Story Title: He's just A Kid (also know as the most twisted AU incest fic ever!)
Link to the Fic: Linky Link :D
Summary: hey! this is razorblades and this happens to be my first fanfic... it's
from
a comic...well, i got it from a a scanlation site, i think it was
sakura-crisis.net or game over and continue.. gomen ne, my memory is
real
bad...and thought it would be so great to re-write it, casting the
roles to
some j-rockers. please give me your comments at [email removed to protect the guilty]
thanks
:) so this it it...
First of off, I want to know what comic or whatever she was reading that produced this crap. I'm tempted to email her asking for it.
Hi… my name is Hayashi Yoshiki Hi Yoshiki! Welcome to your first AA Meeting! and I’m really fortunate father. Awe. Once I
was
sixteen ( and drunk ) See, he needs the AA meetings, I managed to get a girl pregnant. She told me I
was
suppose to help her out, THEN she left me with the kid without another
word.
Needless to say, my life changed from that time on… but somehow, I
think
that child was a gift from God. I raised the kid all the way through
high
school as well, with people whispering behind my back. But I
persevered… and
slowly, thirteen years went by…
“ Hey Shinya! What are you still doing here?”
And who would have known…
“ Yes, I’m supposed to be at school now… But I’m cooking you breakfast!
Why
don’t you get up earlier?!” he snapped as he waved the skillet angrily
at
me. Keep in mind that Shinya is 13 here.
That he would grow to be such a cute kid? © Is that a copyright sign? o.o Do you own that sentence?
“ Smells good…” I commented, looking over his shoulder. Wait, your 13 year old son, who you have a responsibility to take care of, is skipping school to make you breakfast and all you have to say is” Smells good"? What kind of a father are you Yoshiki?
The only thing I can say it’s a pity he’s a boy… Huh? No, seriously. What?
I groaned. He placed the plate of pancakes on the table and leaned on
the
edge.
“ So, is it good or not?” he asked. His face was just inches away from
mine.
“ See, I didn’t feel like buying the pre-made ones today, so I made the
soup
myself. It’s probably not that great but…” he paused.
I feel… like a husband! O.O
“ Well, you have to finish it even if you don’t like it.” He shrugged.
Shinya has never seen his mother before… So you take advantage of his lack of having a mother by sexing him up? What a great father!
“ Of course I will. How could I ever dislike the things you make?” I
got up
from my seat and gave him a hug from the back.
How many families have a kid like mine…?
Shinya blushed and pushed my arms away.
“ I-I’ve got to go to school...” he stuttered.
“ What’s wrong? You don’t seem to like me touching you *giggles* Dirty thoughts. anymore…” I
pouted.
“ Or are you just too old for hugs now…?” I grinned cheekily at him.
I guess it’s time to stop treating him like a kid…and start treating him like my sex slave! Ride me harder bitch!
“ W-what are you talking about?” he glared furiously at me.
“ Do you know how much hornier I get when I’m in the shower andwhenever you’re also in the shower near me?!” his eyes look
somewhat glassy as he spoke. I took the liability of filling in a few words there ;)
“ It’s because of you!” Shinya’s voice cracked.
“ What do you mean…pain?” Who said anything about pain? What are they doing in the shower?! I asked him, full of concern.
“ I don’t know!” he said in frustration. "Daddy, I just want you to touch me!" ...I feel so dirty after writing that...
Why didn’t I notice this before…? Have I been pushing him away the
whole
time?
“ … Dad…” he flung his apron on the floor and unbuttoned the jacket of
his
school uniform and sat on the tabletop. Whoa Nelly!
“ Tell me where the pain is… show me where it hurts.” I asked
worriedly. "Is it in your pants?"
“ N-no, it’s okay…I don’t think you’ll know why anyway…” he stuttered,
his
arms waving wildly. You just got into a sexy pose and then you say forget it? Shinya you cocktease! *waves finger at him*
“ And why wouldn’t I know about it?” I replied, looking at him
curiously.
“ Tell me when it hurts…” I slipped my hand beneath his shirt, pulling
it
slightly above his chest, holding it there. My fingers slipped down his
collar bone and rested at his left left what?, where his heart was. Soon, I found
myself toying with his pink nipples, rubbing it in a circular manner,
pinching it lightly and caressing it gently, yet teasingly till it
turned a
little hard. Did Shinya cook that food in oil or in alcohol?
