...All the way up until Tani's section in this installment. It was dreadful. It was the anti-Telwynium section of Telwynium. No flow. Tricky. Literally hard to navigate.
I didn't need a walkthrough until this section. What a letdown.😞
One thing I remember specifically is that there was a dialogue option with the mage in the maze-city that had to be selected after doing a something, and gave a different result before doing a something. The thing is, the exact dialogue option's text remains the same, so I never thought of trying it again.
There were several instances like this: the game's logic was not at fault, just some fiddly mechanical issues.
Wowww. I just played all three chapters and I got to say I was really impressed by the artworks, the music, and above all the breathtaking story, especially in this third chapter. Thank you very much for creating this - and making it available for poor folks like me. I just really love your work (as well as Alluvium and Peridium that I did recently too). Can't wait to get The Drifter, as soon as it releases and I'm able to purchase it !!
This instalment was much more complex than the previous ones, perhaps in part due to the amount of time you were able to sacrifice on it. Combined with the changing narration and motivations of each protagonist it made this one the best thus far. Whatever the reasons, you still outdid yourself, so bravo. If you opt to bundle the each book into a complete novel to sell on Steam eventually as you have deliberated doing (rather than how it is currently, something that can be played for free, for which the following criticism cannot reasonably be leveied against it) I hope that you will consider cleaning up the occasional oversight or very minor grammatical error that slipped into earlier episodes - which may only exist due to the time constraints imposed upon you, and that you were making it out of the goodness of your heart. Thank you for your diligence otherwise and overall nice work!
Cheers, I was definitely over-ambitious with this one, mainly because I'd spent a year thinking of ideas and had too much stuff to cram in to set up the next one ha ha. And yeah, I'd do a fix/polish pass for any combined steam version. If you have more specific feedback it'd be helpful for sure! Can email me dave at powerhoof.com if you dont want to here ;)
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This game - and the other games of 'The Telwynium' are absolutely fantastic.
However, there's a bug with one of the NPCs in the city.
Cheers :) What's the bug you found?
When you add the mud to the quicklime on the bridge with a plank, the NPC on the other side repeats their dialogue.
I love The Telwynium saga!
...All the way up until Tani's section in this installment. It was dreadful. It was the anti-Telwynium section of Telwynium. No flow. Tricky. Literally hard to navigate.
I didn't need a walkthrough until this section. What a letdown.😞
What happened? I could go through just fine.
Is there anything specific that bothers you?
One thing I remember specifically is that there was a dialogue option with the mage in the maze-city that had to be selected after doing a something, and gave a different result before doing a something. The thing is, the exact dialogue option's text remains the same, so I never thought of trying it again.
There were several instances like this: the game's logic was not at fault, just some fiddly mechanical issues.
game so good i think i might read wheel of time
Would love to see a physical copy with all 3 books!
Wowww.
I just played all three chapters and I got to say I was really impressed by the artworks, the music, and above all the breathtaking story, especially in this third chapter. Thank you very much for creating this - and making it available for poor folks like me.
I just really love your work (as well as Alluvium and Peridium that I did recently too). Can't wait to get The Drifter, as soon as it releases and I'm able to purchase it !!
Thanks!!
This instalment was much more complex than the previous ones, perhaps in part due to the amount of time you were able to sacrifice on it. Combined with the changing narration and motivations of each protagonist it made this one the best thus far. Whatever the reasons, you still outdid yourself, so bravo. If you opt to bundle the each book into a complete novel to sell on Steam eventually as you have deliberated doing (rather than how it is currently, something that can be played for free, for which the following criticism cannot reasonably be leveied against it) I hope that you will consider cleaning up the occasional oversight or very minor grammatical error that slipped into earlier episodes - which may only exist due to the time constraints imposed upon you, and that you were making it out of the goodness of your heart. Thank you for your diligence otherwise and overall nice work!
Cheers, I was definitely over-ambitious with this one, mainly because I'd spent a year thinking of ideas and had too much stuff to cram in to set up the next one ha ha. And yeah, I'd do a fix/polish pass for any combined steam version. If you have more specific feedback it'd be helpful for sure! Can email me dave at powerhoof.com if you dont want to here ;)