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There is a bug in Octavius route. I am trying to find the jabberwocky haha (please help, I cant find him or the new ones), but when you qrrive in the surgery scene, the game breaks after the 'his hand grips.you hard in response', appears the dev break, and the game stops. Anyways, I am obssessed with this game, ans I would LOVE to see the MC have a more dom x dommy route with some character or at some point, I miss seeing the MCs  in smut games having a more 'you know what, let me dom you a bit, mothafucker' for once hahah 😂. I loooove Warren and Lorian, Lorian has a  really interessing feeling on him!

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Ohhh no!!! Thankfully you can ignore the error. I'm posting another update tomorrow. So I will have this fixed!!! <3

If you have trouble finding a route, I posted a walkthrough link on the page! I do update it ;).

Glad you like the story so far!!! Hard at work on a big update <3

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best 5 dollars worth ever! Love thissss

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<3 I hope its a lot of content~ people donated so I wanted to put at least something extra

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I'm still getting through it atm so i think definitely, yes. You've done such a brilliant job! I'm in love with it :)

Can we get the game on Patreon? I can't use PayPal :(

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I recently got the option <3 so I will be soon! send me a message at soupinsoup@gmail.com

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I'm so in love with this game<333

I'm so glad you like it!! 1.0 is going to be a huge update. I really hope it's to everyone's liking <3

This appeared after the falling asleep scene with Nox, I don't know if this is the end of the current storyline or if an error occurred?

a fix has been prepared and will be up in a few minutes <3

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I noticed in the paid version during Nox's route a lot of his scenes have a "Image not found." Is this normal for right now or are the images not showing up properly? 

I had no idea, I did move to a new system. I'll check all the images and make sure it's working properly. I'll push out an update fixing this!

I don't get many bug reports so a lot go unnoticed eep

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I made a sketch of bb Warren

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holy crap this is the cutest thing ive ever seen !! :>

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I love him so much <3 amazing work!!!

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Hey, I recently downloaded the game and played a few routes. Right now I'm on Nox's route, but when I get to the bathtub scene, Nox's image gives an error saying the image wasn't found.

Thanks for letting me know! Been ironing out the bugs! I'll look through everything and fix it! <3

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Okay I'm loving Warren a normal amount, like print him out on paper and eat it amount LOL. The voice I use for him in my head is Fukuyama Jun. I love Milo as well <3 When do new patrons get links? I wanna know when to go back and check.

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I sent it out to you <3

Wahh thank you! <3

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I love the unique concept, the plot, and the characters! THIS GAME NEEDS MORE RECOGNITION I TELL YOU THAT!

THANK YOU FOR THE WORK AND EFFORT IJTO CREATING THIS GAME! The only route I tried so far was Warren:D I like his selfishness and possesiveness over the mc even when they have only met for a day lmao 

(down bad for being controlled a lil bit too much...)

LOVE IT! Not something that is seen in visual novels


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Warren's the safe route ;) the other characters can be some red flags ;) and a bit crazy ~ 

So far one is a black flag. I'm looking at possibly updating the game some time today <3

I'm so glad you like it~~~ not too many people know about it, but ive been writing it out of pure enjoyment ;) 

Slr, I just saw the reply today! Ohhhh trust me I will tell the world how much this game needs attention because I need more people I could talk through and through about this game😭🙏🙏🙏🙏 this is a master peice and is in the eyes of my affection hehe I love you so much, this is such a big brainer innovative idea 😈😈😈

<3 <3 not too many people know about it, but I'm alright with that. I'm just happy people do like it. It's a slowburn story~ it was too much for some but it depends on the individual you persue <3

Late reply. Preparing the new update :)

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Amazing :3 I love this game especially Warren route writing and Cg.... khm ...blush.. heh   And I hope there will be more Cgs of him.  But it would be good if he listened to us.  Or I would grab his ears and tie them in bows . And   sometimes  i  don't understand what he is talking about .Also   I tried other boys but immediately wanted to run away  especially Octavius  so end up back to Warren route. ( sorry my english not good)

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I'm so glad you like it~ each of them are more representing the counterparts to some extent. But not fully ;) but I figured there's someone for everyone <3 most might not be in love at first sight. But everyone's got a place <3

Warren's got a bit of tunnel vision (sees everything his way lol) Octavius is one of the more extreme characters ;) and very obsessed. Kind of a black flag instead of a red one.

