I write, it just ends up stupid!! I mean the grammar is alright, the plot is there somewhere but the words! THE EFFING WORDS!
They don't mean anything! There is no expression! When it's suppose to be funny, it doesn't feel it. The drama couldn't be felt because it is just a bunch of words. People couldn't see how miserable the characters are because the words are not convincing enogh to show that they ARE having problems. In other words, I created a textbook.
I tried to insert funny scenes so that people won't get bored with draggy words. But it only changed into a textbook with jokes in between. Sigh... Let's just say I LIKE to describe things till the maximum. And just an hour ago, I deleted ALL my fanfics because of they're just so expressionless!! How can you put emotions to it?!
HOW?!
They don't mean anything! There is no expression! When it's suppose to be funny, it doesn't feel it. The drama couldn't be felt because it is just a bunch of words. People couldn't see how miserable the characters are because the words are not convincing enogh to show that they ARE having problems. In other words, I created a textbook.
I tried to insert funny scenes so that people won't get bored with draggy words. But it only changed into a textbook with jokes in between. Sigh... Let's just say I LIKE to describe things till the maximum. And just an hour ago, I deleted ALL my fanfics because of they're just so expressionless!! How can you put emotions to it?!
HOW?!