*snips away Some more nipple play*
“ I can fix it…” assuring him, I unbuckled his pants, watching it slide
down
his long, pale slender legs. The pants fell on their own! They are magical pants. *__* Oooo. Aaaaa Magical~
“ But-“ I interrupted him.
“ Is it here that’s feeling strange?” I questioned him, my fingers on
the
band of his white underwear.
“ W-Wait! No!” he shook his head, pushing my hands away, shielding
himself
from me.
“ Stop! Why are you taking off my pants?” he demanded, tears of
frustration
slid down his pale, smooth cheeks.
I ignored his cries as I stripped him out of his briefs. Holy shit! Rape! Why was I not warned for this? His frail arms
pushing me away, only in vain.
“ Why are you so embarrassed? I raised you!” ...This is messed up. What about morals and society? Oh wait. Shinya got him drunk with his cooking. Come back to the AA meetings Yoshiki. We miss you. :( I tried reasoning with him
“ But-“ he protested tearfully.
“ Move your hands…I’m just going to make the pain go away…’ I looked at
his
eyes, which immediately shut when I made direct contact with him.
“ I-:” I traced circle patterns on his thighs playfully, in attempt to
shut
him up, which I succeeded in.
“ Oh!” he exclaimed softly as pre-come drip out of the head of his
penis,
onto the wooden surface of the dinning table. umm...
“ When did this start happening?” I asked him.
“ I-I’m sorry, I don’t know… ” he paused and thought for a moment.
“ It’s just that whenever I’m with you, this would start happening…” he
whispered meekly, wiping the tears from his eyes.
“ Don’t be silly, why are you crying?’ I asked him, touching his wet butt cheeks.
“ I can help you…” I let my hand fall down his face, stopping at his
semi-erect length.
“ I can make this pain go away…” I stroked his arousal repeatedly,
ascending
in speed rhythmically, before dipping my head below to lick the sticky
white
substance forming at the base of his cock. At the base?
“ No… stop…” he commanded weakly. Without hesitation, I took the whole
of
him in my mouth and started sucking on him.
“ D-dad, stop…” he pleaded. Stubbornly, I refused and continue sucking
on
him. Rape! Where's my fucking warning tag?
“ Ah- Uh….un…” he moaned as his slender hips arched forward for more,
faster
as he was reaching orgasm.
“ Ah!” he screamed as he fell back on his back.
“Nn…you see…?” I wiped his cum that dribbled down the corner of my
mouth. I
looked at him, sprawled on the table, panting, his long, sleek auburn
hair
fanning his face like an angel. His chest heaved up and down as he
breath,
his face flushed. He looked so beautiful
“ Didn’t I tell-”
“ Dad..” he flung himself at me, encircling his arms around my neck and
hugged me.
“ I… I- I love y-you…” he stuttered as he looked into my eyes, tears
streaming from the corner of his large almond shape eyes.
“ I really love you…” I was taken aback.
“ Does he know what he’s saying?” No. I thought, but I hugged him back,
tightly.
“ Shinya…” I whispered his name, loosening my tie and undoing the knot,
I
flung it across the kitchen.
But I can’t control myself…
Squeezing shut my eyes to prevent the tears from falling. Sighing, I
look up
at him.
“ Forgive me…” I croaked. Lurching towards him, I planted a kiss on his
moist cheeks before pressing my lips against his succulent pink lips,
pushing my tongue into his willing mouth.
“ Uh.. Haa…”
“ Mm…” I nibbled on his pouty lips.
“ I shouldn’t be doing this… he’s too young..” a wave of regret was
through
me. Finally. Here's the guilt sinking in. Hello Mr. Guilt. Where were you during the blowjob scene? Of course it's only regret for his young age. -_-
But I can’t control myself…
*tiny snip*
I gently lay him down the table gently as I hesitantly reached for a
bottle
of maple syrup near me. Squeezing the bottle and watch as the thick,
sticky
golden brown liquid rained on my long fingers. I squeezed the bottle
harder,
till the syrup coated my fingers messily. Ummm... I'm going to go ahead and say not a good choice of lube. Sticky, sticky, sticky.
“ Wha-” He got up, staring at me.
