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Where People Used To Be's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Storytelling | #106 | 3.545 | 3.545 |
| Creativity | #116 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Composition | #118 | 3.568 | 3.568 |
| Impression | #119 | 3.455 | 3.455 |
| Overall | #131 | 3.427 | 3.427 |
| Quality | #194 | 3.068 | 3.068 |
Ranked from 44 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
The game I envisioned in my head, after much deliberation, was actually not a type of game ive ever played personally. As I find that most of my favorite games have shallow or repressed stories and focus time into the gameplay aspect.
A Walking Simulator
I couldn't look at the combination prompt and see anything interactive or an objective to complete. I hardly even saw an avenue for growth outside of blanket curiosity for the material.
In this game, you play as someone insignificant to the plot alone in a town which once harbored the regular hustle and bustle of common folk. They worked a job, used the land around them, made food, and gathered together for festivities. String lights and lounge chairs by the beach where the elderly would talk about their past, the men and women would fish, and the children would socialize in play. All of this no longer exist, as there are no people in this town, rather, just echos that there used to be.
The player will navigate the map and stumble across projections of the sights and sounds of the people who inhabited this place before. Throughout the snippets of story, the player will slowly start to hear murmurs from the echos of townsfolk indicating that some great upcoming excursion was taking place. More and more people unsure or unwilling to take this great journey with the rest of the town slowly being reminded of their importance and value, ultimately causing even the most stubborn old folk to embark on an expedition by sea to join a bigger population.
There is no great mystery, there is no impending disaster, there is only a community of people who once used this space gone to seek out bigger communities and grow a larger and more loving family.
Message from the artist
I used a blend of Minecraft OST and some of the work of Takashi Yoshimatsu's compositions for piano and strings to plot out these tracks.
This is my first time composing complete songs, and two of them to boot! I am a percussionist and had to learn how to write for stringed instruments and horns throughout this jam. Following numerous YouTube videos and hours lost to experimentation, I came up with these two songs and barely completed the arrangements and setting relative volumes (Which I botched) before the submission timeline closed.
Theme

How does it fit the theme?
On watching the prompt appear for the jam, I felt a disconnect between what was said and what was shown: "One Summer Night" originally instills the feeling in me that this should be a fun, upbeat, high energy piece. When I think of summer, I am flooded with memories of nature, heat, togetherness, comfort, putting aside responsibility for the sake of self fulfilment to an extreme. I spent my time leading up to the jam listening to high energy and technically complex music from many of my favorite artist and games, so at face value, this prompt seemed like it could match. The Image posted along side the prompt left a deep schism between my understanding of the prompt and initial creative ideas. When viewing the image, I spent a decent amount of time taking in the colors and pieces, coming to a final conclusion that this doesn't look like a summer night. This looks like dawn falling on a lonely sea; somber. I see a singular person, seemingly lost in thought, with larger/baggy clothing as if preparing for a chill. She is standing under lights on a pier providing a warm glow with minimal surfaces to bounce from minus the dark wood of the pier and the surface of the water. To me this feels almost isolated, a bit cold, and out of place. Where are the people? Where are the boats? I couldnt help shake the feeling that this is a place where people used to be, but now sits abandoned. Someone saw this stretch of water and decided to build this tower extending out over the ocean like the first step of a staircase. Someone had to have ran wire from a main vein to power the lights shining down. Someone had to have thought this point important enough to install lights in the first place for night use. Where are the people or old rope or fishing line or nets or chairs? I oftentimes struggle with understanding my emotions so I brought the two pieces to my wife (a non-musician, but much more vividly articulates her feelings) and asked her for an opinion on what she feels with both of those pieces together. She said that in terms of games that made her feel something similar, she brought up Animal Crossing, Stardew Valley, and Undertale. We both listened to a few of the songs she felt were relevant, I couldn't help but shake the feeling that these songs perfectly encapsulated the written theme, but did not touch on the image itself. When I told her my feelings about this disconnect, she basically just said: "Well, it is up to interpretation", in a manner that actually suggested: "Perhaps you are just wrong." - Point Taken and probably true (She made the cover art for me so she is also correct by default)
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://soundcloud.com/ryan-ringo-179352904/sets/ost-composer-jam-8?si=9726b6e4d56d4f04903806f31bbd337f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
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Comments
Gathering the town - Lots going on. The composition is very exciting! Sounds like some of these might be free orchestral instruments, which are hard to get under control so I understandthe comments mentioning balance and mixing. One thing I noticed is that the level of an instrument was ok but they had really high attack, especially strings. I really like all the space you've left, all the ideas can breathe and are very impactful.