I thought Octavius calm at first and i like how his look .  But later i was afraid of him . Scary doctor. I will try Nox agn. I like him 2nd but he sometimes annoying :)   Good Luck!:3 Hope to see more updates.

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I already love this so much, I can't believe I came across such amazing find^^

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So happy you.like.it <3 preping the next update~~~

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Ohhhhh the next update is here!!! I'm soo happy !!!! You are doing great 
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Gosh this game was such an amazing find!! <3 I seriously loved so many aspects of it, the biggest one being the fact that it truly lives up to its name. The yanderes are yandere-ing FR, guys!! I cannot emphasize how much I appreciate dark content that DON'T shy away from its very nature. As a veteran yandere/dark content lover, its lowkey a struggle to find quality stuff that's not half-hearted and afraid of exploring things like dubcon, noncon, somnophilia, etc. So I really love that this game does dive into those themes, and depending on the route, we get to see some sexy and unhinged stuff <3 The writing quality itself is quite good! Not too flowery, but not too simplistic, it managed to hit the sweet spot in the middle for me. Alice's Wonderland itself isn't an original concept, but imo this game managed to take advantage of this setting in a pretty creative way. Like I was genuinely into the worldbuilding and politics of such a setting. The game has some fresh takes on the character archetypes as well, they're not too cliche, and are dark and deliciously messed up in their own ways <3 

Anyways a rapid fire of all the other good things I liked: really good use of background music and sounds, it really helped set the mood for each scene, even near-silent passages played their purpose in creating a feeling of dread. Nice moody environment art. The character designs are nostalgic asf, reminds me of anime bishounen of the 2000s. Good use of special effects for the text. Also a BIG positive point: the writing takes its time with the characters and builds things up! Its unnatural imo for ALL yanderes to immediately fall for their darling and start acting all creepy from the get-go, ya know? So I highly appreciate the pacing of the routes. Also it's a nice touch to offer both an 18+ and a shorter, vanilla route for the smexy scenes, I understand not everyone might want to go all the way, and it also helps to quickly skip through when you're trying out different options. Also appreciate the ability to pick our gender instead of being gender neutral by default! The horror of having female specific anatomy is, like a whole thing of its own lmao (Nox and the doc's routes omg ><)

All the best to soapinsoup who's working so consistently on this project :D The potential here is just magnificent yall!! I'm so excited for the future! Take care of yourself dev and thank you for making this game, I love your brain <3

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I'm so glad you like it~ also giving each of them different kinks was important to me too <3 getting next big update out soon~ I'll have more information on release soon <3 but Nox's route is about to get a big update 

As for dark themes, I felt there weren't many in a lot of games, I think people are afraid to take a leap sometimes, which I understand. Part of why I made this game <3 I wanted a game with a lot of smut (since we don't have much) and I wanted to create something that takes risks <3

It ended up being far bigger than I expected!

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Super excited for the update!! I have a love-hate thingy with Nox LOL, but him being a catboy ultimately wins me over ^^; (he also kind of reminds me of Alhaitham from Genshin Impact haha). Speaking of, I kinda forgot to  mention earlier but I appreciate how you mold the personalities of guys like Warren and Nox on their animal traits, it's a neat touch imo! Makes their animal features be more than a cosmetic choice. Those lines about Warren's rabbit-y urges made me blush >< (breeding kink, anyone?). Nox's, uh, milk threat/promise also was both equally unhinged and hot. 

No exaggeration but the mere existence of a game like this, not to mention the variety of kinks offered, is like going to a restaurant for cabbage soup but then being served a 12 course Michelin star meal lmao. Like I was genuinely taken aback by how good the smut and everything else was. It's no wonder people are loving your work! I really need more people to not be afraid of taking a leap into this territory because there genuinely is a massive gap in the market. For now though, you're lowkey carrying this niche on your shoulders alone I'm afraid XD. Keep being true to yourself <3

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I'm so glad <3 sorry took me a second to write back, a bit behind on the update but a lot being added to it. With a few quality of life features <3.