“ Shh…just hold still, don’t move…” I said as I placed the bottle on
the
counter. Shinya laid back in his original position, his legs spread
before
me. His neglected desire dripping down languidly. Poor, sad weeping cock. *emo penis tear*
*snip - Yoshiki preparing Shinya*
Shinya got up and rest his hand on my chest, trailing it down my
buttons and
finally resting at the top of my pants unbuttoning the button, then
zipped
it down.
“Huh..?” I looked at him, confused.%0%
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A
“ What do you feel, when you’re with me…? “ he asked, lowering himself,
he
knelt down on the floor, in front of me. I rested at the corner of the
table
and he held on me gently, as if not wanting to hurt me.
“ Wait, Shin-” he licked the head of my hard length, running his tongue
up
and down. I suppressed my moans but gave way to pleasure.
“ Mph… Uh…” my fingers entwined with his long, soft hair.
He’s just a kid but…
“ Ah! Uh- Uh!” I moved my hips along with his tongue.
how can I feel this way?
“ Mmm…” I shifted. I can’t take this anymore. I need to feel him. Feel
him
inside me. Now. Shinya's going to fuck Yoshiki?
“ Shinya!” I pulled him away from me by his hair. He stopped and looked
up
at me with pained expression on his face. I lifted him up by his asshole (that's got to hurt)
and
propped him on the table. He splayed his legs before me.
“ Dad?” he gasped in astonishment. I pushed him down carefully.
“ Shinya, stop being so tense, relax…” I bent over him, pressing myself
onto
his
fragile fr
ame, probing his entrance with my erect penis. He
squirmed
underneath me, kicking wildly like a little kid have a temper tantrum. You lied again author! You said that Shinya was going to fuck Yoshiki.
“ Shh…relax…” I hushed him and comb my fingers through his thick hair,
soothingly. He obeyed unwillingly and I could feel the sudden change in
him.
“ Oh…” he moaned as I moved into him, picking up speed, pushing his
legs
further apart to gain more access.
“ Mm…”
“ He’s so tight!” I thought sinfully, as his skin and his balls, slicked with sweat,
slapped against mine. I wanted more. I pushed myself further, deeper
within
him, selfishly.
“ Un… stop! This hurts!” he cried out in pain, gripping tightly onto
the
edge of the table. But I didn‘t care. Rape! Again! Isn't Yoshiki a great father? :D
“ Hold on… a-almost there…” I gasped, licking his earlobe, pleasuring
him
with my mouth as a form of compensation. As I was nearing climax, I
held on
to his length, stroking him, taunting him. His eyes widen.
“ Uh…”
“ Oh…Ooh…”
“ Wah!” white ribbons flew onto my bare chest, trickling down. I
continued
pumping into him till I came into him, filling him up. I release my
grip on
his waist and slid out of him. Kissing him on his pale, slender neck.
“ Ah! No! I can‘t-…” A bit too late, isn't it? I thought , mixed feelings surrounding my mind,
lurking
in my heart.
I don’t know what to do…
“ Ah da-..d” he arched his back for me to shower more kisses on his
moist
skin.
I really do love him…
But I didn’t expect …
“ Ha.. S-shin- Shinya..” I paused, looking at him. Shinya fluttered
his
eyes open and stared at me, as if waiting for me to speak. I gazed
lovingly
into his eyes and pushed the stray strands of butt hair, stuck onto his damp
forehead, and tucked it behind his ears.
This!!
“ Dad!” he hung his arms around my neck and pulled me closer in an
embrace.
“ I love you…” he declared softly, with a serious expression on his
face.
“ I love you too…” I replied back, circling my arms around his waist.
I thank God, and I thank that woman… for giving me this child.
“ I’m late!” Shinya buttoned his jacket hurriedly and slung his duffle
behind his shoulders as he clumsily shoved his feet down his shoes,
making
his way to the doorway, awkwardly.
Then…
“ this is all your fault!” he glared at me, his lips in a pout.
This happiness I have, I won’t let it go…
“ I’ll will just call your teachers again…and invite them over for a group orgy!” I twirled the pen with my
fingers.
“ And what will you say?” he demanded fiercely. I flashed him my penis and with a grin and
picked
up the phone.
“ Hello? Shinya won’t be in school today… there was a wedding…”
“ What?” his teacher exclaimed.