Where people used to be - There's some really complex rhythms in the piano that are really exciting when you hear them against the other instruments but it's a little confusing to the listener when it's isolated at the beginning. I really like the left hand piano writing towards the end, reminds me of the piano in breath of the wild, like the horse riding music.
Gathering the town - Lots going on. The composition is very exciting! Sounds like some of these might be free orchestral instruments, which are hard to get under control so I understandthe comments mentioning balance and mixing. One thing I noticed is that the level of an instrument was ok but they had really high attack, especially strings. I really like all the space you've left, all the ideas can breathe and are very impactful.
Where people used to be - There's some really complex rhythms in the piano that are really exciting when you hear them against the other instruments but it's a little confusing to the listener when it's isolated at the beginning. I really like the left hand piano writing towards the end, reminds me of the piano in breath of the wild, like the horse riding music.
I imagine this OST playing in a town-building JRPG — it feels very whimsical and cozy.
Really good work!
Thank you a ton for the listen! I never thought of that specifically but when you phrase it that way, yeah I can kind of see a town building RPG in this. I really am glad it was able to evoke a feeling at all so thank you again for taking the time to let me know! im still learning so this is a good way to place an identity on a style of music I can create
First of all congrats on submitting your music to the jam! I know how nerve wracking it can be to show such personal work to other strangers on the internet. For this soundtrack being your first finished tracks it's really really good. You obviously have a sense for orchestration, there's a lot of musical ideas that really gel together and make those songs a very enjoyable listening experience. As mentioned in other comments, there are some technical aspects to be aware of like balance and playing with the dynamics, but that comes with just doing and doing and doing and- you get my point :D Baby steps. (also I can recommend Marc Jovani's yt channel @cinematiccomposing, there's a ton of useful videos to learn from)
I really hope you keep creating because you have something special going on here, I'll be hoping to see you in the next jam!
PS Please give the kitty some skritches from me :)
Thank you a ton for the kind words on this! Will do. I plan to continue creating and honing whatever I got here. Im still a little unsure of what exactly it is I made, I was just kind of following what felt good or what I would sing in the shower and then trying to enhance it with other instruments.
I appreciate your listen!
PS: the deed has been done
Gathering The Town: From the intro I already knew i'd love this one. This has a certain flair that reminds me of tracks from Illusion of Gaia (an OST I really like.) Love that piano sound and the percussion choices.
Where People Used To Be: Really like the glockenspiel use. Almost starts feeling like an anthem around 2:00, the big percussion really enhances this feel.
I like your sense for percussion. Nice work!
Thank you so much for taking a listen! i loved your work so this is big praise. I am really glad there were good things found in both tracks. The Illusion of Gaia OST is a great recommendation and I plan on giving it a listen through as I try to figure out a bit more of my musical identity. This orchestration was a week long adventure and I still dont really know how or where this puts me as a composer or who even to reference since this was a blend of a couple different styles and not closely following 1 specifically. Its big news to find people who I can aim at to help hone some of what I have built here so thank you a ton!.
A very chill and relaxing soundtrack. While the VSTs needed a little bit more finesse, the compositions are quite nice and suit the atmosphere of the game. Nice work!
Thanks a ton for hearing it out! i fully agree and I got a lot of good recommendations for VSTs with actual dynamics haha. Next time at least I know It should be better. I appreciate you hearing it out and im glad you enjoyed the compositions and storytelling!
Thanks a ton again!
absolute PEAK!!!!
You are literally flattering me. I just pushed a bunch of buttons on a keyboard and it made some funny little music.
Thank you so much for giving it a listen! It means the world that someone else even likes it!
Also ill give yours a listen here soon as well i promise! Thank you again!
I think a few other people have commented on the general sound of the instruments and production and how that could be improved so I'll just focus on the stuff I liked...which was a lot!