Yeah I chose Alice in Wonderland due to the different thing I can do with animal traits and fetishes to match them ;), Milo is also very sneaky and can easily sneak up being the mouse. He's a very quiet character (funny how he's besties with a cat).

There's another rabbit in the game as well who's a bit out of control. He's in a future release <3 

And I played a bunch of smutty yandere games, but they felt so vanilla, especially compared to read manhua novels. It felt like everyone was too scared to take a leap. So the original plan was to create true to dark yandere romances, and very long intense smut scenes. <3 original plan was one smut scene per chapter but now it's looking like there will be many per chapter <3

If you know a game that takes the same leap, man... I want to play it lmao. I made this hoping to inspire others to take the same leap. 

I feel some risks are worth taking, as usually taking a risk leads to better results ;) and if I change anything, I risk breaking those characters.

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It's all good!! Take as much time as you want, good things need time to cook well <3 QoL additions are always a nice treat! 

Milo is one of the guys I'm curious about (he's also so pretty...), since the mouse archetype is kind of absent when people dabble in animal-based story settings. Quiet, unassuming characters who turn out to be yanderes are such an experience <3  Feels like betrayal if you know the guy for a while lmao. Him being besties with Nox is such a red flag LOL, ain't no way a sane person would willingly be around that cat >.> Also omg another rabbit?? I'm getting so spoilt <3 

I WISH I could recommend a similar game to yours, but genuinely there's nothing out there in the ether </3 I've also tried my grubby hands on all sorts of otomes over the years, but they are indeed usually vanilla and unsatisfying when it comes to yanderes. At most we get a few bad endings where we get a wee lil glimpse of all the good stuff we really want lmao. There's of course the Boyfriend to Death variety of games, but idk, I personally don't count them as otomes. 

I do hope more people take works like yours as inspiration to create their own dark otome projects in the near future! I am personally hoping to figure out how to create visual novel-style games one day, and while my writing is not the greatest, I would love to add my own little contribution to this genre I've adored for so long <3

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Muy bueno juego, pero, ¿como la prota es tan estupida aveces?

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In a sense it's based on surviving, they might not be the smartest at the start given they aren't in the best situation,  but they do need to set plans at some point. Character building is something important to me <3 and the characters will grow over time.

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Thanks so much <3 I'm so happy you enjoy it. I'm setting up for more frequent updates, removing bugs and fixing up some spelling errors. Adding cgs and different game features. Although it's nearly ready

<3

I didn't like soft yandere either, so I'm hoping to see more darker stuff pop around in the future. And yeah, I wanted at least 1 doctor, who's a bit unhinged. He's being updated again soon <3

this is a very great game, and im really hyped to finish the game. But i can't because there is an error:(

and i hope you can fixed it, because i want to read it so badly.(first time reporting a problem im sorry if i sound weird or rude;-;)

Absolutly <3 Im sending out a fix!

Tysm!<3

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<3

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Hello! I love the game and paid it on itchio to get the extra content but when i reopen the game is still showing me that i need the paid version for the +18 content. How can i fix it?

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ITs should have all the content there <3 I thought I fixed the screen. You can find it in extra stories, as well as checking the chapters menu you'll mind Lorian and Warrens POV stories <3

But Ill double check everything in case

When i go to extra stories keeps showing me this error. Can you take a look please? I reeeeeally want to read it XD

Oh I thought I fixed it ack!!! give me a moment to check 

Try redownloading it <3

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Thank you!! Love the extra stories. This game is so good!!!!! Still not able to see any of the spicy things in any of the routes and the same previous error when trying in the chapter menu though. :'( 

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uploading a fix (I was deleting the patch code but didnt completely do it ) itll be fixed in a moment.  I wasnt sure what waas being mentioned before loool

It should be fixed <3

I got a similar message very end for "new home" for warrens chapter T^T

I'll fix this immediately! <3

Fixed the issue <3

sorry but its still not working for the paid Mac vers T^T

I found the bug (I didnt realize it was some left over patch code) <3 so Im uploading the fix now that removed all the bugs <3 Sorry about this!