This is my sweet life…
Link to the Fic: Linky Link :D
Summary: hey! this is razorblades and this happens to be my first fanfic... it's
from
a comic...well, i got it from a a scanlation site, i think it was
sakura-crisis.net or game over and continue.. gomen ne, my memory is
real
bad...and thought it would be so great to re-write it, casting the
roles to
some j-rockers. please give me your comments at [email removed to protect the guilty]
thanks
:) so this it it...
First of off, I want to know what comic or whatever she was reading that produced this crap. I'm tempted to email her asking for it.
Hi… my name is Hayashi Yoshiki Hi Yoshiki! Welcome to your first AA Meeting! and I’m really fortunate father. Awe. Once I
was
sixteen ( and drunk ) See, he needs the AA meetings, I managed to get a girl pregnant. She told me I
was
suppose to help her out, THEN she left me with the kid without another
word.
Needless to say, my life changed from that time on… but somehow, I
think
that child was a gift from God. I raised the kid all the way through
high
school as well, with people whispering behind my back. But I
persevered… and
slowly, thirteen years went by…
“ Hey Shinya! What are you still doing here?”
And who would have known…
“ Yes, I’m supposed to be at school now… But I’m cooking you breakfast!
Why
don’t you get up earlier?!” he snapped as he waved the skillet angrily
at
me. Keep in mind that Shinya is 13 here.
That he would grow to be such a cute kid? © Is that a copyright sign? o.o Do you own that sentence?
“ Smells good…” I commented, looking over his shoulder. Wait, your 13 year old son, who you have a responsibility to take care of, is skipping school to make you breakfast and all you have to say is” Smells good"? What kind of a father are you Yoshiki?
The only thing I can say it’s a pity he’s a boy… Huh? No, seriously. What?
I groaned. He placed the plate of pancakes on the table and leaned on
the
edge.
“ So, is it good or not?” he asked. His face was just inches away from
mine.
“ See, I didn’t feel like buying the pre-made ones today, so I made the
soup
myself. It’s probably not that great but…” he paused.
I feel… like a husband! O.O
“ Well, you have to finish it even if you don’t like it.” He shrugged.
Shinya has never seen his mother before… So you take advantage of his lack of having a mother by sexing him up? What a great father!
“ Of course I will. How could I ever dislike the things you make?” I
got up
from my seat and gave him a hug from the back.
How many families have a kid like mine…?
Shinya blushed and pushed my arms away.
“ I-I’ve got to go to school...” he stuttered.
“ What’s wrong? You don’t seem to like me touching you *giggles* Dirty thoughts. anymore…” I
pouted.
“ Or are you just too old for hugs now…?” I grinned cheekily at him.
I guess it’s time to stop treating him like a kid…and start treating him like my sex slave! Ride me harder bitch!
“ W-what are you talking about?” he glared furiously at me.
“ Do you know how much hornier I get when I’m in the shower and
somewhat glassy as he spoke. I took the liability of filling in a few words there ;)
“ It’s because of you!” Shinya’s voice cracked.
“ What do you mean…pain?” Who said anything about pain? What are they doing in the shower?! I asked him, full of concern.
“ I don’t know!” he said in frustration. "Daddy, I just want you to touch me!" ...I feel so dirty after writing that...
Why didn’t I notice this before…? Have I been pushing him away the
whole
time?
“ … Dad…” he flung his apron on the floor and unbuttoned the jacket of
his
school uniform and sat on the tabletop. Whoa Nelly!
“ Tell me where the pain is… show me where it hurts.” I asked
worriedly. "Is it in your pants?"
“ N-no, it’s okay…I don’t think you’ll know why anyway…” he stuttered,
his
arms waving wildly. You just got into a sexy pose and then you say forget it? Shinya you cocktease! *waves finger at him*
“ And why wouldn’t I know about it?” I replied, looking at him
curiously.
“ Tell me when it hurts…” I slipped my hand beneath his shirt, pulling
it
slightly above his chest, holding it there. My fingers slipped down his
collar bone and rested at his left left what?, where his heart was. Soon, I found
myself toying with his pink nipples, rubbing it in a circular manner,
pinching it lightly and caressing it gently, yet teasingly till it
turned a
little hard. Did Shinya cook that food in oil or in alcohol?