I will say that the simplistic feel of the instruments themselves and the production does actually give it a slight PSOne sample-based JRPG soundtrack feel to me, which I really enjoy. There were definitely some moments in track 1 where I could feel that energy and excitement coming through, almost like battle music.
Track 2 has more of a lengthy build to it and there's a lot to like about your composition style. Also really liked the background sound design on this one too.
Really nice work, especially considering you have not done this before. I feel like you've got an ear for it so would love to hear more as you keep honing your style!
Thank you a ton for the listen!
Throughout the process of making these, I was reading articles and watching youtube videos for how writing for strings works and I essentially found a lot of people who were writing for strings, but for stringed instrument players. They would say things like "Its really demoralizing for a bass player to receive 3 pages of whole notes. If you want long pads thats fine but basses can play the melody too. Make sure you give everyone a turn"
This kinda felt like it was unrelated for a day or so before I started to think "Well, I know im not writing for people, but what if I wrote like I wanted people to play my music?" and that became the basis for how both pieces were composed. I tried not to move past 3 musical ideas at a time and kept the energy up by raising the notes of lower instruments instead of the higher pitched solo strings. I kind of adopted the same mentality for track 1 with horns, but I used to be a jazz drummer so the conversations between instruments felt like it came intuitively. The hard part was really just making sure that all the instruments were having fun playing.
I learned that mid way through the composition week and that seemed to shape the rest of the tracks. Im really glad that you found something enjoyable in listening to these songs! I really thought coming in that my composition was going to be a weaker aspect.
That's a really nice way to look at composition and I can totally see it in the music now you've pointed that out!
Whoa! Your music a quite impressive for someone just embarking on their composing adventures. You have great intuition when it comes to the pacing, phrasing, putting ideas together in general. There are some fleeting moments of bitonality, a refreshing approach, and fits your interpretation of the prompts. The sudden shift in texture at 2.25 in Where People Used to Be is really effective. You wrote some wonderful conversations between the instruments, like the melodic interplay between the horns and stings in Gathering the Town around 1.10 and 1:30. Your instrumentation is ambitious at this level. Congratulations on pulling off such a big endeavor.
Thank you a ton! Yeah this represents a lot of first for me. I really appreciate the praise coming from you! your music was really inspiring to hear and I am super glad to be told that im doing something correctly. I was really leaning into my intuition here and was afraid of much the opposite reaction from listeners, but this really does instill way more confidence than I should be allowed to have. You certainly make me proud of this little work.
Thank you a ton for listening!
I certainly hear the percussionist in this composition, but for someone who has never composed a full song before, I wouldn't have known otherwise if you hadn't have said it! The soft and airy piano sits nicely at the top of what else is going on in the track. I wouldn't say you botched the volume by any means, but that brass in the second track is preeeetty bumpin lol. It's not a game breaker, though. Keep practicing your composition and production - I would say that you clearly have a knack for it! Just keep making songs and experimenting - even if they don't sound the way you wanted or didn't quite pan out, you will get better every time you do it! Nice job on your submission and looking forward to what you could bring to the table next jam!
Thank you so much for this! Yeah i fully agree that brass kinda comes in like the koolaid man.
I am really delighted to hear that! I thought for sure I was making some really entry level mistakes with the whole set so its been quite surprising to see so many people enjoy my arrangement. I cant express how happy that has made me and I have more confidence now to learn the stuff getting in the way of better work now that its been pointed out.
Thank you for taking the time to listen at all!
Good job on taking the most important thing away from this jam: your wife is correct by default.
Its true its true! Im not right about many things, but when I am, Im actually not
A short but sweet submission! These tracks were delightful, especially for a first foray into composing full songs.
Thank you so much! this is high praise for me. I was really worried coming in that there were going to be some pretty major problems with the arrangements that I just wasnt skilled enough to pick out, but ive been consistently and pleasantly surprised by the people who seemed to like it! It means the world to me that I created something that anyone but me was able to listen to and enjoy.
Thank you tons again!
I already gave you some feedback in the server, so all I will say is: cat!
Thank you again for the feedback earlier today! I appreciate it greatly and 100% agree with you!