I loved this,  5/5 Narrative, I loved the loop back to the start at the end of the story.

The way the home screen changes and the timekeeper remembers your previous game when you start it again is an awesome meta detail. That the timekeeper's powers transcend even runs of the game.

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As a way to improve this already great game, maybe you could give the player a bit more of an ability to make choices that effect the story e.g. defying the timekeeper repeatedly or refusing to give the curse to your past self could break the cycle.

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Great to see that I wasn't the only one using python for the game jam either (your code looks a lot nicer than mine haha, my code quality always goes downhill when I have to rush out such a short project).

I will give you 5 for artwork that all I can do haha so amazing.
If possible, can you please vote my game and leave a comment too? 

Really nice how the loop was incorporated into the story. Everything ties back into itself. Normally dont play visual novels (and its rare to see one in a jam) but this one held my interest the entire time which made it nice to go through. Audio and visuals were great and complemented the gameplay really well. Tbh don't have much else to say about it its just solid

Amazing story! The art and music are really good.
Well done!

It's been a long time since I played a story-driven game. I didn't read the game's description, so when the circular structure of the plot was revealed, it felt really great. It reminded me of a similar game I played before, Remember11 (which also had a similar ingenious design). All in all, such a well-crafted story made in such a short time! Good job

The artwork is absolutely beautiful! Story is interesting as well! It could use some more decisions, maybe some pseudo branching paths that all lead back to the same place to keep the loop going to give that feeling of hope, before replacing it with despair for our Ms. Misfortune. Though regardless that was very enjoyable! Well done!

A narrative game is always a nice change of pace in these jams! Nice self contained loop story! Gently creepy! Like the … New Game +. lol. Good entry.