*snips away Some more nipple play*
“ I can fix it…” assuring him, I unbuckled his pants, watching it slide
down
his long, pale slender legs. The pants fell on their own! They are magical pants. *__* Oooo. Aaaaa Magical~
“ But-“ I interrupted him.
“ Is it here that’s feeling strange?” I questioned him, my fingers on
the
band of his white underwear.
“ W-Wait! No!” he shook his head, pushing my hands away, shielding
himself
from me.
“ Stop! Why are you taking off my pants?” he demanded, tears of
frustration
slid down his pale, smooth cheeks.
I ignored his cries as I stripped him out of his briefs. Holy shit! Rape! Why was I not warned for this? His frail arms
pushing me away, only in vain.
“ Why are you so embarrassed? I raised you!” ...This is messed up. What about morals and society? Oh wait. Shinya got him drunk with his cooking. Come back to the AA meetings Yoshiki. We miss you. :( I tried reasoning with him
“ But-“ he protested tearfully.
“ Move your hands…I’m just going to make the pain go away…’ I looked at
his
eyes, which immediately shut when I made direct contact with him.
“ I-:” I traced circle patterns on his thighs playfully, in attempt to
shut
him up, which I succeeded in.
“ Oh!” he exclaimed softly as pre-come drip out of the head of his
penis,
onto the wooden surface of the dinning table. umm...
“ When did this start happening?” I asked him.
“ I-I’m sorry, I don’t know… ” he paused and thought for a moment.
“ It’s just that whenever I’m with you, this would start happening…” he
whispered meekly, wiping the tears from his eyes.
“ Don’t be silly, why are you crying?’ I asked him, touching his wet butt cheeks.
“ I can help you…” I let my hand fall down his face, stopping at his
semi-erect length.
“ I can make this pain go away…” I stroked his arousal repeatedly,
ascending
in speed rhythmically, before dipping my head below to lick the sticky
white
substance forming at the base of his cock. At the base?
“ No… stop…” he commanded weakly. Without hesitation, I took the whole
of
him in my mouth and started sucking on him.
“ D-dad, stop…” he pleaded. Stubbornly, I refused and continue sucking
on
him. Rape! Where's my fucking warning tag?
“ Ah- Uh….un…” he moaned as his slender hips arched forward for more,
faster
as he was reaching orgasm.
“ Ah!” he screamed as he fell back on his back.
“Nn…you see…?” I wiped his cum that dribbled down the corner of my
mouth. I
looked at him, sprawled on the table, panting, his long, sleek auburn
hair
fanning his face like an angel. His chest heaved up and down as he
breath,
his face flushed. He looked so beautiful
“ Didn’t I tell-”
“ Dad..” he flung himself at me, encircling his arms around my neck and
hugged me.
“ I… I- I love y-you…” he stuttered as he looked into my eyes, tears
streaming from the corner of his large almond shape eyes.
“ I really love you…” I was taken aback.
“ Does he know what he’s saying?” No. I thought, but I hugged him back,
tightly.
“ Shinya…” I whispered his name, loosening my tie and undoing the knot,
I
flung it across the kitchen.
But I can’t control myself…
Squeezing shut my eyes to prevent the tears from falling. Sighing, I
look up
at him.
“ Forgive me…” I croaked. Lurching towards him, I planted a kiss on his
moist cheeks before pressing my lips against his succulent pink lips,
pushing my tongue into his willing mouth.
“ Uh.. Haa…”
“ Mm…” I nibbled on his pouty lips.
“ I shouldn’t be doing this… he’s too young..” a wave of regret was
through
me. Finally. Here's the guilt sinking in. Hello Mr. Guilt. Where were you during the blowjob scene? Of course it's only regret for his young age. -_-
But I can’t control myself…
*tiny snip*
I gently lay him down the table gently as I hesitantly reached for a
bottle
of maple syrup near me. Squeezing the bottle and watch as the thick,
sticky
golden brown liquid rained on my long fingers. I squeezed the bottle
harder,
till the syrup coated my fingers messily. Ummm... I'm going to go ahead and say not a good choice of lube. Sticky, sticky, sticky.
“ Wha-” He got up, staring at me.
