Ooh this sounds nice, could hear this as a dungeon theme i think

i like the vibes this gives

I like what you’ve got going on around 1:09, 1:34, 1:51 and 2:10. I feel like that’s when the song really comes into its own. When it all comes together at 2:46 it sounds pretty great. That third chord (at places like 2:12) is a bold, interesting choice but maybe needs just a little more help - I think perhaps it’s colliding with the lead and the lead should adapt to that chord change.

I would consider dropping the random blips and get to the guitar and drums faster - I think it detracts from a solid idea.

I listened to it like 4 times to leave this comment - it’s an interesting piece!

I love the microtonal chippys in the beginning. The riff afterwards feels perfect for a dungeon in Link's Awakening, perhaps also because the owl imagery makes me think of the 7th dungeon (my fav in terms of music!). I dig the grungy guitar parts as well!

I like it! The song really fit the jam's theme I feel. 👍

It's pretty good! Only thing is the melody gets a bit weird at times but still nice nonetheless.

really love what you did here! hope it gets finished one day!

I love when music has a story to tell, and this song sounded like an owl taking its last flight! The instrumentation was spot on, that synth matched an owls hoot perfectly, The guitars were really good too. 

Really nice!