Don"t know if its just me but in lorians route there  one of the events you cant get Im not talking about the but rather this werid glitch if you look in the chapters section I found out there 2 types of being "processed" based on the choice you make and tried to get processed 1 so many times but no matter what choice I never got it so werid? anyone else facing this?

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Oh! I can double check it did you pursue the secret characters? 

I'll double check this! Also check the walkthrough too in case!

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Hey! Sorry to bother, but I'm a little confused. I just started the game and saw the message about needing a patch to access the NSFW content and stuff. I searched for it on your Tumblr and Patreon but couldn't find anything. I also joined the Discord, and I saw a message there saying it doesn't need the patch anymore.

So, is the version I downloaded here complete? I just wanted to make sure because I don't want to miss any content. The game sounds really fire and totally up my alley, so I'm hyped and I don't wanna miss anything✨

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Yes! Its complete <3 I removed the message but had to fix the game at some point with a backup lmao. So unfortunately I failed to notice it returned

Got it! Thank you for letting me know and that's totally understandable. From what I know, developing a game is a lot of work, so things like this happen! I'll be playing the game throughout the week and I'm so hyped!

Yay! (I didn't get notified of this reply lol) Hope you enjoy it! There's a walkthrough on this page if you need help finding routes <3

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This game is my roman empire <3.

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<3 more to come

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gosh i love your game I AM OBSESSEDDD!! this is such an cool concept idk how you even come up with it but i am a sucker for anything wonderland themed like alice in wonderland and alice in borderland. and the best part about this is i am not here just for the handsome characters or smut oh noooo IT'S THE PLOT!!!no cuz some visual novels are quite overrated with no plot and just a handsome character (no shade lol) but this? it has everything! truly a work of hard. 10/10

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It was not easy to come up with. It was actually going to be the smut first~ but then the plot really began developing~~~ <3 I did want to put a lot of different plot paths too <3

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OMGG I LOVE YOUR GAME, YOUR WORK IS SIMPLY INCREDIBLE!! I love the backgrounds and the characters, but TBH I’m obsessed with your storytelling. It’s always hard for me to get hooked on a visual novel since most don’t know how to make the plot engaging, but you totally nailed it. BTW I can’t wait for the game to be finished, best wishes for your project <33 ( andd sorry if I didn’t write my English correctly, it’s not my first language)

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I'm so glad you like it!!! I end up adding a bit more lore each time I write it ;) I wasn't originally planning deep storytelling but in the end I really got really into it~ I think the lore is a lot of fun to write <3

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I'm so happy you like it <3!!!

Its a big update so I hope you enjoy :D

Thought I should let you know that Ver.8 is not working.

Alright I'm going to double check it. Did you just download it?

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It's hard to explain since my internet is slow. But I downloaded it 30 minutes ago and when I played it, it ends on chapter one for Warren. Also I'm on windows. 

I figured it out lol <3 Im fixing it. the next upload will work!

Awesome, Thank you. Also wanted to tell you that you game is great and very fun.

I'm so happy you like it <3

Uhm where can I buy the paid version? T_T

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I'm not sure when it'll be available again. THe whole MasterCard/visa situation really messed things up. And now steam has become more difficult to release on as well. With removal of early access adult games. 

I'm going to check on gog to see if I can release it there. But unfortunately to protect the game I had to do this. :( and there's a big amount of paid content coming too ;/

Okay! Hope it goes well, I wanna play the paid version soon!!

I hope so too ;( I did release one of the short stories in a more story format on tumblr. Octavius backstory.

Feel free to check it out. You can find it in the masterpost

Wait quick question if I paid on itchio for the game will I still get access to it since you removed from ithcio and is the patreon version the paid one? so tomorrow when the new paid update is out on patreon will those who paid on itchio be given access too or just patreon members?