“ Shh…just hold still, don’t move…” I said as I placed the bottle on
the
counter. Shinya laid back in his original position, his legs spread
before
me. His neglected desire dripping down languidly. Poor, sad weeping cock. *emo penis tear*
*snip - Yoshiki preparing Shinya*
Shinya got up and rest his hand on my chest, trailing it down my
buttons and
finally resting at the top of my pants unbuttoning the button, then
zipped
it down.
“Huh..?” I looked at him, confused.%0%
0D
A
“ What do you feel, when you’re with me…? “ he asked, lowering himself,
he
knelt down on the floor, in front of me. I rested at the corner of the
table
and he held on me gently, as if not wanting to hurt me.
“ Wait, Shin-” he licked the head of my hard length, running his tongue
up
and down. I suppressed my moans but gave way to pleasure.
“ Mph… Uh…” my fingers entwined with his long, soft hair.
He’s just a kid but…
“ Ah! Uh- Uh!” I moved my hips along with his tongue.
how can I feel this way?
“ Mmm…” I shifted. I can’t take this anymore. I need to feel him. Feel
him
inside me. Now. Shinya's going to fuck Yoshiki?
“ Shinya!” I pulled him away from me by his hair. He stopped and looked
up
at me with pained expression on his face. I lifted him up by his asshole (that's got to hurt)
and
propped him on the table. He splayed his legs before me.
“ Dad?” he gasped in astonishment. I pushed him down carefully.
“ Shinya, stop being so tense, relax…” I bent over him, pressing myself
onto
his
fragile fr
ame, probing his entrance with my erect penis. He
squirmed
underneath me, kicking wildly like a little kid have a temper tantrum. You lied again author! You said that Shinya was going to fuck Yoshiki.
“ Shh…relax…” I hushed him and comb my fingers through his thick hair,
soothingly. He obeyed unwillingly and I could feel the sudden change in
him.
“ Oh…” he moaned as I moved into him, picking up speed, pushing his
legs
further apart to gain more access.
“ Mm…”
“ He’s so tight!” I thought sinfully, as his skin and his balls, slicked with sweat,
slapped against mine. I wanted more. I pushed myself further, deeper
within
him, selfishly.
“ Un… stop! This hurts!” he cried out in pain, gripping tightly onto
the
edge of the table. But I didn‘t care. Rape! Again! Isn't Yoshiki a great father? :D
“ Hold on… a-almost there…” I gasped, licking his earlobe, pleasuring
him
with my mouth as a form of compensation. As I was nearing climax, I
held on
to his length, stroking him, taunting him. His eyes widen.
“ Uh…”
“ Oh…Ooh…”
“ Wah!” white ribbons flew onto my bare chest, trickling down. I
continued
pumping into him till I came into him, filling him up. I release my
grip on
his waist and slid out of him. Kissing him on his pale, slender neck.
“ Ah! No! I can‘t-…” A bit too late, isn't it? I thought , mixed feelings surrounding my mind,
lurking
in my heart.
I don’t know what to do…
“ Ah da-..d” he arched his back for me to shower more kisses on his
moist
skin.
I really do love him…
But I didn’t expect …
“ Ha.. S-shin- Shinya..” I paused, looking at him. Shinya fluttered
his
eyes open and stared at me, as if waiting for me to speak. I gazed
lovingly
into his eyes and pushed the stray strands of butt hair, stuck onto his damp
forehead, and tucked it behind his ears.
This!!
“ Dad!” he hung his arms around my neck and pulled me closer in an
embrace.
“ I love you…” he declared softly, with a serious expression on his
face.
“ I love you too…” I replied back, circling my arms around his waist.
I thank God, and I thank that woman… for giving me this child.
“ I’m late!” Shinya buttoned his jacket hurriedly and slung his duffle
behind his shoulders as he clumsily shoved his feet down his shoes,
making
his way to the doorway, awkwardly.
Then…
“ this is all your fault!” he glared at me, his lips in a pout.
This happiness I have, I won’t let it go…
“ I’ll will just call your teachers again…and invite them over for a group orgy!” I twirled the pen with my
fingers.
“ And what will you say?” he demanded fiercely. I flashed him my penis and with a grin and
picked
up the phone.
“ Hello? Shinya won’t be in school today… there was a wedding…”
“ What?” his teacher exclaimed.
This is my sweet life…