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Patreon is early access (it has Harlan Tatterly abduction, warren chapter 2,  part of Octavius chapter 3). It has some chapters not out yet, and still needing to be edited But given the status here things are a bit weird with the MasterCard/visa situation. I'll be sending the next paid version by email. But in case it's still a visible purchase I'll still update the file on here as well <3 it has some new paid content. I fixed a bug recently which was the quick update. But closing on the completion now <3

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Author, I just wanted to tell you that I'm so happy that you keep on working on that project! I hope all developers like yourself will overcome this difficult period.
 Btw, I wanted to ask you if you have played The Second Reproduction?
I think you would enjoy Jin's route since in some way he's a yandere character)

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Working hard on it. One more cg to touch up <3. But I progress this update daily while also prepping future ones. I hope things push forward and we can all enjoy nsfw games again. Sad a group of adults have to tell us adults what to buy....

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I might actually have it on my PC lol. I'm going to check that yandere loool

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New player here! Absolutely love the game so far and I'm actually way more curious about the lore than I thought I would be. Looking forward to see how it develops! So far my favourites are probably Lorian and Octavius, but the dynamic between Nox and Milo is also hilarious to read. 

The lore keeps developing with each chapter ;) there is some new lore coming with the upcoming chapter too! It's nearly ready (finally)

Hello

How do I get the paid version? I can't find the li k here.

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Following the itch.io removal of adult novels I had to remove it for the time being. I'll probably move it to steam but anyone who bought it here will get a key. But I'll also be emailing the paid version directly to them.

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Hi

Thanks for the reply. 

How can I buy it from you and get the key/email?

Otherwise, when is gonna be available on steam?

I love the story and the art!

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After the next update, it may take 2 weeks to release on steam <3 the new main menu is going to be finished today. So I can finish up the bad ends integration, and last bit of the code <3

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this is such a hidden gem. I love it!! The details, the storyline, the concept. I look forward for your incoming works <3


xoxo, newly found supporter

I hope you enjoy the upcoming update <3 so far it's well recieved <3

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first of all, i am completely enthralled and obsessed with this game. i stumbled on it while reading a manhwa on bato and saw it, and i’m so glad i checked it out. what an absolute hidden gem. i can see how much work and detail went into this, and i just had to write how much i loved it.

my first route was nox, and wow, what a ride. he was such a banger. the bathtub scene had me kicking my feet and blushing so hard, it was so intimate and deliciously smutty without even needing full on penetration. the power dynamic between him and the mc is so fun, playful but also serious when it counts. his interactions with the mouse guy made me laugh too. his design is gorgeous, and even though there’s objectification, which makes sense since it’s a yandere story, it still worked within the tone. i loved unlocking his kidnapped route too, something about a man making decisions for you in fictional stories lol.

next, i tried octavius. oh my god, this one felt like a full on horror game. he’s intense, like really intense, and i had to take breaks because some scenes were so heavy. but wow, his intimate scenes and dirty talk? another level. it’s dark, scary, and thrilling at the same time. definitely not for someone who wants soft romance, but if you want something intense, it’s unforgettable. i ended up going back to reread nox after though, just to calm my heart.

warren was my next route, and he’s adorable. he’s softer compared to the others, but still has an edge when he needs to. i loved his blushing moments and the cg of him laying down  with the mc. even though he knew it’d hurt him later he still lied to protect mc, it was so sweet and made my heart ache a little. he’s my second favorite for sure.

lastly, lorian. he’s cheeky, playful, and honestly really charming. i feel like he’s the most self-aware out of all the guys, and i liked that he wasn’t pretending to be something he’s not. his banter with the mc was so fun, and i loved seeing her boldness come out with him and nox. even his little moments of guilt  was a nice touch. he’s my third favorite, and i can’t wait to see more of him.

this game is everything i love about dark romance done well. it’s bold, it’s a little scary, it’s thrilling, and it made me feel so many things. i’m so excited to see what other routes or updates come out in the future. i’m honestly happy to support you however i can. seriously, this game deserves way more attention.

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I'm so glad you liked it <3 there is one more route in Lorians, a secret one with the twins if you interact with them, it all depends if you check the bed or not ;) I'm finishing up Warren's chapter 2 which is currently on Patreon. But also it's a pretty big update as I prepare the steam launch <3 

thanks for letting me know about the secret route and warren's route! def will be checking that out after i get my paycheck soon hehe. ty again for creating this masterpiece and hard work. i fs will be keeping an eye out for the steam launch ahhh so excited !!!!

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